Good Evening,
A very meaningful
Through The Windowsill
A free verse poetry that exoresses and releases all your deepest feelings that makes Healing quicker or quickest and move on with life full of Hope and great expectations.
The poem from the heart and soul.
" I believe in possibilities
I believe someone's watching
over me"
These are my favorite lines in this well-written and nicely presented work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Evening,
This is Awesome..
Very inspiring and enlightening.
Very special and precious writing that sounds like a lovely Prose to me.
I admire the written lines that shares great wisdom to one and all.
Highly impressive.
Thank You for sharing
The Candles Flame Of Hope
Thank You for the great read too
Write on
God Bless..
Good afternoon,
Written during the Pandemic.
The title was a very true happening at that time
No one was aloud to go out especially the children.
In our country the movement was very hard because if you were caught outside without the government pass you have to pay a very expensive Fine.
It was a horrible experience that terrified the whole world and I pray dearly that it never ever happen again.
The poem is truly sad.
Reading the last line..I wish to Thank the Most High that COVID is gone
" And they let the children out "
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Reading this makes me think of my husband and daughter who loves Korean food and we never run out of Kimchi in our ref.They always replenish it.
This is a great winning exoeriences of
Sam Adams
Thank You for sharing this wonderful recipe.
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Hahaha
I love the character of David..the eight year old detective.
Hahaha
Very cute and his wise duscoveries.
The story has a good flow and is very entertaining and interesting.
I enjoy reading this all the way m
Thank You for sharing
Shirley Homes
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The title is captivating as it is a very famous paper art in Japan
ORIGAMI
The poem is well written and nicely presented all the way.
It expresses a philosophical message.
" and as the day unfolds, refolds upon
itself we become our own origami"
A wonderful.last line that serves as The best conclusion in this precious work of art.
Thank You for another great read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I love this free verse poetry all the way.
The courageous and fighting spirit is highly admirable and adorable.
" but love me or hate me I'm here
to stay "
Well said..
You are greater than great.
Thank You for sharing
Unstoppable
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
It exoresses a message on experiences in life along with being true to oneself.
The last lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines and they are most meanjngful that fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Dr Gonzo,
This is a very meaningful free verse poetry with a great and precious message to one and all.
It expresses the true essence of life that includes the good, the bad and the ugly.. True to the famous line..that life is not be always a bed of roses
Each line of this well written and nicely presented work of art shares great wisdom.
Truly impressive.
Enjoy life and Be very Happy .
God Bless You Always..
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very captivating free verse poetry title
Today..
Reading between the lines of this deeply emotional piece makes me smile as you give the clear importance of Today..
Yes.. yesterday is gone and tomorrow may never come and what we have is today so we make good use of it.
This is how I understand your awesome work of art.
Thank You for sharing
Today.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
inspiring title
My Wish
A very nice wish indeed
And that is to have a boat and explore the river Ganges
Wow. Surely it will be a great adventure or experience
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
May your wish comes true.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Written for a prompt and this is a
Minute POEM.
Thank You for the detailed information about this poem.
I like tbe given titie
Fishy Character
This is so full of life and fun to read..
I admire each written lines that completed this special work of art.
The lines at the first stanza are.my favorite lines
Truly a fishy character.
Very nice.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A writing that expresses your great faith to the Most High with an interesting title
Throne Room
A room where you can tell the Most High what is in your heart and soul.
" With petitions of prayers and worship and praise and with thanks akways "
Perfectly said.
Write on
Good Morning,
WOW..
Marvelous..
I love this poem all the way..from the very beginning until the last word.
The given title fits for the written lines of this special work of art..
The Poet's Challenge
The nice picture adds more meaning into this poetry with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Highly impressive...
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I admire how you express Grand Da words and accent that I feel like seeing him and hearing him said the words. Fascinating..
Stone Fences
A brilliant move and decision as they are strong and last for years and years keeping the whole area safe too.
" where fences end, and lovers kissed"
My favorite line that makes me smile
Thank You for the wonderful read
Write on .
Good Morning,
A Love Poetry
Actually, a secret love poetry based on the given title
The Secret..
It is written in nicely poetic words that tells the story behind this work of art.
Perhaps it was not meant to be as it ended that way .
Sad...
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Yes..let that little guy sleep beyond forever.
Reading the first line makes most curious to read this
Its Never Boring
Readibg between the lines of this well written Biographical Essay makes me admire for the right move and the right direction that you are taking.
This sounds like a
Reflection Of The Soul
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Winning is your Birthright..
Soar like an Eagle.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very interesting free verse Poetry with a special and important message to someone ,. possibly a child...as I read the given title..
Take Your Marbles ( and go home )
Spending more time outside and the poet wants him or her to go home.
Yes. This happens..
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
I can feel each written line.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A nice title about one of the seasons in your country.
A Walk Down Autumn Lane
The poem has a good flow and the rhythm and rhyme is nice.
" and when you walk down
see how it changes you
Things pass by us when you don't see
them through."
These are my favorite lines in this Awesone poetry.
These lines are truly meaningful.
Thank you so much for sharing
Write on.
Good Evening.
A free verse poetry that expresses the caring thoughts of a poet who is a sports enthusiast.
It is nicely presented as well as nicely presented too.
The last lines at the last stanza serves aa a great advice to all concern.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is a very special and precious free verse poetry that describes wonderfully and truthfully
Oneself
I admire each line that completed this all the way.
It is like a heartfelt conversation with one own soul.
Highly impressive...
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Beautiful Poetry..
Or A Beautiful Song..
Meaningful, Inspiring and very insightful.
The lines are wonderful and brilliant as in Nice and Wise.
Each line is precious and special.
The Chorus shares great words of wisdom.
Thank You for sharing
Little Children
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very captivating title that has a great connectedness in a relationship.
Sad
The title serves as a valid reason for a possible annulnent.
Very sad to note..
The poem is presented in its own unique way.
"Where fault has no bearing in a no fault world "
My favorite line in this poem..
Thank you for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Evening,
Good question.
Great title..
If Not Now, When ?
A well written free verse poetry that can be made into lyrics of a meaningful ballad with a lovely tune.
I admire the chosen lines that completed this work of art.
Wonderful poetry
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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