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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello April Dawn.

My sympathy for you
in this kind review,
my poem attached
for abused children.

The cacophonous sound
Of children screaming incoherently
As they stumble and tumble into themselves
Like circus clowns
Flying through the air
Reminds me of where I am.

Born in a poem
On the lips of a song
The desperate urge to hold
A child of my own.

This recurring dream
Festers on in my brain
With excruciating pain
As I see the plight of child abuse
In a world gone mad.

What can I do?
Turn and walk the other way
Like so many others do
Or stay and adopt a child today.

What will you say?
Try and find the parent's.
I have my doubts
They are lost and sad in a world gone mad:

Now we turn to God to pray
That he will change the world today,
Where children can laugh and play
And not be hurt in any way;

Come? I invite you;
Be part of the solution.
By the power of the pen
Let’s unite and write,

Exposing this cancer
That grows all over the world,
Destroying the legacy of our children
For future generations to come.

Dare we ignore this call?
At our peril I would say.
Donate your dollars today,
The best gift for Christmas
In Sympathy for Abused Children.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of Falling Apart  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
AhoySari from long ago
my new review for you,
from embe.

Falling Apart a delight
to read out loud
Don't go...

You are a poet of note
lovely to read
at night,

emotions run free
out of place
all alone.

Turn my heart to stone
tears down my face
they scream -

Simply Positive Review
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Review of The Unburdening  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
a pen in my hand,
I'm truly free
to review
lovely for you,
our MadamButterfly.

Seen in frosted glass
the leaves green,
in a garden
scene
hard to find,
in the moment
this hidden pathway.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time
long ago the approaching storm,
an old man stares out of his hospital window.
Iggyg85 the poet of note on a page of lonely thoughts,
he contemplates Plato's words knowing death the end of war.
Time to pray as he reaches forward to take the man to Heaven's door.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.

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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In a moment on the stage of life
singing a sad refrain by Countrymom.
I burned that bridge 'cause I couldn't stay
forgive and forget comes to my mind,
by embe in my sad review today.

Tomorrow the new day now
for our dear Countrymom,
so happy in her faithfulness
believing in the dear Savior,
to save her the writer of note.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The road not taken today
leads to hell and damnation,
seen by Tim Chiu our poet of note
requiring faith shared in daily prayers,
offering innocence for the unbelievers
God's glorious and righteous plan,
faith the answer on your knees
Christ died for me in tears.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Venus Transit  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
In a moment in space
Venus Transit our latitude
shuttered by the clouds,
pulled by the tides at night
sunset was passing
shadows hiding that way
seeing our ridinghood,
the lovely poet of note today
reviewed by embe
for the next Venus Transit
Simply Positive Review.

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Review of Life  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To write about the meaning of life
you need to read AmyIsabella
the perfect writer of note
about faith in God
for the lonely
in tears
miserable
what is missing
we are all incomplete
time to bow the knee in prayer
causing the new meaning of life

Simply Positive Review,
by embe in appreciation
your kind review for me.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Time to welcome Adam in a poem
reviewed by embe........enjoy
in the light of moon,
with the stars
shining
on this page
to be remembered -
By the Light of a Rose...lovely
our new poet of note on this new day,
I leave all the sorrows behind
cracked by the tears of life,
it touches your soul
so softly
I sleep quietly here.
Simply Positive Review
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Review of Nature’s Glow  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Of this auspicious realm
in a moment of time,
deftly witnessed
in every poem
by Tim Chiu.
A master writer
in grace of caring,
worthy sight beholden
in the sun and the moon.
This insatiable charm
the wondrous gift
a godly mosaic,
innocence
in a moment now.
Mother nature here
the miraculous survival

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of Our Harvest Moon!  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
In this moment in time
a love poem so lovely
by Jay so beautiful.
Like a colored bird
beneath the stars
we are young again,
dancing in the night
a new Harvest Moon.
embe in the clouds
writing this review
inspired in thought,
sure to be the winner
Simply Positive Review.
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Seth our song writer of note
causing havoc so lovely in a song,
welcomed to the Poem Benders
by embe to review today -

