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Review of Nightfall  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a moment in time
too late to come home,
the night after I lost my job
teardrops shatter like glass
through my bedroom window.
embe reading me this review
lovely our poet of note today.
Fallen Dreams is how I felt
moon cuts like the razor,
and the sun is setting
the new moment now -
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of I See The Light  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Shi Shad from a memory
by embe in a poem review-
Larry from Turnberry street,
so wise and kind the friend
sharing words of wonder.
How to be a poet of note
sharing with others
at the campfire -
I see the light
In total darkness
sinking to my knees,
Wait for me! Wait for me!
Rising Star Review.
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Review of Should I?  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a moment for the first time
Akira loves to write lovely,
the poem to decide
should I?

My decision today
yes for embe to review,
feeling good on this page
depending on emotions,

my decision for our poet
a writer with a future,
soon a poet
of note!

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Sands of Time  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
object is sand,
you may not use
for ordinary things
like embe.

I cup my hand
trying to squeeze it,
the note on paper
for our poet of note,
Legerdemain.

Reading it in time
in this sunlight
a moment for this -
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Opera Star  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To my River McKenna
the lover of fine music -

My attached poem
as a review for you,
for the -" Opera Star"

To wake in dreams music to my soul

with such a pleasure to spend a time,

within theater of rhythm and rhyme

the Maestro scribbling on his script,


carried away by the words of wonder

longing sorrows do his words portend,

verse brings joy and wonder in the end

the Conductor bowing waves his baton.


Turning to the ovation he deftly bends

O for a song to sing lyrics to the moon,

to hide from souls sorrows crying away

shame of thoughts this fear to be lost,


with dreary songs playing in my mind

scared to dream but scored in thought,

music abandoned despair in solitude

fast fading away into silence of dying.


Having played new music for my soul

my baton directing in this orchestra,

melodies joyous the opera waiting

for tenors singing wondrous words,


measured alive their spirit of song

binding together invisible threads,

the human minds relating to time

my music if you are deaf like me.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Tomorrow  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Mindertwenty on my mind
the pseudonym jpizzicar
reaching for the stars,
our poet of note
for the taking.

The future is mine
to know the initiative,
this new review by embe
welcome to your new home.

Writing.com members
blessed may it be,
lovely in support
on this page -

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wordeematilda
of universal wisdom ,
our new poet of note today
writing a warm cosmic wind,
swallowed by my answer -

Welcome to writing.com
your lovely new home
brightly on this page,
with stars shining
this scenery -

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of I Use To Be  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
I need to review
Erika Cornett,
by embe now
this is a poem
through the years.
Spent in foster care
by our poet of note
who loves music.
The girl she use to be
people around her,
she never cried
reading lovely
these three words -
Simply Positive Review.

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Review of Amendments  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
In a moment in time
my corridor of life,
portraits of him
my husband -

Aldous in Serbia
for his pacemaker,
needs my attention
empty bottle of port.

What fore his dying
in the garden green,
reading this review
by embe in sympathy,

for Huntermartin
our writer of note,
so sad a tale today -
Simply Positive Review.

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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
YellowRose in a moment of goodbye;
the steam train through the valley
kept on the same track.
I won't believe
I lost you
being sick again.
embe now concerned
goodbye to our tomorrows,
no never when I pray for your healing.

Simply Positive Review,
for YellowRose so lovely.

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Review of I Like Trees  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
G.B. Williams the Mayor of note,
now the famous poet planting trees,
they remind me of the frailness of people
by embe in this review to share with you,
the trees in my mind our family –

Is this magical realism
hiding trees in my mind,
walking and talking to me
in a language I do not know;
lying here in my padded cell
too afraid to wonder why,
a tree would listen to me
and tell a story in a poem.

Bishop Pine, you are requested
to invite the Japanese Cedar
and the Chinese Weeping Willow,
to dine with the American Sycamore
at the home of California Laurel,
out west where Western Catalpa
is dancing with Silky Camelia,
the second sister of Hackberry.

A lawyer signing a new contract
scheming a deal with Black Oak
and his wife, Snowdrop Tree,
the petrified cousin of Black Locust
hiding from Toona and Chusan Palm,
near Sycamore and a Mountain Gum
in the way of the invitation parade
along Grey Birch and Hop Tree.

The red crossing where Silver Lime
will form a line of Coniferous Trees,
that will confuse the crowd to panic
and bump into White Ash. Her friend
poor shy Magnolia gentle crying away,
while comforting little trailing Rubina
now in the way of the crowded crowd,
trying to see who will lead the parade.

