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Apr 1, 2022 at 9:37am
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Re: Form of the week: Huitain

Locomotion

Have you considered all the feet
that tromp along the ground each day?
Through weather – rainy, cold, and heat –
they always seem to find their way.
From frog to mule, from kid to jay
are helpful feet with hoof or toe.
Traversing mud and sand and clay,
they move along, the brisk and slow.



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Poet’s Place Café prompt: Huitain form (eight lines with a rhyme scheme of ababbcbc and either eight or ten syllables per line)

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Form of the week: Huitain · 03-31-22 7:33am
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