Good Morning
Amazing Story.
Once, There Were Stars
The universe in darkness and coldness.A nicely written story that I believe the author is an expert in Science and its modernization, computer technology which also includes modern communication equipments
Professor Silic and a Lady Professor Narot are the main characters here.
Then the communication that was trying to contact them from tne undeground who actually wants to abolish humanity.
Eventually they got to reach out to each other and discussed what's going on.
The last paragraph was the best explanation after all
Knowledgeable and brilliant author.
Truly a Great read.
Write on.
Good Morning
A Poem 3 expresses mother's great love for her children. A poem so full of love, care and pleasant Thoughts.
Very inspiring all the way.
Wonderful lines that completed this work of art
A free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A very interesting story that is well written all the way.
Captivating title
SEA STORIES
This is about Dani, a lady sailor in her first job.
Along with her is Captain Lee and some more staff. And the.wonderful dolphin.
Truly and exciting first day of work.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is very Captivating as well as very intriguing as Rose is my favorite flower:Because I Am Not
A Rose
Reading between the lines makes me say that.possibly the gsrdenrr or the owner of the garden does not like to hav3 a Rose in the garden.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
JEWELS
Honestly, I was thinking differently upon reading the given title.i thought this is a story about special gems that are special and precious.
Reading between the lines I say...this writing is Awesome. If there is a word that is more than Awesome. Then I describe it that way.
I love gardening and I wish I described it the way you are describing it in this story.
Yes..gardening for me.is also a kind of therapy to erase.in my mind all the worries in the world.
There was a time in.my life.
. that friends and strangers stopped at our place and took pictures of.my garden and told me :
You have tne most beautiful garden in the world and asked permission to take picture of my garden. I said Thank You and YES..and it was.my gardening that. I discover ideas on what to write mind activates in the beauty and the silence of doing my gatdening.
That was years ago this time.my Neuralgia Nerve Damage excruciating pain never allows me to do the necessary movements for gardening and my garden is not as beautiful as before. It is now a vegetable garden that I instructed hired gardeners to do it and the vegetables serve its purpose.
Back To The review.
I am so happy for you and for Larissa and her. Realization on how blissful was your urging her to do the Gardening for the best of reason.
The happy ending Marvelous that if only we are neighbors i will be invitimg uour whole Family for Lunch using our vegetables in the garden as a special Meale that surely the children will love my Eggplant Burgers.
WE have more than enough supply with vegetables so I told our neighbors to feel free to harvedt for their needs and they are most grateful.
Write On
GOD BLESS
Sorry..I am being carried away..msking this review too long for you to read.
Thank You for sharing this highly impressive
JEWELS..
Good Evening,
A HAIKU
About Cockroach
Three lines that completed tnis concise and nice work of art.
Talking of cockroach...my daughter do not like to see them. If she sees one she looks for an insect spray and spray the whole house consuming all the contents.
Then she asks ;
Why is it that there is a cockroach..
Is there an earthquake coming ?
That is her belief and I respect that
Precious in a way thst it shares great lesson.
" I lesrned it from you "
Daddy set a good example and Angelique take it by heart
I love this nicely written and nicely presented family story and the kindness of Angelique's heart.
Highly impressive.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very unique story behind the poetry.
A message in a bottle in a different and in a nice way.
It mention a river not a sea
What makes it special because the bottle first spins in the air..
Oh. i wish to see it with my very own eyes before it drops down.
Fascinating..
Enchanting.
Thank You for sharing
Yes. Plunge
Truly a great read.
Writw on
Good Afternoon
A Hsiku Poetry
A fun to read readibg the given title
A Joyous Occasion
The three lines are wonderful that completed this nice work of art.
A Haiku .
A poem that is concise, nice and wise.
spring brings baby bsts
My favorite line.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon
I want to know..
Yes.. my curiosity leads me to
The Magic Flower
Reading between the lines makes me believe that you are so blessed to meet this magic flower..
