In a moment in time by T. L. Finch
never ever on the train of wealth
stealth and rich I shall not be.
Misstep on a narrow path
reviewed lovely by embe
for our fine poet of note.
At the edge of thunder
I could feel its power
run through the gorge.
Simply Positive Review.
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In this sad moment in time
for our dear poet of note.
Sum1 with Shed No Tears
reviewed by embe so sad,
in this my poem attached.
Practice what you preach never easy for me
anger and weeping in a poem of sorrow,
my mind unable to grasp a lie of the mighty
all powerful without mercy for the innocent,
hiding dying in their lodges, skins - of buffalo
covering a nation enslaved, democracy denied
by the rich and famous, where are they now?
Dead their bones rotting in hell, a fire burning
brightly with evil deeds for mankind the devil,
detailing laws with commas and dots, what for?
The uneducated a sign language, leave us alone,
long time our custom from birth roaming in tribes,
riding our ponies to the hills, our children laughing
whooping ancient games of old, now starving thin.
The fields filled with memories, dancing a trance
a mind to madness consumed we are drunkards,
their booze poisoned dark to die lonely in a hole,
locked away beautiful in our minds earth our hero,
fields in words of mercy on high, seeds of pride
signals proud Red Indians of old, blood so bold
the color of living strangers disguised the traitors.
Our souls sold for two dollars to die, tell us why
eagle in the sky seeing a new horizon on earth,
trinkets and beads sold to tourists on the reserve.
Our custom we preserve hiding our dignity here
in this land, the world calls it – “Freedom Now.”
Where are we in the land of paradise road,
hiding away where you shamed our heritage?
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In this moment in time for the drifter
i's a girl by his only daughter.
Peterson the kind father
our dear Christian
reviewing embe
in appreciation here.
The awkward sentences
have been edited as suggested,
may God bless you and your family.
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In a long ago moment in time
since November 1,2012,
now a new moment
for our dear Linda.
A poet of note
with Winter Woes,
deep chill fills the air
while watching the snow,
a sense of excitement
for embe in a review.
There in the morning
with daylight now fading
this simply positive review.
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In this moment in time
the newsletter this week.
"Spiritual Power of Parables"
Your comments by our author
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the blessing for Christians,
embe in this my poem
attached with faith.
"This Heart In Silence"
Silent dreams in my prayers
The price you need to pay
Is more than crying alone
My heart an empty space
But still with love in me
I will wake life anew
The world is waiting
For my answers here
This heart in silence
Praying on my knees
Holy Christ my Savior
With this new message
Don’t hide from yourself
Something has died inside
That road that leads to pain
Love is forever a friend in time
Experience replaces the lies
As the Holy Spirit lives in you
Believing in the scriptures
With this divine blessing
Jesus our fine example
Nailed to that cross
With non – Christians
Hearts that won’t listen
Believing a life in Heaven
By pursuing God’s blessing
Like Martin Luther saying
I began this reformation
Not for those preachers
Confusing the scriptures
When dancing in a trance
Replacing biblical knowledge
Painful when it corrects them
Why not pray a prayer for them
Joyous voices of angels holding hands.
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In a moment in time
they are all judged
to declare insanity,
regarding society
so dangerous
if sued today.
By embe
in the scene
for yin apurada
our poet of note.
I had been there
my hands are clean,
they were all cussed
something in the past.
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Long ago in a moment in time
created: December 6th, 2010
by our dear Mara ♣ McBain.
The fabulous writer of note
with so many ribbons
pasted on page,
for a winner
of many contests.
I can honestly say
I am a published author
for embe with this review.
"Dear Me" letter and write me
this lovely simply positive review.
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In a moment of confusion peeping with an eye
it was then I heard the knock on the door,
my entire line of vision through darkness
a human bloodshot eye glaring at me.
Flickering light that illuminates
casting light on the corridor,
by our fine writer of note
Stephen Thom.
Reviewed by embe here
your excellent descriptions
of the characters in your mind,
the eye searching in the peephole
my vision being Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment of remembrance
when freedom was for all
and people were social
admiring the world
with our science
this first flight
flying into a sky
below the clouds
by pilot Re-laxing
our fine poet of note
with memories that day
by embe seeing this scene -
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