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Review of Motion Blur  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time because we are dying
one second when you are lost and lonely,
my life is now going by too fast
will you miss me now?

Take a job and money
just tell them no to my needs,
I will stand up high and don't you fear
how you may feel before it's too late now.

Reviewed by embe for our fine poet,
welcome to Alexander Holiday.
Simply Positive Review.
 Motion Blur Open in new Window. (E)
A poem about not waiting too long.
#2033144 by Alexander Holiday Author IconMail Icon


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Review of My eyes  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment of emptiness
my eyes by MFrederick,
there in the distance
a blank stare.

So emotional
in this my attempt,
portrayed I can't explain
forced this stuff on the page.

I'v tried for weeks and days
in this most physical pain,
for embe to review
this new day.

Paper Doll Gang Rockin' Reviewer's Group.

 
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A brief description of emptiness.
#1944014 by Matthew Frederick Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Walks in life  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time, jimminy cricket the critic
for paper doll gang lovely, featured in shadows
contemplating, he takes his time today.

Follows what was a well beaten path,
walking alone remembering the forest so deep,
there he walks in Faith to find the truth within him.

Reviewed lovely for - The Paper Doll Gang Contest.
by embe - Featured in Shadows.


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time when the moon is high
Selene looks down on the earth below,
where you can feel the presence
of the reaper.

Grim and proper
gathering these lonely souls.
that once were on their sailing vessels
dreaming and desires magical and mystical.

Reviewed lovely for our poet, Spanky De.
By embe in this - Simply Positive Review.
 When The Moon Is High Open in new Window. (E)
Poem about life under the high moon
#2032765 by Spanky De - We Got This! Author IconMail Icon


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Review of I Was  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this wonderful moment in time
to review a stunning poem,
by our dear poetpea
for embe today.

So beautiful
there on a page,
lovely the scenery
like your hour glass.

Counting the time
spinning me around,
seeing the stars in space
will you stop me catch me,
in my Simply Positive Review.

 I Was Open in new Window. (E)
A poem on love
#2032542 by poetpea Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In that beautiful healing moment with time
I gave him a home with everlasting light.,
the loving ability to live a normal life
this bright light to come alive.

Sweet music I can hear again
once loved me when I was young,
now confessing my sins of the past
eternity now would stay in my company.

By our famous poet of note today.
Elisa, Bunny Stik in my review,
by embe in this scenery -
Simply Positive Review.

 Give Me That Light Open in new Window. (18+)
It was a beautiful night...
#737410 by Stik to My Own Beat Author IconMail Icon


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Review of She Is  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time when your future looks bleak,
you will move on to write until your heart breaks
plucking up the courage to manage it,
feeling souls sorry for her.

She is not there anymore
now that you're gone again to end it,
the poor boy she left broken unreachable again
so now she’ll move on wanting to find a new target,

By our Antimony, runandhide reviewed by embe,
lovely in this scenery below -
Simply Positive Review.

 Invalid Item Open in new Window.
This item number is not valid.
#2032479 by Not Available.


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Review of Toymaker  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the toy maker
in this glistening world of silver rain,
willows pirouette all night and day
with that stardust paintbrush.

As the night shines energy
power to hold the light,
residing behind me
with open eyes.

In the galaxies
of the purple sky,
in the space of time
utopia existing outside.

By dear Doormandan
reviewed by embe here,
in those sparkling images.

Simply Positive Review.
 Something In the Woods (PART 1) Open in new Window. (18+)
The story is finally done! Enjoy!
#2032016 by TheGrunt_Ryan Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time an ode to dissociation
she is a vision I speak into existence,
within the old glass house I live
where she cleans a window.

Introducing transparency
or forgetting it belongs to me,
when I stumble over these words
shattering things that protect me most.

By our fine poet of note, Katethepoet
reviewed by embe in this scene -
Simply Positive Review.

 An Ode to Dissociation : She Open in new Window. (E)
This is a poem a wrote that is intended to be pretty personal.
#2032207 by KateThePoet Author IconMail Icon


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Review of A man unknown  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time a man unknown
bewildered by ignorance to be known,
discernment may be bewildered
like an old man's hand.

For I am sad and lonely
dreaming the horror of tomorrow,
this deathly feeling of being ignored
the dying thought that may never leave.

By our fine poet here, Ignatius Reilly.
Reviewed by embe in this scene -
Simply Positive Review.

 A man unknown Open in new Window. (E)
Jail time for all
#2030675 by Ignatius Reilly Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
In this moment in time the Doctor was here
he would destroy Earth there and then,
this planet has come to its end
let this lesson be given.

He refused to change
destroying the ship long after him,
they would never have a third chance
the black hole of death will not be enough.

By our fine poet of note being Kirby,
reviewed by embe in this scene -
Simply Positive Review.
 The Doctor Was Here Open in new Window. (ASR)
Nero survived again...but not for long.
#1745163 by Kirby Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Hourglass  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
In the hourglass of time
the sand trickles,
along so fast
in our lives.
Waiting
to live again,
so often we cry
shedding our tears.
Remember your life
hold each grain so close
and who we cherished,
in special moments
every day now,
in this hourglass
for our poet of note
in the review for Sum!
by embe in this scenery.

Simply Positive Review.
 Hourglass Open in new Window. (E)
A Shape Poem. We live our lives day to day; they flow by, like sand through an hourglass.
#1803220 by Sum1 Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
I would if I could,
do it all over
Ohhhh....

If only
for our lives,
so much better
I would do it all over.

lives so much better
being so young,
in a flash
today.

Yes
in a song,
for my mother
brighter tomorrows.

By dear Temagami
a poet of note,
lovely here
by embe..