I wish there is a Magic Flower for sale that anyone can buy and make their gloomy day shines so bright.
I enjoy reading this inspiring work of art
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Oh...and apple and worm become friends.
Haha but they must not stay Together so I can enjoy eating tbe apple..
Hahaha
Wit and humor..
A poem that is joyful to read.
This is well written and nicely presented with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Reading the title I was thinking of strong winds and heavy rain that caused damage to crops and
infastructures and caused discomforts all around.
Reading between the lines makes.me smile as I can vibidky picture a lovely lady dancing in ihe rain
Joyfully.
A wonderful reaction.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The ending makes me admire more of this story behind the poetry.
The titie is great
The Promise
A person who keeps a promise is an.honorable person. Breaking a promise gives a hearbreaking result.for both.Much harder to the one whom the promise was given so it is always wise not to give a promise that uou cannot keep.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Distance, the length of farness between two hrarts hut she is always close to the heart and vice versa.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented
Love Poetry with an interesting title
On The Other Side.
" An ocean between us but in dreams she is home.
A nice conclusion that fits for the given title.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning
A love poetry. The given title is a very nice name
Toressa
A very special lady thst wherever you are you are always thinking of her as in
Where ever I go you'll be here. Iny heart...
That is how precious Toressa is in uour life.
A poem so full.of deepest feelings.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written free verse poetry that describes your mother's present condition in her older days.
Sweet memories during younger years and then the brain is in turmoil as days of older years goes on is how I understand about the message and concern of this work of art.
Truly a sad reality.
Thank You for sharing
A Beloved Cluttered Mind
Write on.
Good Morning,
The poem is lovely and it sounds like a beautiful song to me.
The given title is one of God's greatest gifts to mankind
Mother Nature.
The poem is well written and nicely presented with wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
I admire the girl that is the main star in the story behind the poetry.
A great read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
This is very nice work of srt.
The very nice picture also adds more meaning into this free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Beautiful rhythm and rhyme.
A Winning Piece.
Congratulations..
Thank You for the Great read.
Good Evening,
Very touching as in heavy drama.
All those anger, frustrations, hurt and pain and the time for forgiveness are being released here in complete
28 years so heavy to carry that in fhe heart and soul for a long period of time.
Now is the moment to have that freedom and through forgiveness as in there is always a right time for everything.
And now is the right time.
I am happy for you that you can now move on with.life and your dad can rest in peace.
Yes. Forgiveness is divine.
This is well written and nicely presented
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.thst describes the true desire of the heart.
Yhe poem that specifically call this very special lady the
Angel Of My Dreams
You are so blessed to have this
Precious Angel
Thank you for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening
A very interesting story and very convincing , so real in every aspect and is well written and nicely presented all the wsy.
From a dream to nighmare and tbe girl scout cookies to Samoas and so.on and so forth.. all in one this is a brilliant piece from a brilliant mind.
The knocks are annoying yet the story is fascinating.
Truly a wonderful read.
Writw on.
Good Afternoon,
Wow..
This is great information about Lighthouses.
Amszing..
I am so glad to have read this.
I have my very own favorite Lighthouse.
I posted a story on my Port and the Lighthouse is a part of the story
Trip To Pescadores Island with my sweet Memories.
Thank You for sharing
Flashlights Of the World
Highly impressive writing.
God Bless.
Good Afternoon,
Yes
They appear and
" Gone in an instant"
I have my very own belief in shooting stars.
It was dawn and as I open the window I saw the high sky filled with stars.
I was thinking of my late younger brother and as I look up the sky
I said..
Prove to me that you are one of them..do it three times..
Then in an instant three shooting stars fell down.
Seeing that I cannot stop crying.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented Haiku poetry about this magical
Shooting Star.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
The given title speaks about The
Messiah..or the Most High..
This is well written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful ans nice
Very meaningful lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for the read
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