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I look to be entertained, informed, and connected in some way. It may be wrong but if the first few lines or paragraphs don't hook me in some way, I will leave without even reading the rest. Also, I will notify you if I run into errors.
I'm good at...
I do not mean to toot my own horn but I am awesome at limericks. I've helped so many people with limericks. I've even thought about opening up a class here on limericks.
Favorite Genres
In no particular order: humor, horror, biography. I'll read any genre but those are my main favorites!
Least Favorite Genres
I'm not sure. Maybe legal or finance but if done in the right voice, even that can be good.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, short stories, bios, essays,fiction, and nonfiction
Least Favorite Item Types
pros, books
I will not review...
Something that is LONG like 100 kbs or something. I will only review long pieces if someone requests it of me but nothing that's 100 kb. Let's not get crazy or anything.
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Hoshi,

I have read "Popular Internet Videos" Open in new Window. and offer you my thought.

This was very good and you put the correct kinds of words, to put in the blank spaces. That is what made this a great mad lib.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Kenzie,

I have read "A Peanut Butter Life" Open in new Window. and I would like to share my thoughts.

This short little piece was very well written. I enjoyed reading about your dad's love of peanut butter that you inherited. The part about Thanksgiving was funny, in my opinion.

I would only put peanut butter on crackers or celery. I might try it on the stuff you mentioned, if I was dared and napkins were close by. As far as my favorite food; tough call. I love lasagna (& other italian dishes} I love Mexican, and I love cheeseburgers.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Who was Jesus?  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Andres,

I chose other. This is a question, that I have no idea about the answer. I've heard many things. The only way anyone would really know the answer, is to go back in a time machine. Questions like this always make me think; which is why I rated it a 5.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Memory  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello write2b,

I read "Memory" Open in new Window. and I offer you my thoughts.

This was about something that's just part of life and tends to get worse with age. I really loved this. Personally, I think that things like this should always be looked at with humor. There were no mistakes either.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Write On  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ProsperousSnow,

I have read "Write On" Open in new Window. and I offeryou these comments.

I always love this type of poem. This was very well written and it encourages to write on. There were no typos or errors either.

Great work!

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Ye Olde Diary  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Congrats Mike!

I felt like this entry deserved first place. (well, there was only 2 entries this round) I like that you made it a diary entry. I hope to see you come back around to this contest! *Smile*

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of The Harlequin  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Kiya!

I have read "The Harlequin" Open in new Window. and I offer you these suggestions.



What I liked most: I love this stle of poem and everything fit nicely together.




Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling:None that I could tell.

*Smile*

Write on!

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Annie,

This was a great free verse poem. I liked when you said marble, because I could picture the size. I hope that you just wrote this thinking about the subject and don't have breast cancer, yourself. If so, it must be a very scary thing to go through.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SybariticScribe,

I read "Remembering Winters, pt 2 - Sledding " Open in new Window. and I give you my thoughts.

First I want to get the technical stuff out of the way. I don't have any suggestions for improvement. This seemed flawlessly written.

This took me back to my days of playing in the snow. I used to love it, but now I hate the snow. I can't believe I ever loved being in the snow. lol

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Pictures  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello Atilla,

Of course I loved the pictures. Your baby is adorable. Their names are also spectacular. Destiny and karma. That's awesome. Does your name happen to fit with theirs?

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello D.L.!

I have read "NO ROOM IN THE BATHROOM" Open in new Window. and I offer you these comments.


First impression: I could just tell from the pattern of it, that I was going to like it.



What I liked best: The humor all throughout. In each stanza, you didn't lose the rhythm and it kept in beat.



Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: Just great. *Bigsmile*

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Snapshots  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Kristi,

I was just going to rate and review all the individual pictures. I couldn't do that though, because I would've saaaaid the same thing about all of them. Well, maybe different adjectives. Do you work for a post card company or something? All of the pictures are absolutely astonishing!

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Hospital  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Scorpio Lady,

I have read "Hospital" Open in new Window. and I offer you these comments.

I thought that this was very good and I could see everything going on, as I read it. Felt like I was observing things really happening.

The only thing wrong, was this sentence Monitors bleep rhythmically, above their head bleep should be beep.

