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#4180937

Review of song

Review by embe

Rated: E

| (4.0)

In this moment today
lyrics to go with melody,
in this song by ache4hope
to take one step at a time.

I built my house on sand
but was the only place,
that i could see
last forever.

Together now
with this review,
lovely by embe here
in your singing words.

Simply Positive Review.

song

(E)
lyrics to go with melody, in progress
#2068322 by ache4hope

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#4180540

Review of Don't Run Aground

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

In this moment in time
a ship follows blindly,
now headed for a shoal
now astarboard or alee.

Saved all these hands
love being no weakness,
if you can see the fault
lovers might stay there.

We never have full sight
then don't follow blindly,
when never trying to see
look explore and be free.

By our dear poet catdok
reviewd by embe here,
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.

Don't Run Aground

(E)
Poem for Weekly Image Prompt contest
#2062051 by catdok

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#4180307

Review of End Time Canning/Recipes

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

In this moment in time
preserving butter yes,
its done different
in my glass jars.

Easier to get at
on a cookie sheet,
by setting the oven
in 350 for 15-20 min.

Let sit on the towel
with cooling down,
there be sealed
popping sound.

By our Dovaine
the poem writer,
reviewed by embe
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.

End Time Canning/Recipes

(E)
Preserving Butter?-Yes you can, but its done a little different
#2068022 by Dovaine

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#4180049

Review of My Biography

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Just in time for being retired
my real blessing in life is,
for my daughter and son
such wonderful people.

I have copyrighted now
with self-published book,
in Beyond the Lighted Path
this book to answer questions.

By our self-published GerMac
reviewed by embe in your words
lovely for writing your poetry.

Simply Positive Review.

STATIC

My Biography

(E)
2015 Quills Nom Best New Port, promoted to Preferred Author
#2067894 by GerMac

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#4180039

Review of In The Night

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

In this moment in time
hoping it would feel better,
talk about my pain but doesn't
at night when it hurts the worst.

I'm used to your arms holding me
you were the one held me there,
you are the one who broke me
for you to come back to me.

By our dear poet Foxx21
reviewed by embe here,
with your fine words
in the night.

Simply Positive Review.

In The Night

(E)
I was hoping it would feel better to talk about my pain, but it doesn't.
#2067888 by Foxx21

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#4179293

Review of Grandpa's Back!

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

In this moment in time
the vision and symbols,
letters laid on a table
magnifier with no label.

Live your life with joy
stop uttering muttering,
this life is just by day
I lie awake now forgiven.

This ghost hasten to aid
when I'm lonely and afraid,
all symbols I leave behind
come alive within my mind.

By our Joy-Happy Hanukkah
reviewed by embe lovely,
with your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.

STATIC

Grandpa's Back!

(E)
A vision and symbols
#472213 by Joy

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#4179284

Review of Last Night

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

In this moment in time
poem to remind ourselves,
or forget to use our voice
last night I dream of shadows.

Things aren't always so clear
at night a dream of secrets,
in those prisoners of pain
binding memory and fear.

Last night dream of fire
kindled by my single spark,
a reminder that if nurtured
by flame we overcome the dark.

Reviewed by embe lovely
for our Deck the Halls,
using your wording.

Simply Positive Review.

Last Night

(E)
A poem to remind ourselves not to become complacent or forget to use our voice.
#2067391 by Deck the Halls

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#4179127

Review of The Cola Can

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

In this moment in time
cola can tells harms,
with the drinking of
carbonated juices.

I am a Cola can,
i am drunk by man,
it make me to think
i would be used again.

But you people wont
say i am this one,
who pollutes
this city.

By Khavya
being Indhavi,
reviewed by embe
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.

The Cola Can

(E)
Cola Can tells the harms of drinking carbonated juice and how these tins pollute the city.
#2067515 by Khavya Indhavi

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#4178947

Review of Sisters.

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

In this moment in time
a sisters relationship,
she was a best friend
talking boys with me.

Then we grew apart
but kept in touch,
it was my sister
stayed strong.

Little in time
the best for her,
my earnest concern
to know where she is.