Picking up pieces of my heart
knowing deep down I did my part -
So I'll hold my head up high
and I'll wait as days go by -
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Absence of Time  
Review by embe
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
her absence not well.
Pat writing about nature
I will return to work soon,
so happy my home,
being reviewed
by embe today.
Congratulations
Quill award winner
a feather in your cap,
our writer of note lovely
my remembrance of you.
Showering Acts of Joy Review.
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Review of Vérité  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
I found my Ladyk,
the poet of note
in Vérité.
Means the truth
by embe long ago
under a moon of ivory,
looking for the sun
peeping down
so lovely.
Bittersweet now
my memory fading
in a moment in time,
with this review
day after day,
remembering
words of kindness.
Simply Positive Review
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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In a moment in time
the mark of desperation,
night is no longer haunting
no matter the scorn and cries,
if earth could reach to heaven
won't the spirit garner peace
hoping to find the answers,
reviewed by embe today
lovely for our Engetsu,
the new poet of note.

Simply Positive Review.
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by Engetsu our poet of note today.
Reviewed by embe lovely
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Review of Why Me?  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jaha the faithful Vindhya
our poet of note,
so supportive
for Sherri's
contest.
Why me
the puzzle,
lovely poem
love and truth
in a certain way.
Sure to be a winner
wait till the fog clears,
we need more entries
by embe not feeling well.
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of I Remember You  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
silent in her bio block,
Helen a poet of note
do you remember me,
memories and pain
have helped me grow.

Understanding now
all your problems,
by embe in my review
lovely the first poem,
many more will follow
Simply Positive Review

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Review of Barely Breathing  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
In a moment in time
to expose the truth
by Nikola.

Our poet of note
describing thoughts
dark in my mind.

About my daughter
her poem of shame
attached as my review.


I sleep the dream
seeing evil in me
waiting no longer
the powder hiding.

Pills in me unfold
the beauty to see
spirits flying high
inviting me home,

my mind confused
a glass in my hand
saluting their wine
poured in darkness.

One sip now forgotten
two too many for me
drowsy drifting there
knowing it to be a lie,

hail me magnificent
hail me dying inside
on the journey home
to meet my destiny.

Hiding away my love
bound and bonded
from the unknown
that cuts too deep,

flying away in the sky
searching for another
like me to die inside
not knowing why.

The desperate plea
of a mother weeping
in fear to scold me
a child screwed up,

dark to dream
lying awake
ashamed
to see,

my family arguing
when and how
my bipolar
the curse they see.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of Cement Floor  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
the clock struck four,
relief unlike before
on the cement floor,

the candles flicker
for embe to review,
lovely a poet of note
no worries and cries,

for the new publisher
jumping for joy today,
Jess dunkelhetstern.
a best selling author.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of A Life To Live  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time
a life to live
there we must go,
with peace
and hope entwined,
just enough
to meet a challenge,
the best
poet Bumblegrum,
contest entry
in Seniors Group,
grant no rest
in a weary world,
our choice
heaven is eternal.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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Review of Nostalgia  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Memories of a broken heart
by our poet of note today,
the painful poem by Snder
wash away these signs,

for a new path back home
like waves of the ocean,
foaming away in daylight
pondering about me.

embe with a kind review
previous thought of life,
silence that reaches out
Simply Positive Review.

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Review of Reasons 2 Explain  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
reasons to explain
what's been done.
I will walk away
to another day
embe to pray,
to find my faith
so sad this life
by Sussie lovely.
Our poet of note
with her life story
no more tears to cry,
yelling and screaming
watching the fighting,
shut the world away
or I will leave today -

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of God Help Me  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment what to say
God help me on her lips,
feelings of helplessness
I know I made mistakes,

in my mind for breathing
trembling was no choice,
this product of delusion
by embe in a kind review,
,
for our lovely poet of note
Yvonne in a new moment,
God told me what to say -
Simply Positive Review.

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Review of Freak Of Nature  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In moments this time
who is right in the fight
to mess up the argument?
Proposely i am inadaquate
remembering days gone by,
figments of my imagination
were never really there.
embe with the review
for our Julia Quinn,
the poet of note
lovely in time -
Simply Positive Review.
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Review of No Light to Shine  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
no light to shine
in the dark.
It swallows life
by poet vanellesad,
pain will come again
into solitude I do go.
embe to review
lovely here
in the new light,
our fine poet of note
to brave the pain,
no tears
to cry all alone -
Simply Positive Review.

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