Overall Impression:
Hello Wistful, I am reviewing this poem for your package win. Thank you for supporting my auction. This is a great, simple poem about life. The description fits the poem.

Structure/Form:
The structure works. Every stanza stars with the word think, it helps create a unified feel to the poem. I like how there is a question and the rest of the lines start with Of. You make a point and each line adds to the last.

Emotion:
It reminds how on much joy life can bring.

Favorite Line(s)
Of playing the lead character of a never ending best seller

As a writer this line is my favorite.
Suggestions:
I do have one suggestion. I noticed two of the lines end with a period. I would suggest either you have punctuation in your poem or none at all, to me it looks off. That is my only suggestion!

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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Overall Impression:
Hello Hilary, you won a package on my auction. I decided to pick one of my own. If you wanted a different poem to have been reviewed, just email me.
I picked this poem, the description caught my interest.

Structure/Form:
I would guess this poem is free style. A suggestion would be to add this info at the bottom of the poem. The structure is basic, with short lines and stanzas. This goes along with the poem and its rhythm.

Emotion:
Longing for the sun, the night can seem at times as if it will go on forever.

Favorite Line(s):
To come and chase
away the darkness
that’s surrounding me so.

Three wonderful lines.
Suggestions:
None, unless you want to consider lengthening it.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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Overall Impression:
Hello Brick and welcome to WDC. Counting poems is a great take on the whole he loves, he loves me not. I like how each petal describes different aspects of their relationship. The last line adds so much depth the poem.

Structure/Form:
Works.

Emotion:
Two emotions fighting each other, love for some of the things he does and the unhappiness caused by the hurtful ones.

Favorite Line(s)
Do I love him?

Love this line.
Suggestions:
None.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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Overall Impression:
Hi Summer Wind. You have been kind enough to visit my port and I am returning the favor. This poem caught my interest, I write poetry and have some interesting reviews before. I saw one member state in a review, I know you were going for the artsy thing, but you shouldn't because you can't do it. Not at all encouraging.

Structure/Form:
The structure works, it short poem and it kept my interest. The rhyming was done well too. No lines seem to be forced to go along with the others.

Emotion:
The frustration of dealing with a reviewer with no regard to the emotional impact of the poem, the reason why a lot of people write them.

Favorite Line(s)
we would all be shocked to see you're literarily blind.

Great line to end the poem.
Suggestions:
When I spell checked my review the word literarily came up as mis-spelled, I wanted to give you a heads up about it.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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Overall Impression:
You visited my port a while back I am returning the favor. I picked the name and description intrigued me. I have never heard of Rengay style and I was curious about it. This poem makes me think of warm weather, beaches and sunshine. I am writing this review and looking out the window to see the snow falling.

Structure/Form:
The structure works, I skimmed over the link you gave about Rengay poetry and it goes along with it.

Emotion:
The emotion I felt while reading your poem of course is longing, but were in a middle of a snow storm warning. The others I feel the joy and relaxing feel of being at a beautiful location.

Suggestions:
None.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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Hi Snow. You visited my port and I am returning the favor. I picked this poem, the title intrigued me. The poem goes over an affair with one person who can admit the truth. This works, a lot of secret loves do not last.

Structure/Form:
You follow the structure for an acrostic poem. Some lines are repeated and it adds to the poem and it gives an unique perspective.

Emotion:
Lust, passion and the feelings that come from giving in to ones temptations.

Favorite Line(s)
denied by one who gave in to desire;

Loved this line.
Suggestions:
None.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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Overall Impression:I decided to review a poem you wrote for bad poetry contest. I gave it one star, because bad poetry deserves it.

Structure/Form:The only thing that would work as poem and the rhyming is done well.

Emotion:Its jumbled to the point the poem has little focus. I get I would call it pointless, but part of the reason its bad.

Favorite Line(s)
That is until he gets candy.

Funny line.
Suggestions:
None. I don't think it could get any worse.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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Overall Impression:Hello Angus. I was haunting your port when I noticed Squirrel Survivor. I didn't have time to read it before, but today I a moment. The poem works, it makes me think of squirrels running across a busy street.

Structure/Form:it works with the poem. I don't think squirrels would have long or in depth thoughts.

Emotion:The squirrel goes through a series of emotions, but it ends in horror after he sees his flattened tail.

Favorite Line(s)
Good thing I'm-what?
MY TAIL!

Memorable lines to end the poem.
Suggestions:
None.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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Overall Impression:
You reviewed an item of mine and I am returning the favor. I picked this poem, because April Fool's day just passed us by. I have to admit I didn't pull any pranks on anyone and no one played one one me.
I liked this poem, the line Nobody can ever fool me is the perfect line to be repeated through the poem. It is a great poem for a silly holiday.

Structure/Form:
You followed the rules for the format perfectly.

Emotion:
Better be careful of April's fool day.

Favorite Line(s)
Nobody can ever fool me.

Love this line.
Suggestions:
None.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.

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