Hello two of four Congratulations on your recent nomination to "Ink Blot Hall of Fame" and your door prize win in the Author Appreciation Day event.
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Well I certainly didn't expect that for an ending! What an awesome story ! My thoughts on the guy in this piece were quite the same as Rhonda's; crazy but most likely harmless. Boy was I wrong .
Right from the beginning, I knew that this was one of those stories that reels you in and keeps you glued to your seat. It has all of the necessary elements to make it a true thriller; mystery, suspense and a dramatic ending. Everything about this story is fabulous. Except maybe for the waiter... I would recommend this story to anyone who is looking for a real shocker.
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I am so glad I decided to review this item. It is very informative and educational. There is so much here that I didn't know it's hard not to be drawn in. You have done your homework.
This story is superbly written and there were no errors found.
I can honestly say that I never knew how Thanksgiving came into being. Now thanks to you and this great story I know!
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This is a great poem and a real eye opener. I have heard it say that nothing is ever free. Your poem certainly makes that statement true.
This piece shows the sacrifices others had to make for our freedom. It starts out with a great rhyme sheme but it seems to get lost after the first few lines. There were also a few places where the overall flow was compromised. There were no spelling errors found however. Nice work my friend.
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My World (E) This is what I experience each day, a little different from everyone else. #1495934 by Jewel Busy Busy Busy!
I can't say for one minute that I now what it is like to live like you do. I have closed my eyes and tried to move around in my own home and it isn't easy. I have great admiration for visually impaired people.
Your poem gives us a look at what daily life is like for you. It's very descriptive and has good imagery. Your poem has good form and a nice even flow. There were no errors found.
I can't imagine what finding this out would have been like for you. Personally, I most likely would have chosen to do something drastic. I have read that "positive thinking" can go a long way in healing someone so can the power of prayer.
I am so pleased that you decided to share your story with us. I think there is a lesson here to be learned and if we all look at the 5 things you have done, our lives may start to change for the positive.
I can see why you gave this the title you did. In only a few words you managed to create a vivid image. I must admit the act of licking ones lips in a seductive manner is quite a tease.
You have executed the form of this senryu perfectly. There were no errors found.
This is such an inspirational and moving piece of poetry. When I think about all of the people in this world who are missing out on so much by not accepting Christ into their lives; I could cry. You poem shows us that even though we don't feel we are worthy and that because of our sins we shouldn't be saved, Jesus is there. He is waiting for us to open our hearts and let him in.
I think this poem could be a wake up call for many of us. It is beautifully written and there are no errors. Great write Audra!
I am more than sure there are many people who can relate to this poem. I think we have all felt lost at one point in our lives.
Your poem raises some good questions that may never be completely answered, but who knows.
There are a few things that I noticed in this poem that should be corrected. In several place you ended your sentences with a question mark but the sentence continues into the next line. You need to delineate where the line ending is going to be before you add the "?".
I didn't find any spelling errors in this poem.
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This is a deep and powerful poem. It tells a story of a lost and desperate soul longing to be found. It evoked strong emotions in me because not so long ago I was in the same place. It's a difficult place to be especially when we don't feel anyone can hear our cries for help.
The good thing about this poem is that the writer has recognized the need to be found and know what steps to take to get there. This is a great start.
The overall composition of this poem is great. It is free form, therefore doesn't have a strict from to follow. The flow is even and I didn't find any errors. Write on!
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I love acrostic poetry and this is a fantastic piece. With a simple title, you have given your readers a look at what you see in the color of a rose. It isn't what most would relate it to and I think that's what makes this poem one of a kind. For me, there was hidden meaning. I can't exactly put it into words though.
I liked the added touch of the colored text at the beginning of each line. There were no issues found with the form of this poem. It has a good rhyme scheme and a nice even flow. There were no errors found anywhere in this piece. Great write!
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You paint a stunning image for your readers with this elegant and articulate poem. It took me through a range of emotions as I read it.
The composition of this Spenserian sonnet is flawless. There were no spelling or grammatical errors found. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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In times of trouble it is reassuring to know that our Lord and Savior is right by our side all along. Sometimes we often take him for granted when we are the ones who are lacking. Your poem gives hope to those who may need reminding of what He does for us. It is uplifting and inspirational.
There were no issues with the form of this piece and the meter is perfect. Awesome write Shirley!
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I nearly pee'd my pants when I read this poem. Especially this line: "Across my crotch when'er I sit" Too funny! Your sense of humor shines bright in this hilarious poem.
The form-meter-rhyme scheme are flawless and I didn't find any spelling or grammatical errors. Job well done!
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I am simply amazed each time I read one of these complex poems. The detailed structure they require is highlighted by the works of literary art created when one is written. This one is astounding! The moment I started reading it, I could feel goosebumps form over my skin. It is pure perfection Shirley!
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us here at WDC!
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My what a beatiful and inspiring poem. Your words come alive on the page and fill the reader with a joyful noise. This poem is so uplifting I felt my mood change as I read it. Truly remarkable!
There are no issues or errors that were found in this delightful poem.
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This is a lovely poem. You have given your readers a great visual. You have a strong rhyme scheme at work in this piece and it also has great form and meter. There were no errors observed.
I would like to know why you have another name listed at the bottom of this piece. Is it not originally yours?
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This folder contains the best artwork I have ever seen. Looking at all of these images here caused one of those jaw dropping moments some experience when coming across something truly remarkable. You are so fortunate to be able to put your talents to use. I am an aspiring Graphic Designer and looking at your work motivates me beyong words. I am privledged to have the opportunity to review your work.
When we start judging others for their wrong doings we soon realize that we aren't much different from them. This poem highlights that fact boldly. The message it gives to its readers is loud and clear.
Overall, this is a really good poem. I did find that the meter was off in a few places. I would suggest looking at the syllable count to see of you can even it out.
There were no errors found in this poem.
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I am inspried by this wonderful poem about children and their journey through life. There is so much to admire about them it's hard to focus on one thing. Your poem is a touching reminder of how children impact our lives.
Looking at the technical aspect of this poem, I found it to be well written, it has great form and there are no errors. Thanks for entering the contest.
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You have done a superb job harnessing true love with this sensational poem. There is no doubt in my mind that these two people were meant for each other. This piece is wonderfully written, has a nice even flow and there are no errors. Awesome Write!
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This poem is breath-taking. You have captured the joy, beauty and wonder of nature in this piece. The words flow freely off the page creating a vivid picture for your readers to enjoy. It's perfect my friend. Write on!
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This poem is a lovely tribute to our Lord and savior Jesus Christ. It speaks of his birth and the wonder surrounding it. I think you did a great job with this poem as it highlights the most important aspects of Christmas.
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My first reaction to this poem was "oh no this can't be real." I can't imagine doing anything so careless by shooting a gun on a dare. Your poem is written with a sorrowful sentiment that the reader can feel. The rhyme scheme and meter are great and I didn't find any errors. Write on!
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I would have to agree with the woman's sentiment of "This is fun?" during her first skiing experience. I have never been on the slopes or do I care to ever go. I am to scared to break something.
I enjoyed the humor of this short story. It is very well written and there are no errors. Great write Ken.
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! I'm thrilled you were chosen for this honor 
! My thoughts on the guy in this piece were quite the same as Rhonda's; crazy but most likely harmless. Boy was I wrong 
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I would recommend this story to anyone who is looking for a real shocker.
Your sense of humor shines bright in this hilarious poem. 
