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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
for you to get it right
Christ is beside you,

no longer the drifter
but now Peterson
our fine Christian,

and poet of note
Matthew 5:13
the bird's tail.

Reviewed by embe
in the salt of the earth
being a children sermon,

for God so loved his son
the gospel is the difference
with a simply positive review.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
L two five nine in time
for the bridge of decay,
have you reached it yet
storms of wood splinters
above an endless gap.
Ticket to the horizon
for embe to review,
lovely this poem
by our poet of note.
To be a super star
with your every step,
here on writing.com.
Simply Positive Review
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In a lovely moment in time
looking through the window,
I see a beautiful pregnant girl
with her new baby on the way.

But today I talk of our dreams
you created living in the dark,
where I found you weeping
having ruined your life.

Today is our new day
time to come home again,
no more tears or sad days
for our poet of note Aundria.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of FOR RENT  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In that moment in time
my thoughts may be funny,
so now this house is empty
with words printed on the sign,
by Whitemorn our poet of note
dramatic poem of self defense.

I could hear the sirens coming
so I shot skinny in that ankle,
now you won't be running far
embe to review the scene,
the evidence was sound
simply positive review.

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Review of Forgotten  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In her sad moment it time
her body bowed with age,
through her muddled mind
her wrinkled, sunken face.

Until one day she believes
while the world continues,
the misty memories tiptoe
begging there for her return.

Vivian our lovely poet of note
her face so lovely in illusion,
evokes vague recollections
she refuses to recognize.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of My Words, My Way  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time
the music in my mind,
by our Meshellmybell
a musical poet of note.

My words, my way
with a song i sing,
for embe to review
lovely the scenery.

Art and thoughts
to which i dance,
like a ballerina
i twirl, i prance.

This night away
i'm in total bliss,
my words of love
in lips I must kiss.

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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In a serious moment in time
I don't want my children to die
from the man who loves his gun,
his face he hides behind a mask
who is he to take that life away?

Dear God, I am so scared today
by our desperate poet of note
weeping tears for the child,
the innocent bystander
please protect her life?

So this is a new ruling
he does not know wrong,
she is in the wrong place
with lying eyes as evidence,
denied by embe for the child.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
For my Countrymom
weeping souls sorrow
in her sad poem today,

we pray for her healing
God with his mercy
words of comfort.

"Peace my child
on this lovely day
no more tears to cry,

alone when you pray
I will hold you near
with your son.

For a new life
learning to let go
trusting in my grace,

with a prayer candle
to see a new life
home at last."

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Review of Tunnels  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
the tunnels of life,
into my memory
they weave
as I leave.
I'm am bereft
in my emptiness,
by embe in a review
for dear Poppy Moss.

Our fine poet of note
tunnels of memory
bring you to me,
a dark space
and despair
of emptiness.
Replaced today
with loving words.
Rising Star Review


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Review of If Trees Are Gone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
to honor our poet of note,
Gervic with a lovely poem
all about the trees are gone,
in my poem attached by embe.


Is this magical realism trees hiding in my mind

walking and talking to me on the television news,

too afraid to wonder why a tree would listen to me

and tell their sad story in this poem of shame today.

The lawyer signing a new contract for deforestation

with a million dollar bribe for the logging company,

camped on the river with barges waiting there

wondering why the trees are whispering,

we were born along this river bed

in the depths of the earth.

Slowly rising in the morning sun

that appears where man has never been,

listening for the rain splashing down from heaven

until that fatal day when disaster appeared suddenly.

Monstrous mechanical ants rumbling through the land

hacking down our trunks one by one in agony, fast falling

stripping our branches of leaves now scattered in the wind.

To my shame, like puppets in a row floating together out to sea,

on ships sailing to other lands with slicing machines into chipboard,

dry like this merciless heat in the barren desert where nothing grows.

Now all that you can see are the memories of the river weeping,

for skeletons of fish and fowl in the puddles all around me.

Sometimes when the moon shines, I feel the dampness

of the cold night air with frozen moisture on my bark,

crumbling cast into their dying timber, my epitaph

only man knows how to destroy my soul,

the owner of a fragile heart.

I could feel love

pain and compassion

in a row of Coniferous trees.

Saplings rising from the bare ground;

poor shy Magnolia gently crying away

while comforting our little trailing Rubina,

hiding to glance toward sister Silky Camelia,

out west at the new home of California Laurell.

Every morning, he scans pages of new burials

sitting with the hymns of destruction on his lips,

searching to soften my heart once more in illusion,

boundaries of their world keep collapsing in my mind.

O heartless men, I promise to revenge Nature in your trap!


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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
by our 4provinces
for her dear mom.

Rest in peace
with the lord
was revealed.

