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Review of My Dream Job  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It sounds like being a travel writer would be a lot of fun!

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Patterns  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was funny and I enjoyed it.
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Review of Caveat Emptor  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was really good. Enjoyed reading it.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Visitors  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this story and I think you wrote it well. I like how the Crystals tried to help and it sad the help was not accepted.

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Little Chubby  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a good story if a little sad. Poor Little Chubby, I feel sorry for him. I have an artificial tree, it doesn't die but will wear out in time.

Good Work Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Savior our Lord  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem, what it says, how it says it, everything about it.

Keep Writing and God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Enticement  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the poem but I did not understand the last sentence.

God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A lovely poem of thanksgiving.

God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Facebook Photos  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. I feel for the teacher. Makes you realize once it's on the internet it is never gone.
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Review of Greeting the Ex-  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A lot said in 100 words. Very good.

God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I loved this story! I love fairy tales.

God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen and Amen! I agree with what you have written. Our Rock our Salvation is Jesus Christ!

Thank you for this writing.

God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That is so true 'nothing lasts forever'. Now if I could just get my husband to understand that! He can fix it, is his motto! I liked this poem.

God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Winter  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am not familiar with the terminology of poetry, or how it is written, but I like this poem. I can see it in my minds eye.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this but not sure I understand it. Is this about an accident? To ride in the van - death/hearse?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem and agree with it.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a sweet story, I felt sorry for the girl and hope she finds release in her writing.
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Review of The Mansion  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A good poem, kind of gruesome, but held my interest all through. I was waiting to see how it would end.
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Review of Dark Poet  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I usually don't read things that are dark, but I like this poem. It flows and I could 'see' the person in distress.
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Review of More Why  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love this, a truly wonderful piece of writing about God and faith. This had to have been inspired by God.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like this story. I dont think I would want to work everyday. These people did not have freedom.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I always knew robots would take over! Cyrus is a different kind. I like this story.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I would like a little more info on the family. I know you have a word limit for the contest, maybe make this into a longer short story.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I do like this story, I know I keep saying that, but it is true. What I would like to know is how you keep track of what you have written against what you still have to write. Do you use a program or anything like that? an outline? I've never been good with outlines. Anyway, can't wait to hear what else Cleo is hiding.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting. Will have to think it through.
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