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Review of Anomanunka  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this short story - I did not find any errors or need for correction.

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LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your essay. I for one do believe in beings from other planets and solar systems. Do I have any proof? None other than I saw an unidentified object in the sky as a child. I do believe that our government is very capable of hiding its involvement with other beings. I also believe that there are good and bad aliens - just like there are good and bad humans. I wish that I had proof - but I don't. I also believe that there are a lot of people who like to prey on people who believe they have had these experiences. I could go on and on but this is a review not a place for me to write an essay! Sorry about that!

I found this very well written, and very interesting. Only time will tell if there are aliens or not.

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LW
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Review of He saw Nazi UFO's  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was great! I really enjoyed it. The only correction I see needed is in the 4th paragraph from the bottom in the last sentence - 'of' should be 'or'?

I like the addition of 'Author's note', I believe that it is very possible to have captured an Alien craft.

I enjoyed reading this short story, hope to read more of your writing soon.

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LW
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is interesting and I enjoyed reading it. One way to help with writing, I think is to take some writing classes, in whatever genre you are interested in. They are fun and they help. Always pay attention to grammar etc. that part is hard for me, I know when it sounds good but cannot tell you why. Any way keep reading and writing and one day it will happen. We always strive to do our best.

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LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a sad part of American History! We can't change the past - we can only hope to learn from it. I think that you wrote it well, it flows and I followed it. I did not find any errors. You made this part of our history very real - I felt as if I were there.

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LW
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Review of FIRE  
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem, the story it tells, the rhyme, the pain. Our home burned years ago when I was a kid, but have not forgotten.

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LW
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Review of The Bridge  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this, I could picture every scene! It flowed and rhymed and made me wish, I could write like this.

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LW
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Review of Summertime heat  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I really liked your short story. It held my attention and made me laugh. The kids sound very real to me - I can just see them on the sidewalk.

I did not see any technical or grammar issues.

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LW
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Review of Big Brother  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sad, sad, sad. Very well written.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I, too, am looking for a publisher. I was looking at author house - I don't know that I can do all the formatting required for Lulu. Was it difficult?

I enjoyed your article, it was helpful to me.

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LW
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Review of The Gift Of Life  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this.
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LW
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Review of DADDY'S SHOTGUN  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That must have been a horrible experience to live through. I am sure your writing an autobiography would help someone going thru the same things.

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LW
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Review of our witch  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like the story this poem tells. I think it flows well too.

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LW
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Review of Bed of Roses  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't understand how poetry is written so I do not review to form. I liked this poem and I think it flowed well.

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LW
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Review of A Snowy Night.  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. It flows well and I can see the scene.

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LW
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Star Trek and Star Wars were my favorite movies. I think you have a good start on another book/movie! I would say Keep at it.

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LW
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Review of To My Daughters  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a super poem to your daughters.

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LW
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Review of Free Agency  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked this story, you put a lot into 300 words.

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LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story and I am glad that Andrew won!

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LW
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Review of Once  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I have to be honest, I am confused by your story. I don't understand what happened. Were you hurt or was this a paranormal experience?

The first two sentences talk about this being your 7th year, I think you could probably reword those two sentences so as not to repeat yourself.

I do think you wrote it well, it does flow well, I was just confused.

Remember these are only my opinions, it is your work.

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LW
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Review of Memoirs  
for entry "Jury Duty" 
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting situation, I had been sleeping and the radio was on, I thought I was dreaming when I heard the news.

Good Story
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LW
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Review of Nick  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this story, I felt like I was right there with them in snow!

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LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really a great story. I had no idea that this was taking place underwater!

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LW
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a really great story and written extremely well, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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LW
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Review of The Story of "Is"  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this is great!

Thanks for reminding me.

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LW
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