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Dec 31, 2019 at 3:33pm
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Re: Monty's DISCUSSION: Rhyme Time
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*Laugh* You got that right: "Poetry does not sell very well."

Your composition is missing the interlocking rhymes in the second line of each stanza.

Thank you for your continuing generosity!

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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