Good Morning
The given title is intriguing and captivating..
Love Beyond Lust
A free verse poetry that expresses the feelings of love in another way that it should be
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented⁷
Each written line fita for the given title.
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Good Evening,
I love the given title
Wise
Truly a wise way of writing words and lines that completed this work of art.
The poem describes about the situation that needs help and so the help is expected aa much as it does.
The last two lines are truthful and honest in every way.
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Good Evening,
Oh... great story indeed..
Great title too..
Bocephus Unexpected Entry
Nice name of a colt
Bocephus..
Biblical in a way it is also inspiring.
The very special Bocephus serves its purpose.
As the colt of JESUS.
So blessed.
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Good Evening,
The given title is captivating as well as wonderful
The Quill of Plenty
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
I admire the chosen lines that completed this work of art.
Reminiscing sweet Memories
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Good Evening,
A wonderful Love poetry that is joyful to read and with a fascinating and amusing title
A Funny Love Poem..
Wonderful lines that completed this work of art
" For love was a riddle too difficult to solve "
My favorite line that is truthful.
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Good Evening,
Nice poem.. Nice title;
Free To Be Adrift
Very nice picture that adds more meaning into this work of art
The read letter words serve as the highlights of this free verse poetry with a good flow.
Wonderful lines that fit for the given title.
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Good Evening,
Thank You for the Special Note below the poetry that explains clearly about these forms of poetry
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
A poem so lovely and lively It is so full of life.
The nice picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
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Good Evening,
WOW..
The kindness of heart is the main theme of this very beautiful story with an interesting title
A Special Gift
A winning piece...
Congratulations..
I love the story and it is well written and nicely presented.
Hank.. Ruth...
Maggie,
Yes..
The Lord works in mysterious ways and Hank is a great blessing to others.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Good Evening,
A poem that expresses great love for a dearest wife who's gone too soon.
Memories lingers forever.
This is well written and nicely presented.
The heart speaks of how great the time spent with her when she was alive and everyday she lives in the family's heart
The last two lines are a very meaningful lines thst makes a great conclusion.
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Good Afternoon,
A very meaningful title
Returning to Heaven
A sad plight of life then someone lifts your spirit and feel like in heaven again.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
Yes ..this fits for the given topic
It's priceless.
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Good Evening,
Interesting title of a Free verse poetry that has a good flow
Circle Of Life
This is well written and nicely presented.
"After night goes dim
Hope within glimmering"
Wonderful two lines that serve as a great conclusion.
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Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that has a very important title..
The Story Of Our Lives
The story of two hearts livibg in this beautiful world with a taste of glory and delight with the blessings of The
Most High..
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Good Evening,
This is lively, lovely and Awesome.
I can feel the joy and excitement being shared to the whole world through a well written and nicely presented
Hiking Through The World
The new generation moment to moment joy and happiness
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Good Evening,
The very interesting Bug.
The main topic of the story.
It is a bug that has so many functions and they just did not recognize it at once.
And then
The Momentous Moment
did happen
Surely the Bug is behind it
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Good Evening,
Oh,what a sad story that is well written and nicely presented.
It speaks of a very unpleasant situation and a sad happening in a relationship.
Sad to note that this happened.
Reading between the lines makes me understood why such Title was given.
The ending makes me smile.
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Good Evening,
The story behind the poetry reminds me of the lyrics of a beautiful old song "
Smile though your heart is aching smile though your heart is breaking "
The girl in this story is a very good example of a courageous heart and spirit.
This is well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
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Good Afternoon,
Writing about what you love and the given title is captivating by just reading the beautiful name alone
Angelina Ballerina..
This is entertaining, exciting, joyful and fun to read all the way.
It is well written and nicely presented.
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Good Afternoon,
A well written family story.
As in yesterday today and tomorrow..it also includes the good, the bad and the ugly experiences in life
The house that was used to be a home yesterday is not the same as today and tomorrow like the changes of people's lives..
Thia us written with all honesty and truthfulness.
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Good Afternoon,
A very interesting and Captivating title
The Public Library
Library...is one of the places that I love to spend Quality time with.
But there are not much Public Libraries in my country.
Each university has ita own library and durihg my high school and college days. They pjayed a BIG ROLE then.
Thén...the Book Stores were my best place to spend my weekends during my Corporate world daya for 4 decades.
No time for me to visit the public library so I made a Library of my own in our village and called it a Book club where anyone can borrow a book for free as long as they sign a member's club form
I started with ten thousand books. I received donations of boxes of books from my friends all over the world..so the Numbers of books increases only be to lose then all to termites as we closed the bookclub to attend the needs of our grandson in the City.
I wish to reopen another library soon.
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Good Morning,
A Kyrielle form of poetry.
Thank You for the Special Note below the poetry that explains fully and clearly about this form.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
It has a good flow and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
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Good Morning,
In the middle of the story it was stated that MIA was wounded. Why and who did it ?
That part of the story made me very curious.
The story titie fits for the real situation.
Truly a
Catastrophe
Surely there were many who got hurt.
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Good Morning,
Great way to give importance to Comedy and that is by writing a free verse poetry about it.
Yes.. comedy...that turns sadness into happiness and that turns a frown into a smile...and so on and so forth
Yes. Comedy makes comedians being loved by many.
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