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Re: Lisa's Form of the week: Garden Lace
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*Dollar* 200 GPs were sent to Lisa Noe Author Icon with this post.
Cute!

One minor issue: The second line of the last stanza should rhyme with lines one and three of the first stanza in order to close the circle.

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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