I really enjoyed this poem. I can just see the zebras using their tails to paint the strips! I like the black and white, I guess it answers the question 'are zebras black with white strips or the other way round.' They are green and grey!
This was a very sad story! I was hoping he would get help. In the back of my mind zombies took hold that's what I knew was coming. Shame theres no cure for that.
Good story. Thanks
Well, that's quite a story! Sounds a little like 'The Twilite Zone'. I enjoyed it and it kept me on the edge of my seat to see how it ended. Very good.
Keep writing
Dianne
Very well written. I don't critique poetry because I don't the ins and outs of it. But I know what I like and I like this one very much. We need to trust and follow Christ always.
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