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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
my vacation interrupted,
in this wonderful week
there on the sandy beach.

With my new sunglasses
Sandpipers in dances,
in that incoming foam
with the salty spray.

But suddenly barking
I heard that dog,
now raced towards me
I pedaled away.

Seeing the red truck
the dog now inside,
the driver sped away
my legs shaking.

By our wonderful poet
for dear Connieann,
reviewed by embe here
in your 297 words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Vacation Interrupted  (E)
A dream vacation almost becomes a nightmare.
#1702003 by Have a sunshiny day!


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Review of FANTASIES  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
in the eyes of a dreamer,
never relenting there
imagination of the spirit.

Asking only for the same
when one is captured,
the man and woman hidden
her spirit now freed.

By our darling poet
Sherri Gibson,
sent to her Webbie
so lovely.

Reviewed by embe
in the words of my mentor,
for a simply positive review.
 FANTASIES  (E)
In the eyes of a dreamer...
#1141275 by SHERRI GIBSON


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
dragon and princes,
gave me jigsaws
various sizes.

Maybe puzzles
every Christmas,
on our card tables
there it's on display.

Only to be remembered
in passing comments,
dreaming dragons
for my prince.

By our Rhyssa
reviewed by embe,
in your lovely words
from me to your prince.

Simply Positive Review.
 dragon and princes  (13+)
one reason we ended
#1997328 by Rhyssa



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time of a family feud
Billy glancing at the ring on her finger,
it made him seethe his father had a whore
the rest of the world faded in his sorrow.

The few park residents tried to help him
with a nonchalant smile College will wait,
why leave paradise she said to poor Billy
frozen and felt freedom in his motionless.

By our outstanding poet being lucretius
reviewed by embe in your creative words,
for my simply positive review for you.

 Freedom of Stillness  (13+)
Flash fiction entry: A young man finally finds freedom through a moment of inaction.
#1449466 by lucretius


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In this sad moment in time
boulevard of broken dreams,
will cost tears of sorrow
in your sad way of living.

Mom praying by the grave
look at your future life,
her eyes were rimmed red
with a rose on his grave.

The mourners around her
something I can change,
stop taking drugs son
to live the life anew.

Reviewed by embe here
using your fine words
by our Royal Eduardo.

Simply Positive Review.
 Boulevard of Broken Dreams   (18+)
What would one mistake cost you?
#2048635 by Author Ed Anderson




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Review of The storm  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this sad moment in time
a lone vessel in the swells,
there in the turbulent storm
the tiny speck in a brazen sea.

A lone man stands upon a cliff
no might or means to assist,
thunder rings out ridicule
lost in a word of song.

By our fine poet teezerk
reviewed by embe here,
in your fine words
like a folk song.

Simply Positive Review.
 The storm  (E)
*folk song*
#2048380 by teezerk


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment of recovering
faint etching on the heart,
all about my lost love
for the mother.

Then daughter
on their semester break,
an inevitably conversation
memory of torment and tears.

Oh, how could they not see
the fragile feeling alone,
true love now shattered
completely out of mind.

By our fine poet of note
Harry being reviewed,
embe in your words
to heal a heart.

Simply Positive Review.
 Faint Etching On The Heart  (E)
A storoem about lost love and recovering.
#716279 by Harry



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Review of Letter to God  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the Sacred moment in time
you are on call my Drifter,
the servant of our Savior
for dear God almighty.

There in this prayer
embracing the emptiness,
through the love of Jesus
who died to save your soul.

Now you are on call today
in this letter to pray,
for all our humanity
saved by grace.

Reviewed here
by embe your friend,
in your loving words
may God bless you today.

Simply Positive Review.
Letter to God  (E)
A prayer beckoning one to new life.
#1925897 by drifter


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Review of The Birdwatcher  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time for my dear Countrymom
watching the birdwatcher every day to play,
her cat is a Jewel, and claims the name
tossing out bread crumbs for the birds.

Time will tell whether they can survive
but now I am so happy seeing them so alive,
in this early morning as they start to sing
my blessed time being the birdwatcher all day.

Reviewed by embe using your descriptive words
lovingly from Countrymom my dear friend,
may God bless you a healthy life.

Simply Positive Review.
 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#204837 by Not Available.


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time who takes your babies
and then smashes them against the rocks,
for what you have done to us
radioactivity I queried?

Bio-electrical impulses
the frog was once a tadpole,
another student said Brad was an atheist
Doctor Johnson disposed of them in the class.

By our famous writer of note - our muzzy here,
reviewed in this confirmation truth as a believer
by embe using your words in my simply positive review.

 Casey Anthony Verdict  (E)
10th grade biology class+
#1791516 by bob county



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this confused moment in time
when I struggle to connect words,
the life of a critic with faults
more click-clicks as fingers slip.

I wade through the wording forming
stumbling on the characters words,
skinny black needles cover my body
gripped by amateurs in cloudy eyes.

By our reviewer Little Running Stiky
reviewed by embe in your fine words,
for this simply positive review.
 The Life of a Critic  (13+)
Reviewing is not always so easy.
#1121435 by Elisa: Middle Aged Stik


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Review of Petite  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this confused moment in time
I don't know why I wrote this,
sweet summer holidays
in your ages.

There in bags
you're forgetting him,
still drawing the same girl
running on another cities time.

But can't remember what you need
don't let me dance no more,
the bars are all closed
coming home soon.

By our fine poet
Victoria Victorious,
reviewed lovely by embe
in your words for Petite.

Simply Positive Review.
 Petite  (E)
I don't know why I wrote this
#2048530 by Victoria Victorious




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Review of A Letter  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
In this moment in time
trying to heal your mind,
I can't feel sorry anymore
but that'd be a lie I'd say.

