A very interesting title of a poem and captivating too are many are fond of it and havung a hard time on how to atop.
Smoking
An ecpensive vice for many who instead of using the money to buy food they use it to buy something they smoke.
There are so many brands that one can choose One worst result of smoling is the health problem that makes the lungs get weaker and weaker.
So the sooner the stop smoking the better
The poem is concise yet it says it all.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for the read.
Wtite on.
Good Afternoon,
Latest report on Criminal justice system me of United States of America.
Surely this is on top of the news all over the world.
GUO WENGUL makes a great part of the justice system big news nowadays.
I believe the conv7ction swrves as a great lesson to all who are planning to move with criminal act
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Morning,
This is a very meaningful beautiful sad story added with a very brave and courageous spirit
I love the name that serves as the story title..
MATAMIS
In our country, the Philippines, MATAMIS means SWEET.
A very interesting story and the grear escape makes it more admirable.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
This story can be made into a Movie and I believe it will be a TOP GROSSER as it is full of drama, life and suspense.
Brilliant
Writer .
Thank You for the great read.
Write on
Good Morning,
A very observant poet on what is going on and what is happening to his country, the United States of America, through well written and nicely poetic lines that completed this work of art.
It is more on the political situation
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Congratulations for your Book...
A free verse poetry with a good flow.
Descriptive of a certain individuslity in a philosophical way
The last few lines are intriguing that also show the man's true character as unreliable.
In my own opinion..it is a blessing that he did not show at the wedding or else the bride will only experience unhappiness as a future wife.
A sad story behind the poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning
The life of a Drug addict is the main feature of this free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented like a heavy drama full of scenes that mostly does not or never give a better tomorrow.
Reading between the lines makes me feel sorry for this person.
What a great waste.
There is a great lesson being shared here..
NO to Drugs...
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses beauty about a special person in your life. It is full of life, loving and sweet.
This is well written and nicely presented.
A poem that describes special moments being shared together.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
This is a very shocking story that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Mark and Chloe at this horrifying moments.
The parents of Mark prove that the Mall is dangerous as they had possibly a premonition of what will happen.
A very sad to note.
A story full of suspense.
Very convincing.
Thank You for sharing
Hero's Witness
Write on.
Good Evening,
It is a very interesting topic that you are writing and sharing here that has great connectedness with the process of improvement.
Importance Of Revamping
Truly a grear information that makes me thankful to have read this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I cannot stop laughing too.
Hahaha
Grandma and the six year old Cindy having a conversation.
There you are... Grandma...
Cindy has the point..
Hahaha
Yes this is truly happening.
I firmly believe so.
Truly a great generation gap6 is tne answer.
Fascinating.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
WOW..
This is Awesome.
I love and I enjoy reading this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with an intriguing title
The Flower And The Weed
Great story behind the poetry
Great rhythm and rhyme too.
Wonderful happy ending
Precious work of art
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A poem that expresses so much faith to The Most High as we keep on living with His love.
A poem that sounds like a Gospel song to me.
I love and enjoy reading this all the way.
Each line that completed this is my favorite line.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
A very nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow
Welcome Autumn
A poem with a joyful heart as to say goodbye to Summertime.
The last two lines perfectly Said it all.
Thank You for sharing
WELCOME AUTUMN
Thank You for the worthwhile read too
Write on.
A nice idea then to have a flannel umbrella but opening an umbrella in the house is bad luck. Another belief that I am not sure if true.. hahaha
A well written and nicely presented short story
I am more excited with the lunch to be setved. It makes me hungry
Great storyteller...that expanded my curiousity.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very special message full of honor,, love and respect to a dearest person in your life
A writing that can also serve as a great Eulogy for him who is gone too soon
It is truly painful to lost someone ypu love.
My deepest sympathy
Thank You for sharing
Losing You
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A Yama form of poetry.
Thank You for the special Note that gives an information about this poem.
A deeply emotional piece.
Gone before I knew her
The first line that starts a sad story behind the poetry.
This is well written and nicely presented.
My prayers for her... Praise..
A line that serves as an Inspiring conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A well written poetry or a song from the humble Heart.
The given title is interesting
The Human Condition
Very true...human as we are we commit mistakes as a part of our imperfection and the Most High gives us guidance to do the things that are right.
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented work of art.
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
A welk written free verse poetry with a good flow and it is very touching with a meaningful title
You Are Gone
A poem that expresses the true feelings of the heart and from the
depthness of the soul
A poem that describes a very special message to a very precious person in your life ...
Love is real.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
Hahaha
Truly a prize winning image as in great camera capture from the photographer.
Hahaha
Reading between the lines i can vividly picture whst happened and I imagine myself had it happened that I was there in the church.
Hahaha
Written for a contest ...
I wish you win
Thank You for sharing and for the joyful read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very touching story about this Ash Tree. I wonder if we have this kind of tree here in the Philippines
Good that they planted another Ash tree and little Ashley was named after it.
I love trees as me and my siblings grew with trees all around our house and our Papa and Mama trained us to plant trees at our land.
This is a great story and is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
With all my heart and soul..I give you a SALUTE. from the Philippines to honor , to respect and to Thank The Most High for having you in this world
An American MOM
An American Veteran, a mother of children serving the Military..it is my great honor to know you and be able to read your wonderful writings that serve as a great documentary of your precious existence.
This poem is Awesome all the way.
God Bless You Always.
Good Morning,
A nicely written and nicely presented
MORTALS
Each line speacks with truthfulness, sincereness and honesty.
Yes.. the essence of life includes these words and lines being mentioned here in this meaningful work of art.
Master of our lives and masters of our lies...
My favorite line and that is so true.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Written for a prompt and it is very nicely done.
The Sweet Christmas Memories live in our hearts forever. The unforgettable famiit bonding time with Grandparents
will always be treasured. The delicious familiar family meal served with love and care..yes truly.
Back In The Day
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
God Bless..
Good Morning,
I love the given title
Heal The World Through Love
Very inspiring lines that completed this precious work of art.
Each line offers great comfort to make life harmonious and great
I enjoy reading this all the way .
The world through love will unite
And our future shall burn bright.
My favorite lines in this Awesome poetry.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening
The very precious and special people in our lives, our
PARENTS
A very meaningful and very important
PARENTS
The poem is full of love, honor and respect.
Each line is truthful.
And they will always be there.
My favorite line jn this work of art.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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