Good Morning,
A nicely written free verse poetry with a good flow.
It is joyful and full of life.
A poem with great expectations and positive antocipations.
I admire each line that completed this work of art.
The summer that is wonderfully spent.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The memories linger.
The poem is well written and nicely presented all the way.
It Expressess a deeply emotional message.
The lines fit for the given title
When I Remember
Written for a prompt.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is captivating as well as very interesting
Old and New
The poem expresses a message about the beauty of gsrdens and the.love of gardening.
" Creating for me a lovely retreat"
Wonderful words to shà re.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
The poem is lovely as the voices blend wonderfully.
Nice title
Background Singers
You describe them in a very admirable poetic words and iines that complrtef this work of art.
Beautiful poem.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good morning,
The title is very intriguing and captivsting
A Hslf Million Dollars Of Loneliness
The Poem is well written and nicely presented yet the message is.abou5 loneliness.
Loneliness can be overcome by
Prayers as well as.to keep yourself busy aa in occupying each moment with activity of both the mind and body.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The title is very interesting as nature is always interesting..
The Love Of Nature
A lovely sight of green grass and the bright blue sky.. only to realize that it waa only a dream.
And the Conclusion:
When will any of my dreams come true ?
Wise question that the answer remains to be seen..
Well keep on dreaming and surely it will be a reality.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry that expresses so much turmoil and sorrow.
The Aftermath Of War
Reading between the lines.. my vivid reaction to what was the result of this terrible situation.
It is not a nice sight to enjoy but a painful sight to endure..
That is how I understand this well written and nicely presented work of art.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon
The Poem
Yes..the poem that is so full of life to break the monotony of the day.
Hahaha and it is fun to read.
The first two lines are my favorite
lines because I also love to eat
But I never get fat..
Well.. Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon
A free verse poetry with an interesting title
Passing By
Reading between the lines makes me feel the great panorama that gives you a wonderful experience.
As in a pleasing visio that calms the spirit.
The last stanza awakens you as you face Reality.
I am happy for you to gain such remarkable exoerience.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Reading the given title makes.me smile as there are so many things and events in our existence that truly worth appreciating.
An inspiring title
Appreciation
Reading between the lines mskes me so happy for you as you aporeciate life and all its essence.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon
A deeply emotional piece
It speaks of the soul.
The soul and such connectedness with the world and all its essence.
It is a healing process to let your soul exoresses its fullest feelings to know between right or wrong.
A poem that truly reflects your whole being.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning A
A wonderful autoniography in a nice poetic way.
The title is interesting
CHRISTIAN
You describe yourself in a wonderful way of being a Christian.
Written with all your heart and soul.
" Freedom, love and victory "
My favorite line.
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
It expresses a philosophical message about a particular situation in a condition that is not regular but a difficult one.
The last three lines rxplains fully the necessary things that need to be done snd it is not that easy.
This is how I understand this
The Home Sampler
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A nicely written and nicely presented parable that proves to the whole world that MUSIC truly.makes wonders.
The young man and his caring and loving heart makes the older man opening his heart to him that makes everything in perfect harmony.
Highly impressive
The Parable of the Roommateskkk
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Written for a contest...
I wish you win.
A dialogue and a great combination of wit and humor.
Written during the Pandemic.
Billy..the brilliant boy and his Dad , the wise snd nice Dad..
After all the discussion everything in is being settled by an Ice Cream as in
Deal..
Good Morning,
The given title is captivating..
Chocolate Ecstacy
I am a chocolate lover too and my favorite is our locally made in our country, the Philippines...the name is
CHOCNUT
A combination.of chocolate and peanut
It has a delicious distinct taste.
Reading between the.lines I can feel every word that is written.
Admirable conclusion.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Writer's Block and you describe it im your own poetic words and lines that clearly clarify such feelings and reactions.
Yes.. this is happening and I agree with you.
Thank You for sharing
Clogged
Thank You for the read too.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Evening
A free verse on poetry with a good flow.
It exoresses a message to a particulsr person
YOU
Who does the job description in the my working World..
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
It is so full of life.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
Hahaha
Funny but so no true.
Wonderful lines that completed this free verse.poetry with great rhythm and rhyme.
There is a lesson to learn in this work of art.
Truly Wit and humor.
I admire the brilliant conclusion.
Thank You for sharing
Just Desserts
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening
A very meaningful snd inspiring prayer from s loving and a caring loving heart and soul.
Praying to The Most High to bless your loving hands to carry on your tasks
with His guidance all the way.
A beautiful prayer from a beautiful soul.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
A horrible happening thst makes everyone a loser all because nobody wins in war..Sad to note of its results ;
Lost lives, Lost infastructures, lost jobs, lost all the good things in life. What is left is a chaotic world that causes sadness and sorrow.
The poem is well written and nicely presented and soooo sad.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very special kind of Music.
It is a nice way of describing Music through poetic words out of the love for an apple.
I can vividly picture each.line thst completed this work of art.
Yes. i agree with You just as I consider the cascading waves at the ocean is a great Music too.
Great...
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
Oh.. You made.me cry reading this
.
The mystery of life.
Today you are a happy family with a new baby . A few months after..the wife cheated her husband and the most kind husband let her wife and her boyfriend stayed in one of the rooms. In his apartment. Too much to bear..
Then the fire. He lost his wife..his boyfriend died too. But he was disabled in the attempt to save his eife. He was able to save their one and only child m. Angela.
All of the sacrifices and his sufferings were paid off at the end as a clown amd the relatiobship with his child Angela improved and the love of father and daughter remains stronger.
I am glad for the happy endin that is is worth my shedding of tears of what this husband and father had been through.
Brilliant Author.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Very inspiring all thr way.
The fighting sprit reigns.
Very motivating and courageous with a life so full of patience and the endurance is great to weather all the storms in life.
This is How I understand this well written and nicely presented.poem with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Precious as it is
Write on
Good Afternoon
Too bad, when you are suppose to enjoy the camping here comes a bully and ruin the fun and harmony.
Bully must be given a lesson and must stop bullying others.
For me, even at a young age they must serve prison terms as a disciplinary action.
I shou4 to the whole world
NO TO BULLYING
Thank You for sharing this.
Write on.
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