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Re: Jake's It Was in September Pantoum Poem
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First stanza is missing a line. Plug in "I met my fate."

First and third lines of fourth stanza should repeat second and fourth lines of third stanza.

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It Was in September Pantoum Poem · 03-28-22 7:34pm
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