I enjoyed this short story. I think you wrote it well but it would be an easier read with paragraphs. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
One more reason not to like to fly on the airlines! I liked the story and was not surprised at the ending. Except maybe the last line. So the character must have known about the type of flight this was.
I found this in the Read and Review section. This made me think, I don't admire many people, and I don't believe in any kind of cruelty. My time is just as important as the rich person or whoever. However, I do agree that gossip can take down just about anyone. Gossip is cruel and can totally destroy a person and their reputation.
I found this story in the Read and Review section. This is a very entertaining story of two motorbikes and their human. I really enjoyed it and could see it plainly in my mind's eye! I think it must have been fun to ride them around town. It reminds me of the small motorbike my brother had when we were younger. Since you don't have Hema anymore, do you have another bike? I like the way you wrote about them as having a life of their own.
I found this in the Read and Review section. I like this poem it makes me feel quiet too. The only thing I see is in the next-to-last line the first "in" sounds like it should be "is". I do not critique poetry because I do not understand its technicalities. However, I do like to say what I like about it. She seems happy with her present circumstances and that is a rare thing.
I like this poem, kind of makes me feel sad, the house seems lonely. I've always wanted to visit a fishing village with all the boats. I do not critique poetry because I do not understand the technicalities of writing poetry. I like to read it and comment on how it makes me feel.
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