In this moment in time
the music in my mind
lies deep in my soul
for troubled Chopin,
in this poem review
for Feather Duster
our poet of note.
Holy this blessed birth on mother earth
our concert pianist - composer supreme
in this sound on the vast ocean’s of life,
his soul dances the music in his mind
lips hot with blood-beats of songs.
Singing sounds magnetic strings.
thunder from the orchestra
piercing men’s souls,
as with swords
dying alone.
Chopin
studying
experiments,
epoch in history
equal to Beethoven,
lying deaf in his grave
leaving lessons behind –
"There the path lies ahead
how brilliant its course will be
even seen in deep dark misery.
The frail weak body of a genius
no escape from lung disease,
in disgrace the unbeliever
as this rebellious soul.”
“Even if I knew him
in my exertions
I will pray
remembering,
this day to change
you are my only refuse.
Rays of divine light living anew
streaming visible from my Savior.
I Chopin, bow before God almighty
heavenly consecration in his arms.”
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for michaelanthony to read below
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Systematically taking on days
My vision much clearer now
Through this hazy view
The reality plays
Here in Los Angeles
Hollywood sidewalks
Terrified and screaming
In this insanity phase
Metaphorical blade
Cold on the skin
Truly without end
That never began
Could be this price
For commitment of sins
Still flashing those grins
Committed and acquitted
My mind racing in notions
Never tamed like the waves
In these mighty oceans
Rather call it a potion
Never moving forward
But always in this motion
Gone beyond recognition
With no cures to be found
Outside of true religion
Lying in bed to learn
And love the mission
Maybe that's true
What is missing?
If there’s no bait
No point in fishing.
The ghosts of smiles
Is that what we're dishing?
Talked but nobody listening
Empty words etched in chalk.
When it's all said and done
I think I'll go for a walk.
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In a moment in time to cry
the dawning of another day
by our writer of note on a page,
so sad Alicem in the snapshots
as she lay there that terrible night.
Despair in the darkest of places
in the corner I trace the cracks,
for embe weeping the scene
trapped in these pages
the slideshow starts.
In this new moment
a beautiful world
the sun rising
dancing dreams.
Escaped the past
tears on my cheeks,
glinting through the trees
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In a moment in time
why only so few stars,
weeping sadly on a page
for dear hopeless utopian,
saved today with a review
by embe in blossom time.
The lilacs pale and sweet
echoing the silence now,
look down deep below
the water’s sparkle,
new stars I found
shining brightly.
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Shakespeare in the shadows
like our Hopeless Utopian
crying why am I alone now,
five years without a partner
reading this farewell note,
a lousy writer in my mind
trying to make excuses.
Oh blessed art thou
waiting our union,
a precious gem
succession
for a queen,
to marry me now
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In this moment in time
the need of philosophy,
that will disturb the Soul
by our poet of note today,
Kristina in the meaning
of this new fine poem,
which one will win
wolf evil and ugly?
Or one beautiful
best for mankind
in a review by embe;
answers lie deep within
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In a moment in time with the latte
for our justanotherpoethero
reviewed by embe lovely,
the scene for saying
for a poet of note,
coffee to go
with this fiver,
keep the change
with your currency,
in cannot be changed
as she cocked her head to say,
it must be a simply positive review.
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In that moment in time
your poem from long ago,
peace in nature by shautsi
our poet of note by embe.
I trust all is well with you
maybe a new poem
lovely from you.
Nature’s embrace
my memory recalls
all about the rapture,
is the near and now
heaven’s pearly gates.
There in the morning
in the age old haven,
silently searching
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In a moment in time
without my prayers
to guide my life,
this new day
the Savior
saved me
from myself.
My soul in hell
that fire burning
away my denials,
seeing the scene
that brilliant smile.
Reviewed by embe
for our ladyabstract,
the fine poet of note
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In this moment in time
Jaimesen our poet of note
lovely so slim on the stage,
playing piano music for me
ending in a wondrous dream
tranquil feeling of peacefulness.
Circles around these lonely stones
in waves of memories I sink alone,
lost myself in something so deep
my heart feels sad to weep,
this fine review by embe.
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In a moment in time
am I addicted to review
our fine poet of note today,
with the vision of being
this new novelmethod.
Seen in the Universe
by embe in hiding
barefoot children
in sunlight.
Dancing
their dreams
in cosmic fountains
hidden in moon dust.
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In a moment in time
Sandip Das maybe
sand in the dust,
don't die easily
a writer of note
in the encounter,
this super review
lovely to read today.
embe in the scene
hovering in a mind
lazy winter afternoon,
waking with a thought
covered by the curtain
in stillness of this soul.
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In a moment in time
in the beginning,
not winning
this test
by our Sherri
for a friendship.
Why should I write it?
A point you'll miss
when it is due
in paranoia,
the problem
belonging to you.
Embe in the moment
I give you my heart
for a poet of note.
God bless you,
your health
and happiness,
by Jesus your Savior.
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the sorry lady sits alone,
a bay window by the door
her daydreaming this day,
alone and without worry
her words copied here,
by embe in this review
for our poet of note.
Timothy Sweden.
lost in the war
six years ago,
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and await a special guest,
to our poet of note, Magoo
a writer of children stories,
being reviewed by embe
knowing this writer of note.
To be the best that I know
with cookies warmly baked,
jelly doughnuts on the side
that stuffed that chubby face,
the night will soon be here
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