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I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
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In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
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I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
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Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
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pros, books
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Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Matt,

Just when I think I've come upon a poll that's like none other, I find one that tops it. This poll is definitely unique and it is safe to say that I've never seen a poll like this.. I like it.

I voted that I would encourage. I actually dated a guy for a very brief time that dressed up for the Rocky Horror Picture Show. I thought "whatever".

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Hapenis  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Hunters!

I have read "Hapenis" Open in new Window. and I offer you these suggestions.

First impression:Well, my very first impression was the title. How could I not love that title? lol


What I liked most: While, I like a ton of poetry, hardly any poem makes me smile all through it. This one did. Well for one, I quite enjoy the topic. Another thingn is that this was written with a good sense of humor.




Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling:You had the line your remind me of your purpose as I pass through each day. You should make your into you.




Write on!

Jenny
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Review of Holiday Dinner  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Mike,

Thanks for entering my contest. I hope to see you here again.

This prompt was cable tv shows. You got about half right. I am pretty sure the other half are shows on in sindication, like Yes, Deer. What About Bob, Bachelor Party, and She's Got The look are movies, not cable shows.

Needless to say, I am awarding you with second place. I did enjoy the story. The 3.5 rating is due to the sindicated shows and movies. I do hope to see another entry from you in the future.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Hunter,

I'm glad that you entered this contest. I was happy to read your entry. It was just what I was looking for. Those are the types of shows I was talking about. Some people were just confused about that for some reason.

I am giving first place to you. I hope to see you here again.

*Smile* write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello Stallion,

I chose the "who the hell are you?" option although my answer isn't up there. Here's my answer: If he was dressed in simple jeans and a t shirt, I'd probably hit on him. Just thought I'd share.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Gene,

I have read "Supernatural Stereotypes" Open in new Window. and I offer you my thoughts.

This was a good poll, but I think you should have specified somewhere that you were talking about fiction. I say that because I really enjoy supernatural nonfiction.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Hoshi,

I have read "Popular Internet Videos" Open in new Window. and offer you my thought.

This was very good and you put the correct kinds of words, to put in the blank spaces. That is what made this a great mad lib.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Kenzie,

I have read "A Peanut Butter Life" Open in new Window. and I would like to share my thoughts.

This short little piece was very well written. I enjoyed reading about your dad's love of peanut butter that you inherited. The part about Thanksgiving was funny, in my opinion.

I would only put peanut butter on crackers or celery. I might try it on the stuff you mentioned, if I was dared and napkins were close by. As far as my favorite food; tough call. I love lasagna (& other italian dishes} I love Mexican, and I love cheeseburgers.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Who was Jesus?  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Andres,

I chose other. This is a question, that I have no idea about the answer. I've heard many things. The only way anyone would really know the answer, is to go back in a time machine. Questions like this always make me think; which is why I rated it a 5.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Memory  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello write2b,

I read "Memory" Open in new Window. and I offer you my thoughts.

This was about something that's just part of life and tends to get worse with age. I really loved this. Personally, I think that things like this should always be looked at with humor. There were no mistakes either.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Write On  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ProsperousSnow,

I have read "Write On" Open in new Window. and I offeryou these comments.

I always love this type of poem. This was very well written and it encourages to write on. There were no typos or errors either.

Great work!

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Ye Olde Diary  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Congrats Mike!

I felt like this entry deserved first place. (well, there was only 2 entries this round) I like that you made it a diary entry. I hope to see you come back around to this contest! *Smile*

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of The Harlequin  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Kiya!

I have read "The Harlequin" Open in new Window. and I offer you these suggestions.



What I liked most: I love this stle of poem and everything fit nicely together.




Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling:None that I could tell.

*Smile*

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Annie,

This was a great free verse poem. I liked when you said marble, because I could picture the size. I hope that you just wrote this thinking about the subject and don't have breast cancer, yourself. If so, it must be a very scary thing to go through.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SybariticScribe,

I read "Remembering Winters, pt 2 - Sledding " Open in new Window. and I give you my thoughts.

First I want to get the technical stuff out of the way. I don't have any suggestions for improvement. This seemed flawlessly written.

This took me back to my days of playing in the snow. I used to love it, but now I hate the snow. I can't believe I ever loved being in the snow. lol

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Pictures  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello Atilla,

Of course I loved the pictures. Your baby is adorable. Their names are also spectacular. Destiny and karma. That's awesome. Does your name happen to fit with theirs?

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello D.L.!

I have read "NO ROOM IN THE BATHROOM" Open in new Window. and I offer you these comments.


First impression: I could just tell from the pattern of it, that I was going to like it.



What I liked best: The humor all throughout. In each stanza, you didn't lose the rhythm and it kept in beat.



Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: Just great. *Bigsmile*

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Snapshots  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Kristi,

I was just going to rate and review all the individual pictures. I couldn't do that though, because I would've saaaaid the same thing about all of them. Well, maybe different adjectives. Do you work for a post card company or something? All of the pictures are absolutely astonishing!

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Hospital  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Scorpio Lady,

I have read "Hospital" Open in new Window. and I offer you these comments.

I thought that this was very good and I could see everything going on, as I read it. Felt like I was observing things really happening.

The only thing wrong, was this sentence Monitors bleep rhythmically, above their head bleep should be beep.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Mark! I read "Army Werewolf: Prologue" Open in new Window.and I offer you you these comments.


First Impression: I was really curious when I saw the length of this.


What I liked: I liked how you described what was going on.





Suggestions: Personally, I think that you should just not even bother with a prologue. Other writers share that same opinion too. I think that you should either lengthen this or take it out all together.


Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: None.


*Star*

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Zapped  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Philip!
I read "Zapped" Open in new Window.and I offer you you these comments.


First Impression: About a little kid that couldn't resist the urge to stick his finger in a light socket.


What I liked: I liked that it was told in the kid's point of view.





Suggestions: Maybe work it in how old the narrator is. I think this would give the story more to go on. Like is the narrator five or ten?


Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: They seem comical now, would have not been near so funny had they been uttered that day. The correct spelling is commical



*Star*

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Vick,

This was an excellent in & out, I thought. Anything to do with music or any other of the arts is good, in my opinion. I always like to find out what people are into.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of My Master's Agony  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello A. Shakib,

I have read "My Master's Agony" Open in new Window. and I offer you my comments.

When I first saw the title, I was thinking it was going to be about a genie. I was surprised. It's a good thing when it isn't predictable because of the title.

This was a very good poem with no mistakes and a nice outcome.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim,

I read "Shameless biography" Open in new Window.and I would like to share my thoughts.

I just love reading about people. It's great how many published things you have. I only have poetry published. I procrastinate way too much..

My favorite part in here was....{color:lblue}This might have something to do with the fact that my delightful wife happens to be a third-degree black belt. Not every man is brave enough to marry a woman that can kick his butt. (not that she does, but she could) *Laugh* Great stuff.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Adriana A to Z!  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Mara,

This was just fantastic in my opinion. It kind of inspires me to do one myself. I also saw no errors. Simply perfect!

Write on,

Jenny

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