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Review of Filth  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Filth in this moment in time
with the stench of my honesty.
believe me not, is that strange
embe will review in these words.

By our fine poet of note joseph
steps that may lead me in clarity,
guiding me with your fine thoughts
this want of my life to be arranged.

In the shade of guilt it won't be dim
now helping me, Almighty man above,
in the scene of begging for mercy please
for a final verdict - Simply Positive Review.

 Filth  (13+)
Filthy habits die hard, change is harder, but with faith, everything is possible
#2034278 by JosLav


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Review of Vision  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
My vision of tomorrow in this moment in time
is self inflicted sorrow piled on in my sums,
the winning hands we crave every day
in this most stupid cupid’s game.

Now crumbling into debris
before our very eyes,
restructured now
in peacetime.

For my heart
the mind now relies,
from memories of old
there in the space of time.

By our fine poet of note
for wonderful member Logan,
reviewed by embe in this scene -
My Simply Positive Review Lovely.

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#2034906 by Not Available.


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Review of Sanctuary  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
When i was a child twelve tears old in that moment in time,
my roots were planted on the other side of the fence,
calling out in an embrace welcoming me home,
figuring out the path to my sanctuary
there forever more in my mind.

The air smells much cleaner up here,
that place in which to escape all by myself,
this is where my love of trees began in my mind,
memories of TJ Marie reviewed lovely there by embe.
In this scenery of wonderful for - Simply Positive Review.

 Sanctuary  (E)
Description of my favourite place when I was 12 years old
#2034326 by TJ Marie


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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time a whomble is real
so rare when touching the softest fur.
Ralphie slurred sarcastically
what an idiotic name.,
glaring at Annabelle.

She called back
do I have to apologize
you screaming ripped off?
Ralphie slurred sarcastically
with his twisted prominent nose.

Watching the creature stretch out
its wings there in the breeze,
for embe to review lovely
the Rising Star Review,
Carly - No Chocolate.

 I found It In The Woods  (E)
Daily fiction contest entry.
#2029582 by 💙 Carly




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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time long ago
my November lovely review,
though never knew her name
now my Revelryssorrow today.

The month being our March
a fine time for embe there,
writing in the darkest night
only for this lovely name.

Heartbroke dogs in Heaven
dressed in colorful hair,
washed twice a week
to shine in the sunshine.

By the orange marigolds
near camillias in bloom,
for this my lovely scene
Rising Star Review.

November Dreary   (E)
Another dames of the dead entry. The woman can be anyone you have in mind.
#1694831 by Revelry new writings soon




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Silence in this moment in time
are you the enemy or the guide,
consider your daily schedule
we were meant to evolve there.

What we have failed to realize
experiencing our love so fully,
without touching or thinking
letting us get back to evolving.

Nights of drinking won't help
for we determine experiences,
by our fine writer of note today
reviewed stunning by embe.

Simply Positive Review,

 "Silence"- The Enemy or Our Guide?   (E)
Do we choose the lives we live or are they dictated to us?
#2034025 by relative


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time the smiling head
dressed in purple with a grin a happy face,
I have a slight problem that needs fine skills,

maybe a call to our fine, Hello,Dr. Frankenstein,
of course, I would never expect to request your head
now been diagnosed with a mild case of schizophrenia.

It would be amusing to see this astonished look now
to kiss the mirror on a suitor's nasty dreadful face,
by our fine poet of note in my seeing Whitemorn
reviewed by embe - Simply Positive Review.


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time of grief, I should have beat him more
appalled by the words my baby just uttered today,
that gift from the bastard evil monster.
Satan himself was there today
hearing the dreadful screams,
now I am so furious.
The judge called for order
a parent's grief is immeasurable,
I could barely keep it together anyway.
You should know I raised him knowing Jesus,
by our famous poet of note being J. E. Durham,
reviewed by embe, I hope it was your fine story of fiction.

Simply Positive Review.
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A Gift from a Monster  (18+)
A mother's grief is immeasurable, and wrath threatens to consume her soul.
#2031657 by Jimmy E. Durham, RN-BC


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Review of Furry Philosophy  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
She will stare and stare until I share it with her
these many things for which I give thanks,
but my kitten has taught me about life
she will melt into this soft sleep.

