Good Afternoon,
A disaster time for the gossip girl.
A short story that is realustic and is well written and nicely presented.
The gossip girl denies the accusation then the chair collapsed.
A funny way to learn a lesson.
Thank You for sharing
Msrgie , The gossip girl..
Writw on.
Good Afternoon,
A Free verse poetry with a good flow.
A Love Poetry that is well written all the way.
The given title reminds me of a nice love song And I Found My Love Today
" Say Jesus Christ ourGallant Lord
Gives love a brand new start "
My favorite line in this work of art that is inspiring.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A poem that describes the poet as a no highly educated person
Medical as a doctor and legal as a lawyer.
WOW..A very awesome journey with exoeriences of both fields.
You are truly greatly blessed.
The poem is nicely written and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
It is my great honor to read your awesome works.
Good Morning,
AMEN.
The given title is for me a prayer and is very special and powerful
LOVE THE LORD
I admire the written lines that completed this work of art.
Love the God the Father, God the Son and God the Holy Spirit. AMEN..
Yes.. I Do.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
WOW,
The setting is Japan. and with Japanese lead characters
Akkun and Katagiri
A very beautiful love story.
Akkun in his own unique ways and Katagiri with her seeetness and kind heart.
I enjoy reading this esoecially the last paragraph that sounds like a lovely prose to me.
Great Writer...
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written Essay that serves as a tribute to a great lady,
Susan Wojcicki
Of Google, You Tube and many more in this modern technology world.
Gone too soon.
An achiever and doing wonderful deeds when she was alive. She's indeed a blessing to world and May she rest in Peace.
AMEN.
Thank You for sharing
A Fantastic Life And Profession
Thank You for the read too.
God Bless.
Good Morning,
A very nice poem about a very nice name of a lady
Deborah
The poem expresses great admiration for Deborah who visited the poet on a highland dawn.
This is a very inspiring work of art with a good flow and a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing this poem that gladdens the heart
Write on.
Good Morning,
Ashley and Rebecca
Two sisters and the missing Tshirt of Rebecca.
Actually it's.not missing ar all as their Mom had it folded and placed it in Rebecca's dresser.
Ashley is right in saying
"A sorry would be greatly appreciated "
A short story that is so realistic hetween siblings.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
Misunderstanding
Write On.
Good Evening,
The given title is captivating and interesting that shares a message about the Halloween.
Witches and Goblins
Halloween Is Here
All lines written fit for the given title
A poem so full of activities and is well written and nicely presented
Thank You for the read
Good Evening,
Great collection of Haiku poetry about the month of November.
Brilliant poet.
Concise, nice and wise
Haikus
That you are sharing to all of us in this Awesome Community.
Truly the lines fit for the November month
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Evening,
The title is great
Of Friends And Keyboards on WDC
The red letters of each word and each line is meaningful in a way that the red color is powerful..
" Forever in our shared love of words, a home is found"
Very true. And this line serves as a perfect and awesome conclusion in this wonderful work of art.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
Bri...the lost cat and the good friend of Mia. Missing and with no trace after all until they discovered this animal shelter.
I like the physical description of Bri white with black spots.
Surely an adorable cat.
I am glad that she was found.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A beautiful story full of love, respect and honor that completed
That Which Cannot Be Forgotten
A great experience of life as well as of death.
You are greatly blessed to spend quality time with your Papaw and vice versa.
He is now in God's keeping as you keep him in your heart.
That special glow at the time of his death is truly heartwarming.
Truly a great read
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A Prose or A Preface of A Book...
A very interesting as well as captivating and very intriguing situation or condition of the very day leaving the earth
The plan is something to look forward to with great expectations.
Thank You for sharing
The Start Of Sonething New
Write on
Good Afternoon,
WOW.
Two short poems or mini poems.
Cingku and
Dixdeux forms
Something very new to me..
These are very nice and wise short poems with meaningful messages.
Highly admirable talent.
Thank You very much for sharing these and
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Chapter 1
Of a very interesting book
With a Captivating title
Streets 0f Gold
I am getting to know the characters of this story..
This chapter is more focused on
Gideon Streets whom I believe is a strong willed person and determined to expresss his own identity freely and without fear
Baron Galaparth surely has a very important role in this story.
And Orriane...who died already at the beginning of this story .
What actually happened and what is her conbectedness and importance in the story
That remains to be seen.
Good luck for the continuation up to the completion Ć³f this interesting book.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon
The nurse and her patient.
More abou4 the life of the patient and the story is heartbreaking.
It is well written all the way and very touching.
A story that makes me feel.like just finished watching a sad movie that makes me cry.
Sad as in very sad.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Truly a very awesome gift that you wish to give.
Priceless and beyond compare.
Beautiful Sunrises and sunsets..
Perfect God's creations and truly wonderful in every way.as it gives an everlasting joy.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that is well written and it is descriptive of a very special flower Rose and it is
The Last Summer Rose
" The last summer rose
Do happy it feels royal "
The last two lines that are also my favorite lines.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very interesting story about parenting and siblings fight as children.
Yts.. discipline is a must while they are still young for them to be responsible adults in the future.
Thank You for sharing
A Good Idea and Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning
Oh..Ted surely knew it and played along.
yes.this situation happened as in to live in harmony then just play along.
A short story about Susan and Ted and they live happily ever after.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
A love that is not true. As true love makes both happy and this one kind of feeling or treatment is not love after all.
This is how I understand the sad plight or the sad story behind the poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning
The given title is intriguing and captivating..
Love Beyond Lust
A free verse poetry that expresses the feelings of love in another way that it should be
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presentedā·
Each written line fita for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Good Evening,
I love the given title
Wise
Truly a wise way of writing words and lines that completed this work of art.
The poem describes about the situation that needs help and so the help is expected aa much as it does.
The last two lines are truthful and honest in every way.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
Oh... great story indeed..
Great title too..
Bocephus Unexpected Entry
Nice name of a colt
Bocephus..
Biblical in a way it is also inspiring.
The very special Bocephus serves its purpose.
As the colt of JESUS.
So blessed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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