I did try to ride my bike after many, many years! I got a little way and then fell, the bike on top of me, and could not get up. Avery nice gentleman and his son stopped and helped me get up and watched until I got home. Bike riding is out for me!
I enjoyed this story very much. I see you wrote it a few years ago, I would like to offer a suggestion as to formatting. When writing dialog each person who speaks is a different paragraph. It makes it easier for people to read.
It is a good story and would like to read more if you decide to make it longer or make a series of short stories about your characters.
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