Staring until I share it with her
when stranded on top of it falling now,
don't you ever dare for me to touch it again
as long as we have fun along the way to bed.

By our wonderful poet of note, silverfeathers,
reviewed by embe in this scenery today,
my lovely Rising Stars Review.

Furry Philosophy  (E)
"If there is only one tiny square of sunshine in the house..."
#1185862 by silverfeathers





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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A billionaire tried and true in this moment in time
to raise money for charity we gave trinkets,
bright decorations throughout are free
only if you pay me in a bribe.

Advertising is my skill lying
the soul and shows are in m new will,
I'm a business man why can't you see it
now I regret things that are between the lines.

By our fine poet of note being Rhychus there
for embe to review, my Simply Positive Review.

 
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Please Mr. Trump Don't Fire Me  (E)
I want to be a man like you.
#2034023 by Vanishing Vapor


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Review of Courtney  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time of laughter
she plugged the toilet with her pillow,
but with a batting of her eyes, she asked
I don’t ever want to be your uncle anymore.

But o so sorry this child is a ton of trouble
during nap time, she won't stay in bed,
when my sister finally came i cried
but I really hate a naughty kid.

By our lonely poet of note
hiding in Writing.Com,
reviewed by embe
in this scenery
for Courtney.

Simply Positive Review
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Courtney  (ASR)
One child, a ton of trouble. Wrote this for a humorous poetry contest.
#2033822 by Tab




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Review of Mom  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this lovely moment in time here
the double Etherre poem by Jace,

shaped lovely today in the scene
with one word from my dear Mom.

I'm now blessed in my two words
then three for you as my mother,

no matter what goes in line four
I watch how you treat people.

Nine with kindness and respect
as you listen; I cry, you console,

Ten in the middle of my poem
now ends lovely in this review.

By embe in this fine scenery
my Simply Positive Review.

 Mom  (E)
A Double Etheree poem of a tribute to Moms.
#1743259 by JACE



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Review of Mother  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In that moment in time when I was young and innocent
I wish I could remember all the words in a melody,
she loved to sing this lovely new rhapsody
that seemed her saddest in the rain.

I must have shed a thousand tears
lonely she died, it happened in that rain,
seemed the saddest in the dark skies above
maybe my mother died wishing for her thousand tears.

By our fine poet of note, for dear C. Blake Thornton.
Reviewed by embe sad it happened in the rain,
with this my Simply Positive Review.

 Mother  (13+)
When I was young & innocent my mother sang a song. I wish I could remember all the words.
#1736397 by C. Blake Thornton




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Review of The Final Relapse  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
In this moment in time the fear goes into me
all I can see is silver and red like a needle,
wishing that it would just end it today
covering me like a blanket of fear.

Everything is now crashing around
I stop and think, am I my own enemy,
another day of thought in this my silence
all I can see as my memory is fading away.

By our new member being - SilentDead
reviewed by embe with your words
to be my Simply Positive Review.

 The Final Relapse  (13+)
Read it and find out.
#2033872 by ApocalypticNeon





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Review of Grandpa  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time dedicated to my Grandpa
who jokes and sings with laughter all day,
hugs me tight with kisses so sweet
because Granma is jealous,

There is nothing he can't do
likes bananas and his best ice cream,
driving too fast there may be a stop sign
Oh, what laughtet when Grandpa comes to dinner.

By our dear poet of note Cubby laughing at embe
in this my funny review, in a scenery below.
My Simply Positive Review.

 
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Grandpa  (E)
Grandma's special but Grandpa...
#572841 by Cub-bee


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time the rusty bells doleful shout
leaving this world with echoes of a final chime,
with the old rusty clock also a sorrowful sight
chiming as in this lovely refrain poem.

With all my loves and all my friends
no there is no peace for my soul in sorrow,
it's time for one last peal, to know, “It’s time.”
by our dear fine poet of note being bumblegrum.

Reviewed by embe in the scene below.
My Simply Positive Review.

