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Aug 19, 2019 at 5:59pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Jayne's Form of the week: Kural
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
*Dollar* 200 GPs were sent to Jayne Author Icon with this post.
Depends on who your intended audience is. The alliteration of "fall, frigid" produces a playful rhythm which children would probably enjoy more. The "autumn" version is closer to the poetic traditions of the form, which more mature academic enthusiasts would appreciate.

and I really appreciate extending these discussions! *Bigsmile*

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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