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello Mark! I read "Army Werewolf: Prologue" Open in new Window.and I offer you you these comments.


First Impression: I was really curious when I saw the length of this.


What I liked: I liked how you described what was going on.





Suggestions: Personally, I think that you should just not even bother with a prologue. Other writers share that same opinion too. I think that you should either lengthen this or take it out all together.


Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: None.


*Star*

Write on,

Jenny
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Review of Zapped  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Philip!
I read "Zapped" Open in new Window.and I offer you you these comments.


First Impression: About a little kid that couldn't resist the urge to stick his finger in a light socket.


What I liked: I liked that it was told in the kid's point of view.





Suggestions: Maybe work it in how old the narrator is. I think this would give the story more to go on. Like is the narrator five or ten?


Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: They seem comical now, would have not been near so funny had they been uttered that day. The correct spelling is commical



*Star*

Write on,

Jenny
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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Vick,

This was an excellent in & out, I thought. Anything to do with music or any other of the arts is good, in my opinion. I always like to find out what people are into.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of My Master's Agony  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello A. Shakib,

I have read "My Master's Agony" Open in new Window. and I offer you my comments.

When I first saw the title, I was thinking it was going to be about a genie. I was surprised. It's a good thing when it isn't predictable because of the title.

This was a very good poem with no mistakes and a nice outcome.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim,

I read "Shameless biography" Open in new Window.and I would like to share my thoughts.

I just love reading about people. It's great how many published things you have. I only have poetry published. I procrastinate way too much..

My favorite part in here was....{color:lblue}This might have something to do with the fact that my delightful wife happens to be a third-degree black belt. Not every man is brave enough to marry a woman that can kick his butt. (not that she does, but she could) *Laugh* Great stuff.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Adriana A to Z!  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Mara,

This was just fantastic in my opinion. It kind of inspires me to do one myself. I also saw no errors. Simply perfect!

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Bill,

I read "You Bet Yer Life, Pilgrim" Open in new Window. and I offer you my comments.

This was a very good story of two guys talking about pilgrims.

I thought that this was great. Even though there were no descriptions of the two guys, I was able to picture them very clearly. This was a very good story. Loved the ending.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello webWitch,

I have read "~A Thanksgiving Story~" Open in new Window. and I offer you my thoughts.

This story was fantastic. All the way through, I was thinking that ther was going to be a mishap, but I was pleasantly surprised. Just out of curiosity, do you do this every year? *Laugh* Maybe you should let food network know and you can make money off of it. Great story.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Fifty things  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Mrs. Whatsi-turkey,

I really liked reading this. Very interesting. Here are my thoughts on just a few things in the list of yours....

Rent all the movies I have always wanted to watch; If I sat down and watched all the movies I want to watch, I'd be sitting there for a year straight. And that's not even including the movies that come out in the time I'm trying to catch up

Own a bookstore. I'm thinking of a clever name for it, like BookMarket, which sounds like bookmark it. Excellent name! Hey, if anything at least you could write a story with the store in there or maybe even with that as a title.


Give a speech without fear. If you can conquer this without being hypnotized great. I'd just rather pay someone to do it for me.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Ben,

I have read "Mistaken All Week?" Open in new Window. and I'd like to share my thoughts.

This was fantastic. Well, I wasn't surprised since I have never been dissapointed reading anything by you. I loved all the styles of poetry and I didn't see one mistake.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Judy,

I have read "Things Leukemia Has Taught Me" Open in new Window. and I offer you my feedback.

First, I'd like to get the technical things out of the way. This was written perfecty and had no mistakes.

This was very well written and it made me see this through your eyes. Sorry to hear that you have this disease. I only knew of kids to have it. The oldest I knew of that had it, was a cheerleader in high school. She was the only person that was allowed to wear a hat to school, since she had no hair. She wore a white baseball cap with a fake flower at the bottom of it. Sadly, she died at the end of that school year. I never personally knew her, but she was always so nice and bubbly from what I saw. Guess this story of yours reminds me of her though I didn't really know her. Just thought I'd share.

Write on,

Jenny

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Review of Dark or Light  Open in new Window.
Review by *Jenny* Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Gohst,

I chose horror. I think that you should include a few more options though. That is just what I think. You don't have to change a thing if you don't want.

Write on,

Jenny

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