Good Morning,
The titie is very meaningful.
Memories
Reading between the lines touches my innermost soul.
A poem that is full of love and care that reminds of so many sweet memories being shared together.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
WOW..
I feel like I just finished watching a very good movie..a love story movie With a happy ending after the very long drama and I want to make a round of applause
Great story that is well written and nicely presented sll the way
Truly a great storu.
Write on
Good Morning,
A very unique name
Tenebrae
Along with the unique name are the unique description of this wholebeing that the poe6 gives so much importance or recognition in so many other names.
Something special indeed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
You are a great storyteller. My reading is full focus aa the story is full of excitement, drama, romance, action and many interesting scenes that I do not want to miss a thing.
Yes,I agree with the given title
What Happened To Danny ?
The location is very inviting and I wish to be there.
Truly great in every way that this story is written
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented deeply emotional piece.
A sad titie:
To A Fallen Leaf In Autumn
The poem is expressing a philosophical message through chosen lines that completed this work of art.
The last two lines that serve as a conclusion is filled with love.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read
.
Write on
Good Evening,
The red colored letters added more meaning into this nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a Captivating title
Manic Monday..
Unpleasant happenings and situation is being described here.
Truly fits for the given title.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting and Captivating title
Sin
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry that expresses this word SIN..
The last four lines are.most.meaningful to.me and oh. So true.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The given title is captivating as this generation is in enjoying this Solar Power
As being mentioned in the chosen lines of this nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
but too.much can also kill ..
I agree with the last line.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,,
A deeply emotional piece that is well written and nicely presented.
It soeaks of the true feelings of the heart
" Does it have to be this lonely this long ?"
This is a question that I asked my dearest Papa when I had experience loneliness.
He told me :
Reach out to others especially those who are less fortunate in life and your heart will be filled with joy.
I did it and he was right.
Try it..
It works for me.. surely it will work for yoy.
Smile..
It's a wonderful world.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
I l8ve this poem all the way.
It is full of life and each.line is wonderful.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Great title
Petals Of The Sun
The given title fits for the chosen lines
Truly a great read.
Thank You for sharing your talent.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A story that is more on Wilfred's cheating and the women are reacting to his previous deeds.
Wilfred's walk to the forest, his hard to understand behaviour.
Guilty consvience leads him to this.
In the story it was not clearly stated how he cheated Kate.. even in their meeting at the forest..it was not written in detailed way to explain fully how he did it.
Anyway.. thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A nice family story with a great lesson to share especially for parents who instead of heing the great inspiration of their children.. the children wanted to stay farther and no seeet bonding time if the parents only know how to bully and never appreciate the good points that surely his child have.
I admire be Trevor's calmness of spirit that gives this story a wonderful ending
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
An interesting, intriguing and captivsting title of a free verse poetry
Pure Imagination
In life as well as in every aspect of living one has to face realities rather than just an imagination.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented. Work of art with a good flow
Thank You for the read.
Good MorningA well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
It expresses a message about the whole world nowadays including the changes in many aspects of living.
The last line that serves as a conclusion speaks of the truth and nothing but the truth.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Short message to oneself and direct to the point.
Yes...Youth..goodbye and welcome to the age of maturity and more understanding with life and all its essence.
To face tomorrow.. with great enthusiasm leaving the past behind
Thank You for sharing a nicely written and nicely presented
Youth...
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
A very wonderful poem that describes so many wonderful beliefs and a joy to read as in magical that makes me smile as I enjoy reading this all the way.
A poem so full.of love and heartily dedicated to the lovable munchin .
The very handsome boy in the world
Awesome work of art.
Great read.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry with a good flow.
It expresses the daily life and all its essence..
meaning the good, the bad and the ugly.
What we need is to concentrate on the good and smile as well as pray when the bad and the ugly happens m
I admire most the last line in this
Well written and nicely presented poem.
Very inspiring line.
Write on .
Good Evening,
BIG YES !
These two precious words ?
I truly wanted to yell so loudas I read the great ending of the story.
Reading the first three paragraphs I deeply felt the pain too for the unsupportive words from your parents
You win all because
You believe in yourself and the goodness of your spirit.
A very convincing and inspiring story.
Thank You for sharing
The Interview
A great read.
Write on
Good Evening
A poetry.
A questio n..
A very important question.
A question that needs special answer.
And the answer can only be given by
You..
The very precious
You.
The in poem is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Hood Evening,
The 160 Format.
Thank You for the special Note below the poetry that explains fully about this one format.
The poem is living and sweet.
A sense of belonging as in our hearts belong to each other.
Filled With gladness
Yhank You for sharing
Asleep
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
An awesome story with an awesome title
MAGIC
You started it with a very interesting line that arises the curiosity of your readers on what will happen next
A short story full of love, honor and respect for you
Grandpa or grandfather
Sacred and great
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good afternoon,
Beautiful story.
Sad, very..very sad yet also very inspiring.
Carey and the deep, wide, blue ocean
Facing the sea with all her sorrows her tears and loneliness
Seeing the seagull both the living as well as the dead seagull gives her the motivatoon to move on with life to take good care of her children who needs her most.
That's the most inspiring part of the be story that I truly admire.
Wonderful all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A very captivsting title of a free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
Starting Out Small
Reading between the lines makes me recall the songs I learned about lies during my teenage days.
One was,
It is a sin to tell a lie...
The other was:
Oh.how you lied ..
Both songs are having sad tunes.
The poem has a good flow and the lines written fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I felt I was there listening to Chloe with her Eulogy to her Grandpa or Papa, the hero.
Reading between the lines I felt a lump in my throat but I cannot control my shedding of tears.
Very touching
Very truthful.
Very convincing
Very inspiring.
I admire Chloe's sincerest words and I wish to give her a hug.
Precious Eulogy for a very special
Person.
A Great Read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A detailed explanation on the subject matter with a captivating title
Is There Scientific Lol Proof Of God ?
The questioning heart
My answer to this:
Whether there is a scientific proof of God's existence or not...
Deep.in my heart and soul and in my wholebeing.. .
I declare that GOD Exists..
Please Read the Holy Bible and the Most High will surely manifest in your life that HE Exists.
Thank is my honest to goodness opinion
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Wtite on
God Bless You Always.
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