Some how this man, even with his messy disposition was quite intimidating. Maybe it was his well-known reputation for failing kids for less than a bad paper. Or perhaps it was simply that he was a mean old man.

Breathing heavy [heavily]

“Sit down[,] David.”

in front of Prof. Herald’s desk

David didn’t think it mattered too much since most of the walls were covered with either bookshelves too full or awards and degrees

“No. You can rewrite the paper.”

the forest below awaited her, hungrily.

has stood the test of time[s] as a

The movie bears a unique insight into the gradual madness of its protagonist, as well as the relationship he shares with friends.

Nevertheless, Shakespeare’s catastrophic collision of cacophonous characters with their controversial conspiracies needs more precision to bring out their counterfeit charms, or lack thereof

While the dumbing-down of this teen movie clone neutralizes some of the confusion of the original, the loss of Shakespeare’s flowery dialogue, replaced by upper class white kid pseudo-ghetto Ebonics, flattens out in an attempt to develop emotion through the use of body language and innuendo.

leaving the ambitious Iago, an experienced veteran of numerous engagements, to the dicey position of Ancient. While it is still an honored position, one whose possessor has the ear of the general, it is not what Iago feels is due him, and he resents that

This is one of Shakespeare’s greatest failings in “Othello,” that he insinuates that Othello is a great man, and his love for Desdemona is real, but the reader never really gets deeply involved in the proof of these allegations

Othello had not lost affection for his friend. Othello cannot instantly forgive him because

In Heaven, everything is fine.

Oh, how I long for such a Heaven,

Where you've got your nice things,

And I've got mine.

It's the ultimate ending.

The ultimate beginning.

She feels so trapped,
She feels so lost.
She was so much in love,
Now her life is the cost.

He says, "I need ...[to]...She just lies there alone.

Looking down, she could see a curiously symmetric shape to how the rebar had been torn: not merely pulled up but to the right as well. She smiled at it, at the bones and glow of her soul showing through her skin. Everything came up and out, like the central swirl of a galaxy. It was the center of everything, of the universe.

You’re off in your own head too much, Geode had said. Do something. Come do something out in the world.

“Do not consider that you are being judged only across the table, or based upon the exam results. You are judged every instant of your stay in your school, your college, a company you enter to appear for an interview or anywhere. Never waste even a second of your precious time doing something which may not improve you in any way.”

Anand Niketan School of foreign languages

[Toady Today], we are going to talk on interviews

If I sound that way, [I may be it may be] sub-consciously

My grandma and father looked at each other and it was a feeling so intense that the room seemed to be scary. The room fell silent just for a second and nobody spoke. Akka broke in.

“Come on then! What are we waiting for? So, people! We from the Bholu and Akanksha detective agency are right on to the work,” and the room filled with laughter again.

So did my father and so are we, [till to] date.

Blog prepared to beam down to earth. He wore his standard issue shiny, silver shipsuit that sparkled in the sun.

“Boom-da-ba-wrooo?”

The point is[;] you just never know who[,] or what[,] you’ll meet on Earth.

My peaceful sensation
Is anger instead
I feel like I am falling
Through a life in this world

eg., "Red[,] I am seeing"

don’t stress over structure, don't fret about flow,
use thoughts you don’t have and words you don’t know.

"Good use of rhythm; the meter galloped along at beautifully flowing pace, enhancing the weight of words which you sought to convey."

I’m constructing a poem in a strategic new way.
So they won’t comprehend what I’m trying to say.

When I noticed a pattern, a key to their prose[, :}
it's illogical thoughts in unorganized rows.

I’ve discovered the secret it takes to succeed[, ;]
don’t stress over structure, don't fret about flow,

courtesan. Her friend, Michelle, had picked it out.

Her red hair spilled around her shoulders[, and] her stomach was showing and the skirt had slits up the side showing enough

"Hello[," h]is voice was

"Yes[,] and [your you're] Alec, right?" - proof reading for correct word use is sometimes difficult as our eyes can skim read. I find it best to read each paragraph from the bottom of the piece up. That way the story doesn't get in the way.

"No[,] you just surprise me is all." She couldn't stop looking at him.
"Come[,] we'll dance."

he pulls back and looks her in the face

She could see he wanted to kiss her. She wanted it to[o] and it shocked

He tasted to so.} - ?

she had ever[y] saw.