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Jul 3, 2021 at 7:48pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Expanding Awareness
Trying to catch up!


A Humble Chore


I’ve always liked washing dishes.
When I was a kid, I didn’t mind
that assignment. We didn’t have
an automatic dishwasher. Heck,
we had a sink and soap and water.

Now, I have a great dishwashing
machine. But sometimes, I wash
the dishes by hand. As I place
forks and spoons and dishes
and bowls into the hot, soapy
water, I think about my mom.
She washed lots of dishes in her
life … only to wash them again
and again. Did she get tired of
that never-ending chore? Did
my grandmother and my
great grandmother?

That chore -- those sinks full of
hot water are a soapy river
connecting the women in my
family, those women who married,
raised kids, cooked and cleaned for
their families, women who had
dreams and goals and felt joy
and pain and wonder,
women who found their bliss
and those who foundered.

Dishwashing, a most humble
and necessary job, one that
bridges my family’s generations.



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prompt: Write a poem about some everyday task. Turn your imagination loose to guide your powers of association into several levels of awareness.

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