Good Afternoon,
Beautiful Flower
Beautiful title
Beautiful Poetry
Beautiful worda and lines that completed this work of art
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
" Let our caring spread on the winds of love "
My favorite lines that is very inspiring.
Thank You for sharing and for the awesome read.
Write on
Good Morning,
An Essay and a Song.
Both are nicely done with great presentation.
The Essay speaks of Yesterday and it clearly described the given titlenin such a way giving your readers clarity and understanding.
Racial descrimination happened in the past is also happening now although it lessened as people are aware of Human worth regardless of what color is your skin.
This serves as an Awesone documentary that is well written all the way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A short story that is well written and nicely presented.
The conversation is very convincing as in a real situation and the present condition of mind, heart and soul of two people.
Then the slap .but at the end
Love overrules
Thar how powerful Love is.
Great story
A great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a given title that fits for the political situation of the country at present time
Policies, Promises and Nonsense
Yes..this pooitical campaign period and the poetic words and lines fit for the given title.
Yhis is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
Fruit Pizza
Surely this is delicious as well as nutritious.
And with fruits as main ingredients the pizza looks attractive and very inviting.
I wish to have a slice or too to complement with a mug of steaming hot coffee.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning
A wonderful Title of a free verse poetry
A Beautiful Reality
A Real Resolution
The world yesterday and today that surely a reflection of tomorrow.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Each line fits for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
A very interesting title of a poem
Transformation
Reading between the lines I am happy for you for such a great and wonderful transformation that you experienced in your journey called life.
Very productive transformation indeed.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented. It haa good flow and the special message is addresses to somebody in your life whon you shared sweet Memories.
"Today I thought of those good times"
First line that means a lot
Thank You for sharing
Thinking Of You
Write on.
Good Afternoon
A well written short story that expresses a grateful heart.
Sharon received such special gift from
Granda
The title is very nice and wise to say to people who are kind to you
A nice story that is sharing a joyful message
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very sad happening to a person when you are begging for food.
A very unpleasant plight and yes there are kind hearted individuals who are willing to give yet some prefer to ignore the plea.
This is truthful and very sad.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
The message is clear as well as the given title
Just Delve In
With A careful Clarity
The title is very Clear indeed as well aa its message.
The lines at the Last stanza are most meaningful.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A love poetry that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
The words are pleading and true.
The title is captivating as well as very meaningful.
Give Me A Sign
A poem that says
Please give me a sign that you are mine and All mine.
Interesting..
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A love poetry that has somethings to do with months of the year as I read the given title
Come September
A poem with great anyicipation on what will gonna happen next..
It mentioned the month of June
And when September waa being said it has expresses a joyful passion.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented Essay and with a very inspiring title
Building be Self Esteem Through
God's Word
Each line speaks of great importance of God's words in our daily living m
The lines at the last paragraph are my favorite lines that are truthful, meaningful and awesome.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A lovely poetry with a joyous message
A Christmas Poem
This is well written and nicely presented all the way
This looks like a very beautiful christmas card with its meaningful words and lines
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Merry Christmas is on the Air.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Intriguing and interesting title
Stupid Hurts
A story about the love of this sports called Skiing.
Friends come along to enjoy this sports.
The story vividly picture what was going on then the sad part at the the end.
This is well written all the way.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The title is expressing so much joy and happiness..
A Gift
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Adorable lines That completed this work of art.
The last few lines make me smile as the gift is truly wonderful.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning
An interesting title of a poem
Expectations
Reading between the lines makes me say that truly a book is very interesting piece of work and that it can be made into a very interesting movie too.
Yes...to that great writers and authors,
Congratulations for the talents.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very inspiring Story.
Precioua and very special.
The connectedness of the life of a dog named Chase and the chases of life and in life by the brilliant author.
Brilliant in a way that makes the comparison sound and clear as in there is always a good reason for everything.
Fascinating in its own special way of writing a story.
God Bless You
Always..
Good Morning
This is a Very beautiful free verse poetry with a very interesting and meaningful title
The Cross Around My Neck
I love the whole Poem as well as I love the wonderful rhythm and rhyme
The poem speaks of the great importance of the cross .
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
Highly impressive.
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The title is captivating as I always look forward to watch the sunset.
As The Sun Sets
My favorite line :
" As the sun sets a small sparkling stsr shines a quick burst of hope '
This is inspiring indeed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very unique story with an interesting title
The Short Term Loan
David turned into Julie
The overnight transformation from a man to a woman
A dream ? a nightmare or magic ?
Whatever and it has a price ..
And in writing . Possibilities are endless.,
As I said..truly unique.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Evening,
The given title is inspiring and powerful
Love shoulders The Promise
As in all is fair in love
I admire the chosen lines that completed this work of art.
" For all their joyousness
Towards their noble Creator "
Wonderful conclusion.
Great poem.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very Captivating as well as intriguing title of an Essay or a short story.
Very interesting lines that completed this work of art.
The last three lines of this Essay answers it all and it woll always be mysterious as always.
A nice be read.
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Good Morning,
The first line is very inspiring.
As I go along reading between the lines, it expresses a message of so.much pain in your heart and thsr writing it serves aa a great release.
Always remember that there is always hope and tomorrow will be brighter than today.
All is well and all will be well.
God Bless You.
Write on.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
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