By our poet S.Valdez
reviewed by embe,
in your words
being sad.

Simply Positive Review.

Sisters.

(E)
A sisters relationship.
#2067368 by -S.Valdez

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#4178180

Review of A Poem About Time

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

In this moment in time
greatest friend and foe,
one has ever come to know
then makes the soul divine.

In mender of hearts divided
helps a runner to compete,
with the teacher of men
in the ager of wine.

Reviewed by embe there
for our dear Hyperion,
advising this below
By: Adam Kaiser (Me)

Simply Positive Review.

A Poem About Time

(E)
Tick Tock Tick
#1987244 by A. Prescott

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#4178156

Review of Berserker

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

In this moment in time
with the Viking poetry,
the call of the warrior
and of those defenders.

As with a rage against
the modern day mounts,
all hidden in the mind
beneath fields of snow.

A thousand years since
my ships of the dragon,
roaring from the North
will it be time again?

By our Thomas Morris
reviewed by embe now,
in your Viking poetry
within the Berserker.

Simply Positive Review

Berserker

(E)
Viking poetry
#2067064 by Thomas Morris

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#4177759

Review of I'm Inferno.

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

In this moment for now
my bleeding these days,
let the alphabets bleed
wonders was it destined.

Every inch of my soul
then it's desperately,
every pour of my body
fierce in passing day.

By our poet Inferno
in a review by embe,
within your wording
perfectly describes.

Simply Positive Review.

I'm Inferno.

(E)
Let the alphabets bleed.
#2066876 by Inferno

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#4177720

Review of "My Parents Aren't Home"

Review by embe

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

In this moment in time
is your dad here now,
asked the old cop
to this kid.

No he isn't
in a rush today,
was your mom here
she's not here either.

My parents scream allot
but never ever at me.
Kid i must tell you
remain silent now.

By Northern Optimist
reviewed by embe,
with your words
funny dialog.

Simply Positive Review.

"My Parents Aren't Home"

(13+)
A funny dialog between a kid and a cop.
#1812219 by The Northern Optimist

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#4177569

Review of Silence

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

In this moment in time
arose from my slumber,
on that silent morn
feeling melancholy.

I was joyously mad
feel my heart pound,
but not truly living
so deep in the ground.

But do not try alive
deep in the ground,
if laying so cold
singing no more.

By our Furlong
reviewed by embe,
in your fine wording
that dead man's tell.

Simply Positive Review.

STATIC

Silence

(E)
A Dead Man's Tell.
#2066797 by Furlong

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#4177564

Review of Golden Years

Review by embe

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

In this moment in time
for the golden years,
being from yesterday
choose to relive.

If only it were
my power to give,
the special moments
time has locked away.

And I know this day
happiness than tears,
the children came along
our love sang sweet song.

By our Ann Ticipation
reviewed by embe now,
in your loving words
for golden years.

Simply Positive Review.

AUDIO

Golden Years

(ASR)
I wrote this for a golden wedding. Alzheimer's meant Don no longer knew Hilary, his wife.
#1992071 by Ann Ticipation

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#4177558

Review of WINTER

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

In this moment with time
every season has a breath,
character for defines life
where this may come and go.

For they can only aspire
to bequeath her beauty,
being the virgin white
from the other three.

Particularly that one
before I can open mine,
gift from others for me
there by dear lady-love.

By our dear ponkacheese
reviewed by embe here,
in your lovely words
for the winter.

Simply Positive Review.

WINTER

(E)
Every season has a breath to it - a character that defines its life. It comes and goes...
#2065808 by ponkacheese

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#4177549

Review of The Best Age

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

In this moment in time
for the best age today,
is not any of the ones
I've ever been before.

It's only going to run
there when out of time,
I'm ready for that now
brings me ever close.

Without the worries
to being adulthood,
child knows nothing
but blissful living.

By our dear Pony Tale
reviewed by embe here,
in your lovely words
for the best age now.

Simply Positive Review

The Best Age

(E)
The Best Age
#757890 by Pony Tale

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#4177442

Review of Rosanne

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

In this moment in time
all dressed up in black,
just like her daddy now
there in his footsteps.