 Send Not To Know For Whom The Bell Tolls  (18+)
A dark and doom laden experiencewritten mainly for the Talent Pond Poetry contest
#1869321 by ☮ The Grum Of Grums



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Review of The Prayer  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time to wipe away your tears
demons of solitude want to haunt you forever,
it's screams echoing through a lonely soul
light of my love will always be yours.

That God will answer you prayers
the darkness will never consume you,
his whispers speak to your heart and mind
leading the way through darkness into the light.

By our fine writer of note on this page
for embe to review the long poem,
by Whispers Of A Broken Angel.
Simply Positive Review.

 The Prayer  (E)
A prayer for an angel when you are in the depths of despair.
#2033714 by Whispers Of A Broken Angel


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Review of poem  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this monment in time
of the silent corridors,
you hear a giggle now
from a beaming face.

The stifled smiling
whispering in tales,
in summer breaks
forlorn the corridors.

Some hurrying feet
has now rushed by,
bustling with my joy
school days ended.

By our dear kanwal
a fine poet of note,
reviewed by embe
in this scenery here -

Simply Positive Review.

 poem  (E)
how the schools appear without children
#2033757 by kanwal


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this sad moment in time the church is withering away
I am filled with questions that I ask God in this life,
to experience his saving grace on my knees
feeling his blessing in my life today.

Being a part of the human race
is something that needs my daily worship,
I can remember the days of wondering if my life
would be outside the church if I didn't pray every day.

By our fine writer of note the drifter so amazing
being reviewed lovely in this scenery below -
My Simply Positive Review.
 The church of the withered hand  (E)
I will use this to get ready for a sermon this week
#2033673 by drifter


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Review of Mind Walls  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time whitewashed walls of my mind
stained the colors red now bleeding through why,
this the time to take me back to the wards
now in the hospital deeply breathing.

Old air trapped between the boards
fresh oxygen is taken in daily,
now my nails are removed
thrown into the trash.

By our SusanF
reviewed by embe,
lovely in the scenery -
Simply Positive Review.

 Mind Walls  (E)
A poem comparing memories to walls.
#2033632 by SusanF




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the treasured memories
filling my dreams at night and day today,
the past is gone in my thoughts
love for eternity there.

Dreams are better
so may God bless you now,
my darling for leaving me all alone
I pray each night you will come back home.

By our fine poet of note for dear Kings
reviewed by embe in this scenery -
Simply Positive Review.


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Review of Reflective Sorrow  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This moment in time I don’t want you to cry again
I simply want to ease my heart and live again,
no alcohol, no drugs to blame my body
in innocence tormented this day.

That rage within portrayed evil
beating me behind these closed doors,
all that is left in this dark deep black hole
though in time has eased my heart from pain.

By our fine poet of note being alfcollier
reviewed with sadness by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
 Reflective Sorrow  (E)
reminisces of the past
#2033323 by alfcollier



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time of repetition lovely
ElaineElaine where are you hiding,
trying to dig these new holes
on the worn out linoleum.

Filling it with your wiggles
with a mop and bucket,
chuckle, chuckle
there you are.

Laughing now
I don't need this,
biting my finger nails
where is ferret Bradley?

By our fine poet of note
reviewed lovely by embe,
in this new scenery below.
My Simply Positive Review.


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Review of Unbroken  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time that shapes two into one.
within the Infinite faith a strength over doubt,
now withstanding these tests of time
when silence is piercing the ear.

Will it all remain unbroken
in tempests tears and sorrow,
quiet lonesome and melancholy
within the mind lies the answers.

By our fine poet of note
for dearest L A Powell.
Reviewed by embe
in this scenery -

Simply Positive Review.
 Unbroken  (ASR)
Infinite faith, a strength over doubt, forms an uncommon bond that shapes two into one.
#1373473 by L. A. Powell







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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time with these forty lines
Jatog the Green named Ebenezer Scrooge,
that saw the day but not the light today.
this revelation of his tender soul.

Now so noble and unselfish goal
there this new place to hide,
his feelings in plain sight
the Christmas spirit.

By Jatog the Green
scowling now,
in a photo
staring,

At embe now
with my review,
lovely on this page,
Simply Positive Review.
 
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Exposing the Underbelly  (E)
The softer side of Scrooge.
#2033609 by Jatog the Green


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