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Review of Day 43  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I have enjoyed reading this series of stories. I would like to read from the beginning but cannot find it in your port. It is disheartening to think of a war in America, but looks like it might be headed that way. I would like to read all of these stories if possible.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem although it is sad, teaches us to be careful what we say and how we say it.
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Review of Earning It All  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked your story and I liked Janice, she seemed believable to me.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem and it flows well.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for allowing your sons to serve. I am sorry they were injured, I hope they are better by now. I like your poem also.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The bus maybe a better ride, when I worked downtown took the bus, it was great IF you got a good driver.
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Review of Deep Darkness  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Sad poem, but good.
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Review of Deep In Her Eyes.  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. I like its story.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem, I am a grandmother too and I also hope to be remembered thru all space and time.
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Review of Tough Luck  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is good and I enjoyed reading it. Glad you won.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed reading this. I think it is good.
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Review of A Warning  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading this. First bvb tome looked at this contest, it is fun.
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Review of Too Many Voices  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I think dialogue about writing and punctuation is great. I liked it.
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Review of The Apology  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love this story. I cant think of anything I would change.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Loved it! I love the wizarding world. This was a great story.
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Review of Making A Splash!  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am not a poet, so I don't really know how to review poetry except to tell you that I liked it. I thought it flowed well and was easy to read and understand and it made me laugh.
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Review of Madam President  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I like this short story. I think you wrote it well. It looks like you followed the headlines a little. I really like the ending. Put a smile on my face first time today.

Keep writing
Lw
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I started to just pass this by, but please start counting your blessings.
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Review of Life on a Farm  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is really great! I love it. That is life on a farm.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I liked this, Is this part of a longer write? I think it would make a great short story or longer. The only thing I saw was in 2nd paragraph is 'been' supposed to be 'be'?
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Review of Puzzled  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem, it flowed and was easy to understand, the story is great. I've read some poems on here, that I just don't get, so I was really happy to read this one. I don't write poetry (or very little) so it is hard for me to critique other than to say I thought it very good.
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Review of Doll Magic  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like your story.
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Review of The Knight's Tale  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I do not write poetry so I cannot critique it, I will say that I liked it, I liked reading it.
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Review of Emily's Steer  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this short story, it would be really hard to make 3 wishes. I think it would change way too much. I think you wrote it well.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I like your story, I love unicorns. The pictures of the unicorns are beautiful!
Keep Writing
LW
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