Singing lots of sings
to writes most of her,
on old Gibson guitar
she is more at peace.

Oh Rosanne like a rose
in the golden sunshine,
like the raven flying
in the deep blue sky.

By our moontigerntn
reviewed by embe here,
in your lovely words.

Simply Positive Review.

Rosanne

(E)
A description of Rosanne Cash, daughter of Johnny Cash. She has become a superstar.
#2066739 by moontigerntn

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#4177345

Review of Pray (Hope for you)

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

In this moment in time
the short poem of hope,
for someone so special
with one in the future.

Each day that comes by
will bring us our joy,
in happiness will stay
never again my bye-bye.

My side ‘till I’m dying
now I wrap this prayer,
hope would end the way
then be my special one.

By our poet Tian Bi
in a review by embe,
lovely your words
in hope for you.

Simply Positive Review.

Pray (Hope for you)

(E)
a short poem of hope for someone to be my special one in the future.....
#2066667 by Tian Bi

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#4177342

Review of Let’s Wait and Not See

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

In this moment of reality
trying to act confidently,
cool with acting patiently
the things will always be.

But don’t be so foolish
can’t tell this future,
now let’s wait and see
in some idea absolutely.

Walking with a purpose,
our feet that are light,
with God’s vision right
there must be the fight.

By our fine poet Tim Chiu
reviewed by embe lovely,
your words God’s vision
of reality within faith.

Simply Positive Review.

Let’s Wait and Not See

(E)
A helpful poem about reality and God's vision.
#1647598 by Tim Chiu

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#4177335

Review of GRIEVED

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

In this moment in time
grieved this feeling,
to lose a loved one
in burrow of pain.

Within our crying
sitting by the bed,
the helpless partner
were never comforted.

Now my hope restored
relieved this rest,
now with sadness
time's healing.

By Endy Noble
reviewed by embe,
in your fine words
within being grieved.

Simply Positive Review.

GRIEVED

(E)
Grieved is a poem that describes our feeling when we lose a loved one.
#2066692 by Endy Noble

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#4177189

Review of To Be Free

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

In this moment in time
I will show dear God,
the love in my heart
giving me directions.

Rejoice on every day
my faith is strong,
until eternity ends
shiny light to see.

Here to my Savior
for love and pray,
when I'm in heaven
my dearest friend.

By our dear Kings
reviewed by embe,
in your fine words
may God bless you.

Simply Positive Review.

STATIC

To Be Free

(E)
I am happy to be who I am with God by my side.
#1623025 by Kings

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#4177040

Review of From Abi (Color of the World)

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

In this moment in time
dedicated for my mom,
I look into her eyes
friend and daughter.

There another world
this different life,
here's the color blue
so undeniably beautiful.

Fill it up with my gold
given angel of mercy,
and paid the price
in my new life.

By our Carlo
reviewed by embe,
in your fine words
lovely the free verse.

Simply Positive Review.

From Abi (Color of the World)

(E)
Dedicated for my single mom friend and her daughter.
#2065536 by Carlo

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#4176785

Review of Death

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

In this sad moment in time
human beings are helpless,
I never imagined why this
if their beloved ones die.

In front of their eyes
but cannot do anything,
once living then dead
Soul is out of a body.

By our fine poet HRK
reviewed by embe now,
within your wording
life is so short.

Simply Positive Review.

Death

(E)
Life is short so one should live it responsibly.
#2066406 by HRK

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#4176782

Review of Positivity

Review by embe

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

In this moment in time
para bout positvty 4m,
percption of D Grl Wd
too Mny Extravgnt Drms.

Outside world is dark
a sun will soon smile,
portrays your positive
it is in a reflection.

Everything will happen
in you depends on how,
when you perceive this
it's no rocket science.

By our dear a,srivasta
reviewed by embe here,
in your fine wording.

Simply Positive Review.

Positivity

(E)
A smll para bout positvty 4m my percption, percption of D Grl Wd Too Mny Extravgnt Drms...
#2066397 by The Girl With Too Many Extravagant Dreams

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