In a moment of lonely thoughts,
countless times I see death arise
in the bright sunshine rising anew,
the one and only that comforts me
in a poem by a poet of note today.
Zander darvathian the two in one
names, here for embe to review,
bring me to my solitude forever
seeing the violet roses fading,
only the petals beckoning.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In a moment of concern
even God knows that,
the more you love
may you give
in honesty,
and truth
to believe
by Tim Chiu
our poet of note.
Reviewed by embe,
in the lives we touch
for our young children,
the sanctity of innocence.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment of deep despair
by our writer of note, Katy
for her son Bennett,
grief at the door
embraced her.
Waking a thought
she managed a smile,
he's in that better place
and speaking of God's will.
Reviewed by embe now
in sympathy to say,
my condolence
in a prayer
for this vision,
his home in heaven
dancing with the angels,
the greatest moment alive.
Simply Positive Review.
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In the magical moment of believing by a child,
Santa Claus with presents every Christmas Eve,
you need CeruleanSon to explain the reason,
why his son stopped believing in a Santa Claus.
"Well I gave him another hug to love him dearly,
Santa Claus came back to life when I was so ill."
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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If you need to read Poetry & Prose
five stars twinkling on a page,
you need to find our Chapel
with a first name Shannon,
the poet of note lovely.
I'm no Dickinson
I will stick to the rules
for embe to review anyway,
these eight awardicons here
come what may on this new day.
Simply Positive Review.
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Welcome to Anna with her first short fiction story,
reviewed by embe wondering why the 2 stars
lonely on a page for the entry of -
"Blessed"
My suggestion to use paragraphs
creating an even flow of sentences,
easy to read and understand the story.
My rating bases as it is - 3.5 Stars
If edited, please advise and I will re-rate it.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment of sadness
angels let you sleep
in a bed of roses
by Whiskurz.
Our poet of note
the way you were
with your presence,
lovely in the sunshine
for embe with this review.
One suggestion here,
move the ending down
away from Copyright line.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment of today
the path of Eden crying
facing this depravity
that is human nature,
by our poet of note
so wise Xander Craft
reviewed by embe
in this terrible world.
A depressing place
of brazen cruelty
so disgusting
in this madness,
celebrated daily
for embe to hide
weeping my tears
in the deep darkness.
In a moment of importance
the Great Gatsby lies
woman are nothing
but trophies
at the parties,
being the norm
the American dream
became too disillusioned
for our poet of note.
YellowRose
in a red dress
dancing to music,
reviewed by embe
with the gifted ticket
jazz made me happy
in the many speakeasies.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time
life's so ironic,
too difficult
in this struggle.
Love is never perfect
need to pause
for awhile,
and fast-forward
in a review by embe.
For bryandc15
a fine poem
Life is - Life
with a suggestion -
Your layout is lovely
but the spacing
is too far apart,
for some reviewers
in poetry requirements.
Simply Positive Review.
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This is my welcome review
for soulsickboy in a poem,
anarchy don't you cry
for your Gramma,
a lonely woman
at work.
Returning home
only to be all alone,
but God knows why
your heart is now broken
while you to care for Gramma.
One suggestion for your poem -
The layout in shorter sentences,
will improve the image for the reader.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In this sad moment of many tears by embe
for our poet of note the legendary LoneWolf,
with the lonely boy met on the playgrounds
someone in pain looking for understanding.
A frightened child never ever invited him to play
whispering how can I escape this ragged form,
that day however when bad children found me
paraded around broken beaten in a playground.
His last words were the beginning and the end
but she was all right, because of him so special;
the kind friend, a boy she met on the playground.
She was never happy, at least she wasn't alone.
Simply Positive Review.
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To read a Star's Song
by our lovely poet
with kind words
for our Savior,
the baby born
under the stars
shining so bright,
gazing into heaven
these Angels singing -
Peace on earth today
prophecies of old
the joy they bring,
to embe now
in a review
for Carla,
hisangel _07
welcome to WDC
your home forever now.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time
reading in happiness,
KylaJocelyn with a poem
for the call when we believe,
in these stainglass windows
open wide for God's mercy
reviewed lovely by embe.
Pastsoul a poet of note
in awe we stare here
the glorious sight.
Simply Positive Review.
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