Chapter #5Hypnosis / Mind Control by: Zone   The Meteor was an object of great power, but it was designed for one person, so when four people touched it, the boys all gained part of the power, but not the full power. Blue light flashed when their fingers touched the stone and the force sent them flying back for a moment. As they lay there with their heads pounding, they felt information flood their thoughts.
You have the power to control others by staring into their eyes. However, the power has been shared among all of you, so each of you can only control one person at a time. Should you attempt to control someone else, anyone previously under your control will be free. They won’t remember your commands at all, but will still deal with any consequences of what they did. This applies to all lasting orders. You won’t be able to control someone who is already under the control of another.
The boys sat up and looked at each other.
“Did you guys hear that?” Cardin asked.
“We get mind control powers!” Russel laughed. “This is fucking awesome!”
“But limited to one each at a time?” Sky pouted. “I should have touched the rock first.”
“Don’t be an ass,” Dove shook his head. “I mean, if this works, think of all the fun we can have. Just make sure when you're done with a girl, have her forget everything. All this means is you can't have a harem all at once."
“Hot girls at our beck and call, revenge against those who wronged us,” Cardin counted on his fingers. “Any fun we desire, really.” He chuckled at the thought. “Oh, this is going to be fun.”
“Think we should call dibs?” Russel asked. “I know we all have preferences.”
“Question is, who gets Pyrrha and Yang?” Sky asked. “I know we’re all going to be fighting over them.”
“Nah, my goal is to get Goodwitch,” Dove said, causing all the boys to look at him. “What? I like MILFs, and she’s got a fucking killer body. Doesn’t mean I won’t play with others, but I want her primarily.”
“I don’t care,” Cardin shook his head. “Though I can probably pass on Pyrrha…”
“You just want a Faunus girl.” Russel accused.
“What the fuck?” Cardin spun around. “Why do you think I want an animal?”
“We’ve all seen the Faunus porn under your bed,” Sky sighed. “It’s cool, man. We don’t kink shame here. It was obvious why you bullied Velvet.”
“Well if you don’t then tell me your kink, asshole.” Cardin crossed his arms.
“I want to control rich girls and make them sexy slaves,” Sky shrugged. “Imagine Weiss or Coco being made to clean up after us, then when they are tired, fuck them like dirty sluts.”
“Okay, so Dove’s into MILFs, Sky’s into rich girls, and I like Faunus girls,” Cardin relented. “Okay Russel, you’re up. No getting out of this.”
“I’m not sure what kind of girl I want,” Russel rubbed his neck. “I’m into a lot of different types. So I’ll keep my options open now.”
“We aren’t limited to one type, but we get priority,” Cardin stated firmly. “We can help each other if we have to.”
“Should we go try it out then?” Sky asked eagerly.
“I don’t see why not.” Cardin shrugged. “Meet back at the dorm with the first girl you can get. Try not to be seen. Our dorm may be out of the way, but people might notice us bringing everyone there.”
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