We will miss you
nevermore to part
here in loving arms.

Remember us all
as we love you
in paradise.

This poem
for a mother
lovely by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
thirty years old now
creation's mystery,
the miracle of life
for dear Bron21.

Here in my room
reviewed by embe
for our poet of note,
in that poem a day
the first place winner.

One suggestion,
place the lovely cup
at the end of the poem.
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of New Beginning  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
the power of magic
by dear Amay5prm,

our fine writer of note
in the new beginning
these familiar sounds.

Of this glorious day
song birds chirping
a quite night adieu,

preparing to retire
with a lovely scene
simply positive review.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time by T. L. Finch
never ever on the train of wealth
stealth and rich I shall not be.
Misstep on a narrow path
reviewed lovely by embe
for our fine poet of note.
At the edge of thunder
I could feel its power
run through the gorge.
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Shed No Tears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this sad moment in time
for our dear poet of note.

Sum1 with Shed No Tears
reviewed by embe so sad,
in this my poem attached.

Practice what you preach never easy for me
anger and weeping in a poem of sorrow,
my mind unable to grasp a lie of the mighty
all powerful without mercy for the innocent,
hiding dying in their lodges, skins - of buffalo
covering a nation enslaved, democracy denied
by the rich and famous, where are they now?

Dead their bones rotting in hell, a fire burning
brightly with evil deeds for mankind the devil,
detailing laws with commas and dots, what for?
The uneducated a sign language, leave us alone,
long time our custom from birth roaming in tribes,
riding our ponies to the hills, our children laughing
whooping ancient games of old, now starving thin.

The fields filled with memories, dancing a trance
a mind to madness consumed we are drunkards,
their booze poisoned dark to die lonely in a hole,
locked away beautiful in our minds earth our hero,
fields in words of mercy on high, seeds of pride
signals proud Red Indians of old, blood so bold
the color of living strangers disguised the traitors.

Our souls sold for two dollars to die, tell us why
eagle in the sky seeing a new horizon on earth,
trinkets and beads sold to tourists on the reserve.
Our custom we preserve hiding our dignity here
in this land, the world calls it – “Freedom Now.”
Where are we in the land of paradise road,
hiding away where you shamed our heritage?

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Review of Shaman's Trance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
at the top of your page,
it's bare without a word
until I scrolled down.

Reading this poem
by Perhaps to say,
Shaman's Trance.

Reviewed by embe
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Review by embe Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
when the D-Day came,
for the music in my mind
of the rhythm with the piano.

Embe appeared with a review
for our lovely writer of note,
passed good comments
for a fine performance.

The result was out
Idylle by Edward Elgar,
she bade me good bye
my simply positive review.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In a sad moment in time
for this broken heart,
sweet child of mine
there is no cure.

Mommy crying
her heart is broken,
who will save my child
I cannot endure the pain.

embe praying the prayer
Jesus Christ our Lord,
and God the father
the holy trinity,

child of mine
living in heaven,
Mommy loves you
she is my poet of note.

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Review of "It's a Girl".  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time for the drifter
i's a girl by his only daughter.
Peterson the kind father
our dear Christian
reviewing embe
in appreciation here.
The awkward sentences
have been edited as suggested,
may God bless you and your family.

Simply Positive Review
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Review of Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Alice Cheng that is me
dwelling in solitude,
critiques are welcome
to wake me up new.

I've put on this mask
for embe to review,
always haunting me
that disappearance,

in the glittering mask
they all are me now,
lovely in this scenery
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Postage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
sadness of being alone
in a military relationship,

distant my table for one
writing this note today
the months are nothing.

Wondering where you are
drinking my morning coffee
by Brooke her bethepoem,

being the writer of note
for embe to review today.
Simply Positive Review.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a moment in time when love is not a thought
thinking through love becomes the whole psyche,

only then is love born in our world by ccronkite
our fine writer of note for embe to review lovely.

As far as explanation of love may be concerned
my words will reflect this simply positive review.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
In a wise moment in time
location through invocation
there in words of that song,

by our dear Songofsolomon
the fine writer of note today
for her blessed savior Jesus.

Christ to be our Lord of all
verses speaking to God
by embe in this review.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Winter Woes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
In a long ago moment in time
since November 1,2012,
now a new moment
for our dear Linda.
A poet of note
with Winter Woes,
deep chill fills the air
while watching the snow,
a sense of excitement
for embe in a review.
There in the morning
with daylight now fading
this simply positive review.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time travelling the world
I love the feeling of standing on mountains
spending balmy nights listening to stories.

By our writer of note N. Bukczevnikova
at home and realize how lonely I am
when not having a clock that works,

in time for a lovely scenery by embe
visiting that beautiful Greek island
for this simply positive review.
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