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Review of baby  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A one year old child is a joyful and very curious child who loves to explore and ask many questions as learning to talk too.
This is a wonderful word search about a Baby.
Yes I agree with the list of words.
Interesting as it is.
Thank You for sharing.
God 🙏 Bless.
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Review of Far  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Reading between the lines makes me conclude of your most loving and forgiving heart.
The given title is interesting as it speaks of a Distance .
Yet..your heart is too near to give much love and hopefully you will receive in return.
Fascinating poetry.
Write on.
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Review of The Nut Tree  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Wow, A lovely andvery meaningful poetry that gives importance of
" The Nut Tree" through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
I admire the rhythm and rhyme that sounds like a happy song to me.
Another poem from one of the best poet's in this Awesome Community.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
I agree with You all the way.As in Perfectly Said.
A poem that speaks of the true feelings of the heart and each line speaks of Wisdom on what " my people " should be.
The last stanza is most inspiring and meaningful.
A Brilliant Piece that tells a great story or advice.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Basic Knowledge that for me not an easy one to answer.
I scored 10 out of 19 meaning I need a lot to learn in this world of interesting questions that need interesting answers.
I tried answering but honestly the questions are difficult to answer.
Hahaha
But I enjoyed it.
Thank You for the opportunity for me to answer this
Quiz.
God 🙏 Bless.
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Review of world capitals  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Oh..I am not very good at this Quiz.
My score is 3 out of 8.
I really need to learn more information about the capital of countries worldwide.
Well.. there's no harm in trying to answer it.
Hahaha
Thank You for sharing this very challenging Quiz.
Write on.
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Review of The Wedding  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Oh...What a disaster...I wish you will be rescued soonest.
A terrible story about this wedding of your sister with a very difficult venue route to travel.
This is well written and nicely presented yet the story is so full of suspense.
Thank You for sharing
" The Wedding "
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
The given title is captivating and so powerful..YES !
"It's My Life And I'll Eat What I
Want "
This is a nicely and wisely written work of art that speaks of your own personal power to decide for yourself and that's admirable.
I enjoy reading the poem from the start to the end .
Fascinating, Amusing, convincing.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
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Review of Haiku  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
WOW!
You have wonderful collection of your Haiku Poetry.
Nice Poems about the Seasons as well as personal experiences poetically documented through this nice, wise and concise form of work of art.
Awesome indeed !
Awesome Read too
Thank You for sharing your talent in writing Haiku Poetry.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that speaks of what's going on in this country and such observations being expressed through well written and nicely presented lines with a philosophical message all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A Free Verse poetry that expresses of " Bittersweet Memory "
Yes.. this happens when we wish to tell something to someone close to the heart and not able to do so gives us the feeling of regret and sad that this happened.
Written with all honesty and sincerity for
" not telling you
while you were here "
Thank You for sharing this well written work of art that shares your innermost thoughts.
Write on.
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Review of Love Acrostic  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
NICOLE I LOVE YOU..
Yes ..An Acrostic Love Poetry that is written from the heart.
It is full of admiration to this sweet woman NICOLE.
I wish she can read this so she will know your deepest feelings for her.
I enjoy reading this well written
Acrostic Poetry.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Shop This Way  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Oh.. those COVID time that horrifies the world and here's a poetry that shares such an unpleasant experience.
I can feel the frustration reading thr lines and wish and pray that COVID never visits again this whole world.
Such a happening while shopping a bit amusing and a bit scary too.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Reading between the lines makes me feel your great loss too.
CHARLIE surely is watching you always in spirit.
Nice description of CHARLIE that reminds me of our black cat named BEN short cut for bend as his tail was bending.
The poem speaks of your loving and caring heart and those wonderful bonding time with CHARLIE , truly an unforgettable time.
The poem is well written and nicely presented and the picture adds more meaning into it.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of A Narrow Escape.  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A Winning Piece.
A short story that is well written and nicely presented and is full of suspense, like a Crime buster movie.
Sergeant Steve is so blessed that his inner voice guided him the right and the best way to stay away from harm..
Yes...well- deserved to be a Winning Piece.
Thank You for sharing
" A Narrow Escape "
Write on.
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Review of The Fire  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon
A victim of his own making yet Spike has the kindness of heart saving the dog and was successful in doing it yet cannot save his life.
A sad ending.
This is an well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
A story with its own twist and turn.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
What a unique way of spending a blind date.
Charlene and Steve...well...this is only the first date and maybe not the last too are both are intelligent and well...anything is possible.
A short story that sounds so real in its own unique way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of All Is Well  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A Septolet Form of Poetry.
Thank You for the Special Note below the poetry that explains clearly about this poem form.
The given title with three special words are always my favorite :
" All Is Well "
The poem is nicely written and nicely presented as well.
Admirable lines that completed this work of art.
A great read
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting and captivating title of a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry:
"
Bolstering Confidence "
The poem speaks of the man and woman's outlook of what's going on with the world.
Something wonderful to read with a nice rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A poetry or a song it is very nice to me.
I love those words that when I read it it has a sound effect., like
" That's Okayyyyyyyyyyy! "
So unique . So original..
A special work of art from the ❤️.
Thank You for sharing
" This Is What Makes Me "
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of Mango  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The given title makes me very curious to know what is this all about as this is my favorite fruit
" MANGO "
Interesting poem that is well written all the way and you have a unique way of describing this delicious fruit through nicely written words and lines that completed this work of art.
Reading this makes me decide to have Mango fruit for dessert at lunch and dinner time tomorrow.
I love this fruit. It can also be served tomorrow with steamed sticky rice in coconut milk that complements with hot chocolate drink.
Hmmm I cannot wait.
Thank You for your wonderful poem.
Write on.
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Review of Candy  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning
Naomi,
First and foremost, I love your Name, it's my Name too...
I love Candies too and reading this short Essay or Short Story makes me wish to have all those candies being written that sounds so foreign to me.
As a child, since we were living far from town and there's not much big stores I only tasted the White Rabbit milk candy. Then our Mama taught us how to make Coconut Candies. I learned it easily so I made them and sold them to my classmates in my Elementary days since that time I started making and selling I never asked Mama for any allowance for snacks as I made profits and saved some amounts too.
Hmmm that's one of the best memories of my childhood and your story " Candy " is a wonderful reminder.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
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Review of Goodie Gifts  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very Special kind of Food expressed through a 11 11 11 11 Form of Poetry that is something very new Form to me

" Come unto Me, all ye that labor and rest "
A Biblical line and very precious part of this work of art.
Very well written
"Goodie Gifts "
Write on.
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Review of Superconductor  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Reading between the lines from the very beginning until the end makes me understand why such title was given :
" Superconductor "
The poem has a good flow as the story goes on.
The rhythm and rhyme is nice.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of The Train Ride  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is scary and the words from Mommy keeps lingering on.
The picture adds more meaning into this
" The Train Ride "
The character of Joey is intriguing
This is well written and nicely presented.


Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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