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Mar 18, 2023 at 11:33pm
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Re: Snow's Re: Form of the week: English/Shakespearean S...
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Hi Snow, Loved the imagery and most important your sonnet sings. Dave's right, you missed the iambic pentameter element but at least your lines were all 10 syllables. Other than that, this is a beautiful Shakespearean Sonnet.

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Form of the week: English/Shakespearean Sonnet · 03-16-23 5:07pm
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Re: Form of the week: English/Shakespearean Sonnet · 03-16-23 11:17pm
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Re: Snow's Form of the week: English/Shakespearean Sonnet · 03-17-23 9:58am
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Re: Form of the week: English/Shakespearean Sonnet · 03-17-23 11:03am
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Re: Monty's Form of the week: English/Shakespearean Sonnet · 03-17-23 4:31pm
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Re: Form of the week: English/Shakespearean Sonnet · 03-17-23 2:36pm
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Re: Tink's Form of the week: English/Shakespearean Sonnet · 03-17-23 6:29pm
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