Good Morning,
A descriptive of an old dog.
Due to old age this dog lost the energy and the enthusiasm to.move around.
Just like humsn beings dogs health in usually deteriorate when getting very old.
Sad to see this man's best friend getting old and sickly.
Good Morning,
The heart speaks.
A poem with much longing for his parents.
The parents that with open arms and joyful heart always welcome a son to the Home Sweet Home.
A free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
Very touching too
Good Morning
Yes.. what to do with this jammed door ?
Better dial the number of your friends to come and help solve this..or let it be..
A poem that is nicely written about this particular problem.
Just temporary..surely there is a solution to this.
A poem so truthful .
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Descriptive of an" Old Door " that served its purpose for many years
.
The written words and lines fit for the given title.
The last stanza makes the poem Joyful with teo children Around.
Nice story behind the well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Write on.
Good Morning
The last line proves that this is truly a money making business.This is well written and very convincing but in the end I find it very expensive too.
Hahaha
Better spend the one hundred dollars for other purpose.
A very realistic story.
Great writing.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
Gone too soon.
A special message to a dearest father..
The poem also exoresses a message about life, forgiveness, love and more great aspects in living.
A great poem all the way.
The title is very inspiring..
Teach Us Through Forgiveness And Love
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that is very meaningful.
The title is captivating
Sacred Silence
Yes.. Silence is Sacred.
Wonderful lines that fit for the given title.
The las5 three lines are my favorite lines that serve as a brilliant conclusion of this well written poetry.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
Hahaha
" Here we go agsin"
Amusing conclusion.
Reading between the lines makes me very curious about rat Number 6725
due to his unique reaction of bsnging
his head.
Then Xander. and Sebastian trying to figure the
Mouse Code
Interesting and funny.
Write On
Good Evening,
A Love Poetry with a very loving titie
You Fill My Heart
A poem from the heart.
The written lines prove how much you love and Care for this Specisl person in your life.
A joyful free verse poetry that has a good flow.
It is truly wonderful to love and be loved.
Thank You for the great read
Write on.
Good Evening
A Nicely written short poetry about sports and some bad hapoenings that cause problems and making some people or putting some people in bad light due to their unpleasant deeds. Just like politics too
A poetry written with all honesty based on facts too
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
The exciting
Crossword puzzle. About the
Surfing Animals
I like the list of animals that complete this wonderful crossword puzzle
Dolphin is my favorite. and joyful to watch them doing their activities .
Great Puzzle.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
A deeply emotional piece that is well written and nicely
Reading the given title makes me sad as a Home is Always a Home Sweet Home.
I Am The Stranger In My House
An intruder...A complete disappointment indeed
A very sad story behind the poetry.
Write On
Good Afternoon,
A writing from a brilliant mind.
A writing that is enlightening, important, sacred and very inspiring.
It expresses the true essence of living.
Highly admirable all the way
The last paragraph brightens every dark days of living.
Splendid...
Truly impressive.
Thank You for sharing
In Our Darkest Hour
Thank You for the worthwhile read too
Good Afternoon,
A very inspiring free verse poetry with a good flow.
Its rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
The chosen lines are meaningful all the way
" JESUS CHRIST was the main attraction"
My favorite line and is the Most Powerful .
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented
An Open Heart
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A one of a kind king.
Bong is his name
His hair is long
He loves coffee that is strong.
The story behind the poetry is amazing in such a way the king is being described.
The porm is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
This is a very nice poem.
I admire it all the way.
I am a user of Pen everyday of my life and I have it by the dozen in my working table.
My favorite lines :
" the greatest tool of men
let's use it, we must"
Deep in my heart I wish to thsnk the person who invented it and the persons who are always making it
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A prose.or a short story that is captivating and interesting by just reading the given title
Silent Servant
The Lincoln. Catafalque
Mysterious name for a mysterious story.
Always dress in black and always silent.
Ohh silent is deep
.
This short story can be made into a book or movie.
Write on.
Yes.. and Dennell always tell the truth.
That is very good of her.
The truth hurts but it is the truth.
Good that they bring this matter to the Principal's office so they can learn something from Dennelks truthfulness.
Nice and wise story.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A very interesting poem about a houseplant.
Yes I agree with the written lines.
Very true.there are simple things in life that are taken for grsnted but once you notice it ..then sctually gives meaning and reason to your wonderful existence.
I admire the shared lesson in this work of art.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning ,
What a great performance..
Possibly Daisy was a human and a player in her previous life.
Hahaha
I enjoy reading this.
I wonder what really will happen if this story is.not fiction.
It will surely be.on top of the news and an unforgettable event.
Very nice.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very special free verse poetry to a very special person
To My Teacher
Mrs. J
Reading between the lines makes me conclude that you are greatly blessed to have Mrs. J as your teacher.
Her description is a solid in proof on how dedicated she is as a teacher.
Admirable lines that completed this work of art.
I wish that there are many Mrs. J in the teaching world.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that has a good flow.
It is about sports or games aa well as the players and the many fans of each particular field of sports.
Another great work of art of a great.poet in this Awesome Community.
Thank You for another worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Thoughts from a happy parent with nice and wise words for her child.
Caring, loving, meaningful and touching.
Poetry from the heart and soul.
I admire each line that completed this work of art with a good flow.
Thank You for sharing
A Million Whys
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very observant poet as this is the.main topic of this nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry
Rotted Boards
Reading between the lines makes me believe thst such boards are truly strong inspite of everything.
I admire the creativeness.
Brilliant.
Write on.
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