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Feb 20, 2019 at 12:34am
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Edited: February 20, 2019 at 12:35am
Re: Re: Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Measuring the line
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
I was so intent on trying to keep the poem near 10 lines I couldn't see the forest for the trees. The poem at 11 lines didn't feel finished. I've revised it and expanded to a Blank Verse Sonnet. I hope you have the time to revisit. It feels better now.

~~Tink

"Arlington Park - Discussion Measuring the Line" 
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DISCUSSION: Measuring the line · 02-18-19 4:59pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Measuring the line · 02-18-19 10:36pm
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Re: Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Measuring the line · 02-19-19 6:50am
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Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Measuring the line · 02-19-19 11:27am
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Re: Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Measuring the line · 02-19-19 2:43pm
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*Star* Re: Re: Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Measuring the line · 02-20-19 12:34am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Measuring the line · 02-20-19 9:09am
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Re: DISCUSSION: Measuring the line · 02-21-19 3:16am
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Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Measuring the line · 02-21-19 9:10am
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Re: Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Measuring the line · 02-21-19 10:34am
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