Good Morning,
In the middle of the story it was stated that MIA was wounded. Why and who did it ?
That part of the story made me very curious.
The story titie fits for the real situation.
Truly a
Catastrophe
Surely there were many who got hurt.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Great way to give importance to Comedy and that is by writing a free verse poetry about it.
Yes.. comedy...that turns sadness into happiness and that turns a frown into a smile...and so on and so forth
Yes. Comedy makes comedians being loved by many.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Write on
Good Morning,
A very inspiring writing that shares some Biblical compilations and for me are very special and very precious
Thank You for the
Work Cited part that gives an explanation for the great source of this writing
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Turned Off Times Into A Good Day
Write on.
Good Evening,
A SENRYU form of poetry
Three precious lines thar completed this work of art that expresses much action of yesterday..
" memories of you "
Nice and wonderful three lines full of action and meaning.
Great memories indeed.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening
A great story.
I enjoy reading thid especially the part that.you save a child's life.
That is truly honorable.
The story has a good flow and is very sad in its unique way
Thank You for sharing and for the read of this story with a great title
Healthy, Wealthy and wise
Write on
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented Essay with a very inspiring and meaningful title
Creation
Each line that completed Each paragraph is enlightening and precious in its own special way.
The lines at the last paragraph are my favorite lines are they are most meaningful.
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Good Evening,
WOW..
This is Awesome
An Acrostic poetry with a very nice and wonderful title
Rhyming In The Rain
I admire each line that completed this work of art.
The last line makes a great conclusion of this highly impressive poem.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that is descriptive of a particular person or lady in particular..
She remained busy with
Several honorouble works.
Two lines that make highly admirable of this very special character.
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A Divine Life
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written free verse poetry and it is about a great man, GANDHI.
The poem has a good flow and it soeaks highly of the great man
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The mind wonders and thinking so much.
Now...no more wondering as it is nice and great to love and be loved in return .
You deserve all the happiness in the world.
I am happy for you.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that expresses a personal happening as the journey of Life goes on.
The sense of confusion and no fulfillment thus chaotic thinking occura.
One has to calm down and think of the best bb action to be dkne and will be doing.
Thank You for sharing and for the
Read.
Writw on.
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is very sad me
" she never came back
died in Autumn"
A deeply emotional piece that expresses the deepest feelings especially when you love this person so much.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning
A well written and nicely presented poetry with a great title
Kindness
The poem speaks of this very nice and special word
And it is kindness that mskes the heart happt..authentically happy
The chosen lines fit for given title.
Yes
Kindness begets kindness and a kind spirit always wins.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Another well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The title is inspiring
A New Society
A Victorious Value
The written lines are sharing a positive and brilliant thinking of this modern world.
Each line.means worthy of admiration for the truth that it conveys.
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Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses some realities and happenings in life as well as in the world.
A very observant poet.
This is well written and nicely presented.
The chosen wise and nice lines fit for the given title
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
Oh...
I love Happy Endings.
Angela and Samantha
Perfect for Motner and child.
They eventually found each other at tbe right time
Great story.
Like a drama in real life.
Angela's fascinating individuality.
This i well written and nicely presented all tbe be way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
A special tribute to a specisl place
Arlington Nstional Cemetery
A place where the heroes of the land that are all here.
A poem with a good flow and nicely written and nicely presented.
Rest and listen to the whisper of the wind...
A very meaningful line in this wonderful work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
Intriguing title and captivating too.
Blips On The Radar
Never A be Story
This is well written and nicely presented all the way
The given title fits for the chosen lines in this wonderful work of art.
The rhythm and rhyme is truly wonderful.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Oh ..A very entertaining short story.
The lady that always feel so young at heart and does not need any help at all.
Great mentality as in affirming a grea4 strength
The last part of the story makes me sad that it happened.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read
Write on
A poem
A letter.
And this is being addressed to
Dear Teacher
This is well written and nicely presented..
The note below the poem makes me understand more of this work of art.
A free verse poem that conveys a philosophical message in a nice way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
The given title makes me very curious as well aa excited to know what is this
Find A Yellow Car
It made me think to find it in the Yellow Pages of our Telephone Directory
Hahaha funny hut true
Reading between the lines gives me the answer of my question.
A very special game you play with your daughter while driving the car and having her with you
Very nice game. I love it
Very nice story. I love it too
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon
A very nicely written and nicely presented
Love And Hot Water
Very well Said as in keep the love gojng.
The last paragraph is most thoughtful and lovibg as it exoresses the right thinga to be done for the love of your life.
Keep living...keep loving ..
Keep writing and keep posting too
A great read.
Good Morning,
The poem is nicely written and nicely presented.
The given title is Captivating as well as very interesting
Ears Are To Listen
Very true four words that completed the given title.
Each line speaks of the truth and is wise and nice.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A poem dedicated to a very good friend., son's good friend
The story behind the poetry is inspiring and meaningful.
This is full of love and care.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning
Interesting title and so true
Where Words Come To Life
Wonderful first line that serves as a great start of a nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Yes...the given title fits for the chosen written lines.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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