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Review of Missing skin  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the missing skin
deep inside my chest and within rest
I want to touch and feel your grace
to love now and much longer.

Thoughts when once united
though these happy heart beats,
touching my own and your smiles
never again to part in souls sorrow.

By our fine poet Sonny Monteiro
reviewed so lovely by embe,
in this scenery here below -
Simply Positive Review.


 Missing skin Open in new Window. (E)
I got dumped. That's it.
#2034962 by Sonny Monteiro Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Never, And Again  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
never and again a secret,
again and again from a wife
beamed the concern vanished.

There in a dark black garden,
he slipped out at that gate,
wondering why vanished
he agreed once more.

She teased playfully
he stood in the kitchen,
wondered where will I be
celebrating thoughts away.

By our fine writer of note
reviewed by embe now,
in this scenery here
bricksandsparrows.


 Never, And Again Open in new Window. (13+)
A man keeps a secret from his wife, again and again.
#2029429 by James Heyward Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Seeing The Dirt  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time seeing the dirt
I try those things I have done before,
hiding my spirit in God, then what
in the room in an empty house.

Opening windows and doors
rooms dusty in a memory,
the walls listing now
to these chairs.

A wooden floor
there with my candle,
windows in a space of mine
waiting for a gift from almighty.

By our seasoned writer of note
reviewed by embe wonderful,
my simple positive review
for dear Whiskerface.

 Seeing The Dirt Open in new Window. (13+)
waking up to my surroundings
#2035080 by Whiskerface Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time a smooth band of gold
she shook her head; tears made her eyes sting,
our love carried us times our luck hit these skids
you know that old ring had an inscription now lost.

found carried these old times our luck hit the skids
of how now our love endured tho tested and tried,
although the core remained intact and still strong
through the years we raised crops and our kids.

By our fine poet of note reviewed by embe
lovely this scenery simply positive review,
a rhyming poem about a wedding band.
A Smooth Band Of Gold Open in new Window. (ASR)
A rhyming storoem about a wedding band.
#1526035 by Harry Author IconMail Icon


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Review of 0-211  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time ninety-six percent of the land is rural
but there in the city television only shows you the stardom,
for the general merchandise is borderline profit today
our biased media will have you believing still.

If that isn't so couldn't it possibly be true
the welfare isn't fair justice isn't just,
I've got no time to talk right now
by our fine poet, Fivesixer.

Reviewed lovely by embe.
Simply Positive Review.

 0-211 Open in new Window. (13+)
1/08 Maybe there really is something wrong with society and normalcy.
#1374997 by Fivesixer Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time two poets for another work
the years now lost found recently for a friend,
nothing matters close to the one you love
be they black or white maybe female.

Always in thought the same as you
to thing that you notice this your lover,
hiding away with a cuddle for sweet kisses
late at night singing those sexy songs of love.

By our famous poets being reviewed by embe,
in this scenery - BcInally & Anne Narke,
or maybe - scarlett_raven -
Simply Positive Review.

 Eternal By B McInally & Anne Narky Open in new Window. (E)
Another old work. Lost for years found recently. It was given its title by a friend
#1849970 by scarlett_raven Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Wink and a hug  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
In a moment in time easy there matey,
don't you worry if you are married,
disappointment over my face
to say where to there.

Don't let me keep you
sealed with a handshake,
at that my upcoming meeting.
important business to attend to.

Delicate flowers for my love
you are so good to me in bed,
O boy that was something else
it collapsed when you kissed me.

By our fine writer of note - Smee
reviewed by embe in the scene,
my simply positive review
for a wink and a hug.

 
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Wink and a hug Open in new Window. (13+)
Prompt : A world where money doesn't exist and people pay with social contact.
#2034924 by Smee Author IconMail Icon


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Review of The Pearl  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time with a gorgeous smile
an emotional song I wrote was my - Pearl,
by Norswede with her fantastic smile
my heart and soul alive and fee.

When it confides in me now
with these fears and lies,
forgiven by me - embe
in my review for you,

Simply Positive Review.
 
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The Pearl Open in new Window. (E)
An Emotional Song I Wrote
#1991233 by Norswede Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Space Holder  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a moment in time today
we see the space holder,
in our story master
five hundred,
and eighty
eight.

Sorry
old chap,
this is nothing
in item 99,999,
for embe to review
being created so lovely.