Simply Positive Review.
 I WOULD IF I COULD Open in new Window. (E)
A Mother looking back at the hurts & struggles over the years for her and her children.
#2032078 by Temagami (Guiding Light) Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Loaded  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time.
Loaded by Jellyfish,
about depression
on earth.

Upon me
so crushing,
weight of the world
crushing my footsteps

By passing strangers
shouting out loud,
like screaming
dying here.

Cool water
for coconuts,
here in heaven
earth disappearing.

By our poet of note
lovely Jellyfish,
in a review
by embe.

Note -
Your other review
three stars a disgrace.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Loaded Open in new Window. (13+)
Freeform poem about depression
#2031804 by Jellyfish Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Despair  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this most sad moment in time
broken within a storm of pain,
by these wounding winds
now lost in pain.

So young to cry
weeping lonely tears,
eyes dimmed in blindness
without your comforting arms.

Caused to carry the weight
these battered, bruised,
in life's casualties
of despair.

by our Vivian
the poet of note,
reviewed by embe
in this scenery below -

Simply Positive Review.

 Despair Open in new Window. (E)
Divorce effects a child negatively when adults won't be adults.
#548185 by Vivian Author IconMail Icon


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Review of If Only  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time if only
take back, undo, remove it,
revise, rewrite or lose it
to edit or atone

No guarantee
that we will see it,
the better life for you
with this brand new deal.

If only I could change it
the chance for when,
to congratulate
our poet of note.

Elby Wordsmith
reviewed by embe,
with this starry scene
Simply Positive Review.

 If Only Open in new Window. (E)
The past is done the future a blank canvas
#1502748 by Elby Wordsmith Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Crissy,

Sad to see so few entries for February.

Maybe it is because your contest rules are -

"For newly written items only."

I have the same problem because my portfolio is full.

Perhaps you should allow older items edited to suit your rules.

embe in appreciation.
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Review of Winter  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
when I rise from my bed,
I love to eat right every day
downtown at the health club.
Reading to the tiny elves
about those ice fairies,
writing a new poem
whimsical waves.
There all white
this frosty king,
married the queen
our dearest Maryann.
The lovely poet of note
reviewed by embe today,
with these stars shining
 Winter Open in new Window. (E)
Acrostic poem about winter
#1843455 by Maryann Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in Ireland
hooves is staring at me,
there in the green grass
nearby the old grey wall.

Holding my breath
as he wants to go,
serious conditioning
I am trying my best.

By our lovely writer
Fenton Bullontino,
reviewed by embe
lovely the scenery.

Simply Positive Review.
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Hooves - a self portrait Open in new Window. (E)
Picture of Me Taken By Me - Artistic Breakthrough, Stunning Beauty
#1065107 by ♥HOOves♥ Author IconMail Icon
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time
as I wander'd all alone,
there with this thought
our America's nature.

Minnesota snowflake
I admired the beauty,
crystalline essence
in the bright sunlight.

By our poet of note
dear lovely Kraken,
reviewed by embe
seeing the scenery.

Simply Positive Review.

 As I Wander'd Lone through Nature Open in new Window. (E)
An original poem in the style of Walt Whitman.
#591761 by Davy Kraken Author IconMail Icon


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a moment in time he is Bile Smog's last of the hopeful,
for he is the only resident to imagine that he could live
to achieve, locating heaven's atmos as the explorer.

The bile smog is for the poor. sixteen year old Glint
in a place where a child's aspirations go to die,
abandoning the bile smog in a cloud.

By our fine writer in space
being our santocorey,
reviewed by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
 the lowest of the atmos Open in new Window. (13+)
Glint Blindside, a mirror adaptable wielding 16 year old boy from bile smog dares to dream
#2029103 by santocorey Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Enough Rizal!  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time at the funeral
you gave us your heart, body and soul,
enough Rizal, enough! rest now in serenity.

Your dreams in this lovely land we appreciate
carve in our hearts and soul forever now,
brightened up our hearts to dwell.

By our poet of note, Mage Gervic
reviewed lovely by embe here..
Simply Positive Review.

 
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Enough Rizal! Open in new Window. (E)
A poem dedicated to our national hero, Dr. Jose P. Rizal
#1771493 by GERVIC Author IconMail Icon


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Review of Without You  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time without you
I dreamed I miss you in my life,
the inspiration now needed
from a true friend of mine.

Angels in my ear
lovely Audria_k,
your contest
in kindness.

Lovely there
for our members,
smiling and singing
delighted when winning.

Reviewed by embe now
in a Simply Positive Review.

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Without You Open in new Window. (E)
I hear you in the wind.
#1971465 by Angels in my Ear Author IconMail Icon


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Review of fit  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
things' in life "fit together,
synchronized information
watching like a scientist,
looking into the brain cells
beneath the white blanket.

When first i found a smile
lips twisted in this curve,
cupping my butt as i lay
my thoughts bubble-up,
if my mouth opens up
to review our Christo.

The fine poet of note
by embe, a lovely poem
in my Rising Star Review.

 fit Open in new Window. (E)
an attempt to portray how 'things' in life "fit tiogether"... a work in progress...
#1858015 by christo Author IconMail Icon


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Review of The Past Inspires  Open in new Window.
Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time
the past inspires me,
when I look back
to my ancestors.

In family's life
praying each day,
there on my knees
these fine treasures.

A wondrous thought
there in her soul,
for my child
smiling.

Singing
her hymns,
tilling the land
taming the forest.

Reviewed by embe
lovely this scene,
our poet of note
Jeanne Riggs.

Rising Star Review.
 The Past Inspires Open in new Window. (E)
Appreciation and encouragement of seeking ancestry.
#1413068 by Jeanne Riggs Workman Author IconMail Icon


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