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Mar 5, 2020 at 11:16am
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Re: DISCUSSION: Finding Your Voice
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
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WHEN I WAS YOUNG.

The spider was made of wax,
I hit him twice with my ax.
He felt no pain I was sure
'Til red wax ran on the floor.
~
That wax turned into a Knight
Looking ready for a fight,
Quickly raising blade and shield,
Giving me no chance to yield.
~
I ran quickly for the door
'Cause real pain I can't endure.
He hit me with a mighty blow
So I jumped out the window.


What do you mean you don't believe it?
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DISCUSSION: Finding Your Voice · 03-02-20 4:32pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Finding Your Voice · 03-03-20 7:59pm
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Re: Jayne's DISCUSSION: Finding Your Voice · 03-04-20 1:53pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Finding Your Voice · 03-03-20 9:08pm
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Re: Lisa's DISCUSSION: Finding Your Voice · 03-04-20 1:57pm
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*Star* Re: DISCUSSION: Finding Your Voice · 03-05-20 11:16am
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Re: Monty's DISCUSSION: Finding Your Voice · 03-05-20 1:06pm
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Re: Re: Monty's DISCUSSION: Finding Your Voice · 03-06-20 9:25am
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Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Finding Your Voice · 03-08-20 5:19pm
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