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Mar 13, 2023 at 2:51pm
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Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Moments of Truth
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
Nice poem Dave, you need to share more. And thank you for the Frost poem. I thought I had read them all but I don't remember reading this one. Reading it aloud, the sonics are amazing.

The Haunting

Words replay in my mind,
I hear them clearly.
A moment's pause, a kinder phrase,
I could have said more, or less.
Too late, it's said, no rewrites now.
So why does it haunt me?

I tell myself, it's in the past.
We've made amends, life moved on,
and yet, I see, I hear,
that moment when . . . . .
again and again.
                   ~~Judi Van Gorder

"The HauntingOpen in new Window.
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DISCUSSION: Moments of Truth · 03-13-23 12:34pm
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
*Star* Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Moments of Truth · 03-13-23 2:51pm
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Re: Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Moments of Truth · 03-13-23 4:20pm
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
Re: DISCUSSION: Moments of Truth · 03-14-23 8:06pm
by WriterAngel Author IconMail Icon
Re: WriterAngel's DISCUSSION: Moments of Truth · 03-15-23 11:53am
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