Sentimental, I guess
why do I keep forever,
it's my childhood dreams
begging to be a lovely poet,
reviewing my dear StoryMaster
posting these sparkling five stars.

Simply Positive Review for you.
 Space Holder Open in new Window. (ASR)
Nothing but a space holder.
#99999 by The StoryMaster Author IconMail Icon
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Review of Hunger  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hunger in a moment in time
he fills his rumbling stomach,
chewing at his mind to dine
it feels the dreadful agony.

With two starving souls
it would mean a full belly,
developed this sickness
there to whither away.

Starvation in his mind
with souls sorrow now,
repulsive to his eye
that cannot fill the void.

By our Justine Ashford
the poet of note today,
for embe to review here
Simply Positive Review.

 Hunger Open in new Window. (E)
A poem I wrote for my creative writing class.
#2034842 by Justine Ashford Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment for 7/27/11 Newsletter
this fine editor's pick of the week,
for a flash story must contain
the truck steal and hair.

Look at me guys now
wading down to the lake,
to attach the broken cable
you didn't put on the brake.

For embe confused in time
now they stole that truck,
I need it for saying yes -
Simply Positive Review.

 Fish Tails (1st Place) Open in new Window. (E)
Harry finally caught the big one... Now if they could only find their truck. Editor Pick
#1775515 by BScholl Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Night and day  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
being night and day,
now in darkness
under the sky,

Werewolves
eating their preys,
of bloody corpses
in their black magic,

Ghouls came out
for eating their flesh,
from diseased corpses
a wicked witched potion.

By our fine writer - Ashle
reviewed so scary by embe,
with my Simply Positive Review.
 Night and day Open in new Window. (E)
The light beats always the darkness...
#2034560 by Ashle1 Author IconMail Icon
Just in time today.


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Review of The Muse Says  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time to tell the truth
my muse says I turned on the lights,
but just in a flicker there in the night
under the veil of a poem after you.

In this uncharitable darkness
sifting through your sorrows,
stumble into storage rooms
in the dead air of the night.

Where stars dive into time
there in the curl of the moon,
finding our famous writer - Joy.
reviewed by embe in the scene.

This my simply positive review.
 The Muse Says Open in new Window. (E)
Turning on the lights but just a flicker -- for Slam
#819352 by Joy-Happy 25, WdC! Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Making tortilla soup in this moment in time
in this scene so sweet for his little sister,
Junior just threw babies' shoes outside
hitting her so hard who now turned blue.

Such an idea should have it's galleria
loudly screaming like the diva queen,
big bro has showed he's no John Doe
he warned her of woe, quid pro quo.

By our fine poet of note Rhychus
just for a laugh in the crazy scene,
for embe to review so lovely here
my simply positive review for you.

 
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Making Tortilla Soup Open in new Window. (E)
Such an idea should have it's own galleria.
#2034694 by Vanishing Vapor Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this lengthy moment in time
eighty six fascinating lines,
moving through now
once for you.

By Keaton
or maybe Foster,
this new begining
so lovely on this page.

Poignant from a man
within your mind
clearly there
brand new.

A new day
better than ever,
reviewed by embe
Simply Positive Review.

 Moving Through You Open in new Window. (18+)
18+ A dark poem about a man who does what his faith and life finally drives him to do.
#1978940 by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Blood Red Roses  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time
the thirteen starting lines
with red and black words,
conveying in five lines
then red staring at me.

Now only three I see
red petals scattered,
evidence now denied.

Red a shag carpet
rumors forbidden
in stolen kisses,
someone else
I cannot lie.

It must be now
the poet of note
reviewed by embe,
our Prosperous Snow
Simply Positive Review.

 Blood Red Roses Open in new Window. (18+)
Acrostic Created for Every Week Something New Contest.
#979018 by Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon
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Review of I am love  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a moment in time I am love
but call me I will be there,
when you are lost
and lonely.

Distressed
no one who cares,
incapacitated with fear
out of love in my fearfulness.

A kind friend comforting you
when you are in the dark,
calling and screaming
blinded in darkness.

Our fine poet today
in a review by embe,
for Lonefellow to view
Simply Positive Review.

 I am love  Open in new Window. (E)
Human Feelings
#2034545 by Lonefellow Author IconMail Icon


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Review of One Lone Tear  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
One lone tear in that moment in time today
glistening in the moonlight by the window,
cascading Illuminating the scene
reflecting her vanity mirror

Events will now be over
wiping away another lonely day,
sitting all alone with this broken heart
weeping souls sorrow in my sad dreams.