Am I blind to a light shining brightly
where I see eyes staring down at me,
a sapling rising from the bare ground
waiting to see the new grand parade;
when spring time trees arrive in time
for a baby shower and presents free.

Simply Positive Review
for G, B. Williams,
our poet of note!

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Review of Reflect  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Steam_boat23
the rhythm of the sea
by our new poet on a page,
all we ever wanted to know
to dear God we often pray
memories of the past,
that flew by so fast
the truth we read
for embe to review,
salvation day today
listening to holy music
reflecting Sunday evening,
the welcome to our poet, Will.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of WHERE DRAGONS FLY  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
embe wondering
where have you
been,

my dear Maria Mize
from long ago
your reviews
so lovely.

My turn for a review
where Dragons fly
over Timbuktu
so lovely,

What woos the gears
and cues the cone
calms my mind
seeing you,

our fine poet of note
with nonsense
whimsical
laughter.

Rising Star Review.
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Review of Power Stems  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
the glory of flowers,
in a flowering fest
by our Dannigan.

A fine poet of note
within a countryside,
past castles we ride
recapturing the past,

the site of Floriade
Venlo and Holland,
with embe to dream
the wonderful scenery.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Candle-man  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Noel do they sing to a king
drip drip and the wax falls
on this pauper's crown,
heavy on your brow
disguised david
the king.
How does it feel
carrying this world
in the poem by Noelle,
our lovely writer of note
do you see her Noellejulia?

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of Broken  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
Fito crucified my lord
broken with thoughts,

pierced in a memory
there you go O' KING!
I grinned, O' so happily.

Then the earth shook
my mind could see
tears from his eyes -

"I died for your soul
come sit beside me
rising anew my child,

confessing your sins
with embe in Church
baptised a Christian."

Note -
Although this poem
may offend readers,
it confirms the truth -
"Jesus is our Savior."

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of I'm In Love  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a moment in time
confession by Fitocue
the new writer lovely,

to praise Lord Jesus
in a poem it broke me
tore into souls sorrow.

Dragged into this hell
faced with one option
bowing on my knees,

mercy please today
a blessed Christian,
reviewed by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of The Sea  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
the sea calls me from afar,
foamy white caps sparkling blue
in a review lovely for our poet of note.

R J Simpson, Renee for a first name
the mother who belongs to the sea,
singing songs to her dear Mother
when she was a baby girl.

Delighted to dance with Dolphins
in foamy waves onto the shore.
Simply Positive Review
by embe.

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Review of Oh No  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
YellowRose with a photo lovely -

Mickey Sciurus is ready for winter
thinking everything all figured out.

I can’t seem to find my own nuts;
will need the vet in a hurry today -

"If this needle pierces your mind,
smart little fellow will follow soon."

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of Histoy's Lament  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the moment of time in our minds,
hunts remembered, seasons recalled
by Raygunner in the walls of ancient caves.

Signed with pen and ink by our writer of note
a poem about the how history is forgotten;
eyes in the present so blind to the past.

One suggestion, spacing below your last line -
Move - Copyright 2012 futher down the page.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time by Winnie
church ain't what it used to be
cell phone ringing in my ear,
while trying to sing a hymn
I recollect the old tune,
but wait – Oh my!
A sandaled boy
with toes exposed
socks need mending,
seeing my hat and gloves.
"Are you the new poet of note
so kind to sing in our church?"

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Spring Flowers  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the moment in time
spring flowers lovely,
scented so glorious
with gracious care,
by our poet of note
DRHF in the fields.

A sight to behold
alone in France,
living on a farm
the beauty of life,
sodden dried turf
warmth filled hearth!

Rising Star Review,
by embe.
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Review of THE WOUNDED SOUL  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
My review for dear BJ mayes
the welcome to Writing,com;
your poem in capital letters
the nice vision to start with.

But maybe changing soon
to reflect accepted poetry,
small letters needed
to end the sentences.

The Wounded Soul.
No one to turn to
a fine beginning
crying for help.

God hears her plea
broken and shattered,
with the wounded soul
come down to set her free.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe for our BJ Mayes.

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Review of Thru Closed Eyes  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dee Tynes in time
thru closed eyes
seeing nothing,

there's darkness
in this fine poem
reviewed by embe,

for our poet of note
there's peace now
with her Jesus.

No more anger
with hatred
and hostility,

show me the way
to feel your love
in happiness.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Bright lanterns  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Bright lanterns cast a plume of light
with marbles scattered by infants,
lying brightening the new day
an expression of the beauty
by rpandhi our poet of note.

Remove this darkness
replaced by the light
in a review by embe.

The ultimate
in acceptance,
acclaimed here
discovered lovely -

Simply Positive Review.
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