Someone you never knew now
I am the reason you'll hate,
huddled now huddled in misery
that this story has to end now.

By our new poet orchiddragon
reviewed by embe in your words,
my simply positive review for you.

 A Letter  (18+)
Just a template
#2048203 by orchiddragon


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Review of My Old Home  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time my old home
as a kid I dreamed of tomorrow,
by the creek gently flowing
over the years.

But my sorrow
dreamed in my life weeping,
no traces of home will be left
raised on bluegrass in Kentucky.

By our fine poet of note, Kings
reviewed by embe in your words,
for my simply positive review.
 
STATIC
My Old Home  (E)
My old home in the beautiful hills.
#2048122 by Kings


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Review of My Old Home  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
In that moment in time my old home
where a creek was gently flowing,
I live in reality when at home
in years she stood I dreamed.

As a kid I dreamed tomorrow
if we moved away from our home,
no traces will always be sorrows
memories of bluegrass in Kentucky.

By our fine poet of note, Kings
reviewed by embe in your words,
for my simply positive review.
 
STATIC
My Old Home  (E)
My old home in the beautiful hills.
#2048122 by Kings


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time to read slowly
words are seldom thought when read,
so all could hear far or near
with passion's light.

To love, honor obey
the promises that they took,
said them so slow so all could hear
he failed to tell of trials and lies.

By our fine poet of note, BScholl
reviewed by embe in your words
for a simply positive review.

 Forever. You will see. (2nd Place)  (E)
A poem about marriage. (2nd Place PDG Contest)
#1635837 by BScholl


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time for a science lesson
being the early birds verses the night owls,
do you get up at the crack of dawn to go
or do you like to sleep and then stay up.

Only if mechanisms controlling alertness
will determine difference in the shift,
between the two groups tested by light
using volunteers participant in groups.

Reviewed by embe lovely for Connieann
with her wonderful lesson for members.
Simply Positive Review.
 Early Birds versus Night Owls  (E)
A study on the sustained cognitive powers of the early bird and the night owl.
#1564801 by Have a sunshiny day!


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Review of Tomorrow  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
for a bright tomorrow,
that we shall travel
on this new journey.

Eager to tell you this
that you are homesick,
I will pull your hand
to where we came from.

By our new member
reviewed by embe,
for dearest Zazz L
in her loving words
for the eternal one.

Simply Positive Review.
 Tomorrow  (E)
O beloved.
#2048172 by Zazz L.



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time of faith
how harder to hold onto today,
in less miracles every day
for me to breath.

Gasping why Lord
I am so tired of praying,
exhausted hanging on praying
until I see your new life for me.

By our dear Shelby reviewed by embe
in your words of faith for members,
in my simply positive review.

 I'm Tired Lord.   (E)
Another description of what depression feels like from my point of view.
#2048184 by Shelby


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Review of Housecleaning Elf  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a moment in time maybe a bad dream
a little man appeared before me,
the tiny house cleaning Elf
with a smiling face.

Then suddenly gone
your house is in this mess,
it makes me want to disappear.
So I cried and cleaned it to my shame.

By our author for the Elves, dear Erin
reviewed lovely by embe in your words,
for my simply positive review.
 Housecleaning Elf  (E)
Beware Housecleaning Elves! - Entry for Daily Flash Fiction 12/25
#1508699 by Erin J. Roberts


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment for the old warrior
I have sailed the seas of sorrow,
since my dear father passed away
talking about the endless waves.

The ocean was always my destiny
for you alluring loving friend,
in my hopes my heart will mend
this was the life meant for me.

By our famous poet of note
Oldwarrior - Wounded Veteran,
reviewed in your stunning words
by embe my simply positive review.
I HAVE SAILED THE SEAS OF SORROW  (E)
A young woman laments the loss of her father - (A sample from my Poetry folder)
#1580912 by Oldwarrior


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
In that moment in time when lazy genies were around
Aladdin needed assets multiplied mine have shrunk,
but uncle all he gives are promises and excuses.

Now Rafik has his Djinn available to the public
so that all would now be able to reap the benefits,
yet the canny and lazy djinn always has lies instead.

By our fine writer of tales for embe
using the words of our Joto-Kai,
for a simply positive review.

 
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Rafik's Lazy Genie  (13+)
Rafik's Genie is too Lazy to do anything...
#2047282 by Joto-Kai
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Review of Tomorrow  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I want to ride to tomorrow
a place where my dreams come true,
reality and days pass like swallows
flitting daintily for the buzzing flies.

Rhythm within the tender breeze occurred
under the watchful eye of our creator,
appreciation by those that walk
the beauty that is the land.

By our fine new poet, Barnaby
reviewed by embe in your words,
for this my simply positive review.
 Tomorrow  (E)
A poem that describes the paradise of tomorrow...
#2047853 by Barnaby



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
the second priest says,
transgression session
this is from a dream.

Down in that line
with that priest,
guarding a door
from metal.

By his hand
revealed a light,
in an open chamber
all in golden white.

Reviewed by embe
with my regards,
our fine poet
Fifthwood.

Simply Positive Review.

 Transgression is in Session  (13+)
This is from a dream I had. I really don't know what it means. I give plenty of auto GPs.
#2047896 by Fifthwood


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Review of Aimless, Nameless  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment with no time
of unorganized words,
that make no sense
being aimless.

Now make sense
frick frack attack,
dreaming this long way
there to the moon and back.

Embe on that white flight
for my american night,
with this review
for Hazel.

My welcome
for our new member,
with these shining stars
and a simply positive review.

 Aimless, Nameless  (E)
A poem of unorganized words that happen to make sense.
#2047645 by Relaxed Magnet


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