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Mar 11, 2019 at 9:37pm
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Re: Building a trellis for your word pictures
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
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OH! I used to know her.

AFTER ALL

After all the time and love we shared,
Berating me, my soul you bared.
Could you now stop, be quiet a while?
Debit your face that silly smile.
Echoing your story much too long.
Face the truth say you did me wrong.
Get on with life, say your good byes.
Haven’t you ran out of your lies?
I think you’ve caused trouble enough.
Just made you out of the wrong stuff.
Kindly go, before you hurt others.
Leave this place return to gutters.
Many are sick of the stories you tell.
No one believes the tales you sell.
Open your mouth and feel the fear.
Pretending some would shed a tear.
Quit your lies and crying the blues.
Rest if you will but your mouth glue.
So long I’ll say when you head south.
Time will pass, no more of your mouth.
Unless you change no one will grieve.
Venomous lies told to deceive.
Why did you think none would slip?
Xylophonists play without their lips.
You, I’ll bet didn’t know it’s a mall.
Zero your rated after all.


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Building a trellis for your word pictures · 03-11-19 5:40pm
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
*Star* Re: Building a trellis for your word pictures · 03-11-19 9:37pm
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
Re: Re: Monty's Building a trellis for your word pictures · 03-12-19 10:25am
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Re: Building a trellis for your word pictures · 03-11-19 11:43pm
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Re: Re: Lisa's Building a trellis for your word pictures · 03-12-19 10:28am
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Re: Tink’s Building a trellis for your word pictures · 03-12-19 11:16pm
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Re: Re: Tink’s Building a trellis for your word pictures · 03-13-19 11:05am
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