In a moment in time
life the curved ball,
is it luck or love
by SamLevin
a fine new poet,
with a new poem
thoughts in my mind.
Named it Lady L now
for embe to review
lovely the scene,
the tornado
blowing a storm,
a new moment here -
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time
for embe to know why,
your three folder items
ID #263524 -
The Big Question
Merry Commercialism
The Eternal Student
Two and a half lonely stars
rated by a fool without a thought
or a meaningful comment to improve.
My appreciation for a professional writer,
may God bless you with many more articles.
Simply Positive Review with my star rating today.
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In a moment in time
dear AlternativeLife,
the teenager
named Sky
a writer of note,
this is my story here
every school has a group.
Dream boys and new girls
are assholes to everyone,
must we must accept it
in this review by embe.
Been there in the scene
this sad moment in time.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time
blinded to find the light,
there is darkness everywhere.
I cannot look without seeing me
embe to review our writer of note,
pen name for a robo twenty two.
"I never used to walk anywhere
resentment and sadness
that will crush me now,
until I find the light
and reach the ending
in the stars awarded here,
I have forced myself to believe."
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time
the fairy tale poem
by Elizjohn.
True Faces fiction
the tooth fairy in fury,
her eyes flashing
wide in shock,
misshapen
shaking fingers.
"I said I was pretty
bared her teeth to me."
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In the shadow of a claw
the dark tale of woe,
by a poet of note
I read this day,
reviewed by embe
love makes great poetry.
But until forever
I want you to know
never give up poetry,
even with a low review
from one who won't care.
Simply Positive Review.
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There in my mind
beneath my horizon
erasing the rainbow,
the sun setting slowly
in the moment in time
visions and illusions,
by our poet of note
Christina Daltro.
Seek, be proud
in my acceptance
without being alone,
i’ll sleep and awake
in a moment in time
dreaming changes,
never stop writing
embe to review.
Rising Star Review.
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Thankful I am to read Ken's lovely poem
the Chorus reminding embe of my Mom,
passed away earlier this year 2012
peaceful in her bed to rest,
rising to her dear Lord
in a heavenly realm,
her voice with me
everyday.
"Live on my child
writing your poetry
you read to me everyday,
the tears I had for your words
a healing balm over all these years.
Dad is waiting for me to live life anew."
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time with a smile
one of why I hope and dream
the fairy tale ending lovely.
Now I hear the scream
only to take the fall
questioning love.
Putting on a mask
for the blow by blow
knowing it was hurting,
Wendy Zeelie our poet of note
reviewed by embe in the scenery.
Simply Positive Review for a fine poem.
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In a moment in time
is there mercy in justice
no matter what the jury decides?
Lawyers escaped to their very next case
for embe to review a stunning poem by Kerry,
with the media and technology in the room next door.
So I turned to the gallery, looking for a friendly face in time.
Simply Positive Review lovely from our Sherri here in my mind.
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With a new view to reviewing,
I offer these comments in a poem
for Nicki doing Snoopy Dance!
"No Longer"
The title is about emotion
and tender goodbyes,
in solitary footprints
in the sands.
Very well described
no need to edit or rewrite it
waiting for tomorrow’s sunrise.
Rising Star Review,
by embe.
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In a moment in time to question
when not a ray of hope is visible,
read our poet of note, Dr Gupta
the learned one in University,
the brightest pupil writing
when in sustaining faith.
I hear his eternal word
your grace with peace
singing glory hymns.
No death or disease
dwelling in the tombs,
blasted by the bombs
evil the curse of mankind
dying in a new moment in time.
Simply Positive Review by embe.
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