By our fine poet of note, being Spanky De
reviewed by embe in this scenery -
Simply Positive Review.

 One Lone Tear Open in new Window. (E)
A broken heart for a broken lady
#2033624 by Spanky De - We Got This! Author IconMail Icon


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Review of The Steel Dragon  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The Steel Dragon in that moment in time sank in a squall
the rudder was used trying to help her steer to the shore,
but far too late she was leaking and singing fast
the Magic Horse now a memory forever
.
By our fine poet of note, PandaPaws
reviewed so lovely by embe,
your dearest friend for life.
Simply Positive Review.

 
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The Steel Dragon Open in new Window. (E)
A Great Lakes storm claims another victim (A Rondeau)
#1942366 by PandaPaws Licensed VetTech Author IconMail Icon


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Review of An Old Cemetery  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this sad moment in time the old cemetery
I take along my weed eater and a heavy rake,
I'd help him by raking the leaves from the trees
I'll think of my Dad when we'd pay our respects.

By our dearest poet of note being, Kings Tazzy,
reviewed by embe, I will pay my respects,
in your words that I have borrowed
in my deepest felt sympathy.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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 An Old Cemetery Open in new Window. (E)
A promise I keep once a year to honor my Dad.
#136126 by Kings Author IconMail Icon


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Review of ISOLATION EFFECT  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the thinker there
with the isolation effect their lives cease,
misery comes and attacks without joy
then left and the shrew was all alone.

Lovers isolation was this empty shell
fed on slugs and centipedes he caught,
on the day a cobra came and attacked
some people live like this shrewd shrew.

By our fine writer of note today
being reviewed by embe now,
seeing it there - Thinkerme.
Simply Positive Review.

 ISOLATION EFFECT Open in new Window. (E)
isolation of any kind or form can not bring joy to one but sharing and friendship bring.
#2034079 by thinker Author IconMail Icon


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Review of In This Kingdom  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time the tower of words
some a strange circle then two words,
holds life.Three words, in one hand.
And his other, He grips death.
Above his head. No words, .
Circles those released.
Down at his feet,
Rot those deceased.
Many.Have been placed.
By him and his ways. Such sins.
His. Are like immovable stones.
That he at some point.Must find a way to carry.
He will have no choice.Not a one.The weight.
Will be crushing. So should it be .By embe.
in this review, Strange as it seams today,
for our fine poet of note lovely this scenery.
For Keaton Foster, ending with the title.
In This Kingdom. Simply Positive Review.

 In This Kingdom Open in new Window. (18+)
18+ He stands against all that he feels, all those unlike him, all those of fate and faith
#2034433 by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In that moment in time when the heat has risen
I pauses and then asked why invite me there.
Gary grinned and said what do you mean
to discover the sound that surprised me.

Well I’m glad I could come and find it
haystacks chow mein and noodles,
they’re my favorite snack if cold
i'm that awkward kid with jokes.

There at day camp saying my 'hi'
your friends and you are very nice,
they welcomed me forever and a day
now we are quite a team in this review.

Simply Positive Review, by embe there,
for our fine writer of note being -Than Pence.

 
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Winter Summer Party Open in new Window. (E)
I'm invited to a birthday party with an unusual theme and for someone I don't really like.
#2007884 by Than Pence Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Filth  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Filth in this moment in time
with the stench of my honesty.
believe me not, is that strange
embe will review in these words.

By our fine poet of note joseph
steps that may lead me in clarity,
guiding me with your fine thoughts
this want of my life to be arranged.

In the shade of guilt it won't be dim
now helping me, Almighty man above,
in the scene of begging for mercy please
for a final verdict - Simply Positive Review.

 Filth Open in new Window. (13+)
Filthy habits die hard, change is harder, but with faith, everything is possible
#2034278 by JosLav Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Vision  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My vision of tomorrow in this moment in time
is self inflicted sorrow piled on in my sums,
the winning hands we crave every day
in this most stupid cupid’s game.

Now crumbling into debris
before our very eyes,
restructured now
in peacetime.

For my heart
the mind now relies,
from memories of old
there in the space of time.

By our fine poet of note
for wonderful member Logan,
reviewed by embe in this scene -
My Simply Positive Review Lovely.

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#2034906 by Not Available.


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