Loved this story! I love science fiction and I would like to see this as a movie. I think you wrote it very well and had me on the edge of my chair. Thanks for a good read.
I like this poem, it makes me smile I like flowers and rainbows. A question - should there be an 'a' in the next to the last line? I don't write poetry so thought I would ask.
I don't normally review poetry because I don't write poetry and don't know the mechanics of it. I don't know this form of poetry but I realized what you were doing and that is a first for me. I liked the poem and it made me feel a little chilly!
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.26 seconds at 3:19am on Jul 04, 2024 via server web1.