In a moment of madness
the new rock and roll music
in the circus church from hell,
spinning falling on the ground
a preacher slithering like a snake
hearing guitars for a sermon.
No singing hymns allowed
in a sad review by embe,
praise Summer Wind
the truth to freedom
from holy faith,
by our writer of note
Simply Positive Review.
In a moment in time
roses in heaven
by Winnie Kay,
in Mama's arms
born forth a baby girl,
the writer of note
in her dreams
lovely on a page.
In a review by embe
the dream is true,
a gift from God
in all her poems.
Simply Positive Review
Feedback For Rising Stars
by Feather Duster,
a must for us
by embe
as a newbie,
floundering alone
until Gabriella found me
in a review with wise words.
Just like Secretvick today
the feedback needed
to help us improve
our writing.
My delight to say
I have been a sponsor
kind to help new members.
Rising Star Review.
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In a momet in time
the elephant race
on carpet clover,
sprinting away
from Don Two
a writer of note,
so remarkable
along the paths
of many coconuts,
watching the birds
flying from France
in clement weather,
with embe to review
lovely the poem setting
Simply Positive Review.
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To dream of candy hearts and you
I need to launch my river boat
with the pilot McKenna,
in verses so sweet
yet worlds apart
your lovely
writing.
In a review
by embe to dream
the winner with a ribbon
any color will do on the mantle
with roses red for our River McKenna.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment of madness
Kuro Kase joined the military
thinking it would be so much fun,
but it is hardly fair that he should march
falling down taking the lion's share of abuse.
The Major with a batton in his hand angry now
time for farewell I hope you burn in hell at home.
So sad a poem by a fine writer our new newbie here
being reviewed hoping for more of your poems tomorrow.
Simply Positive Review.
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In this moment with time
I feel it flowing through me,
bipolar the problem maybe
described painful memories,
similar to break away crying
in the poem - Empty - by Ria
our poet of note on a page,
fear is coming to this life
a prisoner locked away.
Simply Positive Review.
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Wendy Zeelie
speaking to God,
the remaining pain
sitting on the cold floor,
with embe in a review here
so lovely by a new poet of note,
opening up the eyes of the reader
something was lost but was gained.
Yes did I know, it was waiting for me
the new friendliness was born today.
One suggestion ''omit it will clear up''
presenting a uniform appearance.
Simply Positive Review.
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Baddest Female in deed a pleasure to review
by embe seeing the scene in my mind
with a little help from my Savior
he was one too on a cross
beaten black and blue
for being a hero
to save us
nowhere now
never ever done
if we pray on our knees
her name is Nion like a light
shining in the hearts of the cruel remarks
that they will see the light of day in heaven soon.
Simply Positive Review.
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Oh! In a moment of sadness
only two items in her portfolio,
Renee Lange from so long ago
a fine poet of note in embe's eyes,
lovely the Black Widow where are you,
maybe waking a dream reading this review,
please stay in contact with a new poem soon,
just like this one above while sitting in darkness.
Simply Positive Review.
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Just in time to be taught
Voirrey moved by injustice,
rubbish for starving children
in filthy hills of making money,
who cares if the live or die today
without a little broken rotten bread.
Scavenged in bags of bones of bits
in a sad review for our poet of note,
the courage to tell the world today
in this Simply Positive Review,
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Thoughts of greed, to be free indeed
the truth, to re-distribute for the starving,
doesn't matter who you are in a poem review,
by embe for Markallenreed, more it's what I say
at least - that's what I'm told the poet in this poem.
Reading this Simply Positve Review with gift points.
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In a moment this time
a picture frame showing
time to hear her alarm clock,
you can do it yes now you can
limited herself to 500 calories
while stepping on the scales,
show ‘em now what you got!
in a poem review by embe,
our malloyd poet of note
lovely the scenery here.
Simply Positive Review.
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In a moment in time
Paris in nineteen forty five,
those years so long ago now
holding hands on the sandy beach,
there near the river with kisses sweet
the aroma of her scent number five in time,
hers was the lovely face he couldn't forget
fuelled by the cigars and whisky in jars,
too late when drunk and busted
an old man dreaming there,
the woman once met
in a poem review
lovely for Yslva,
our new poet
of note.
Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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In a moment in time it was too late to dream
the alluring and irresistible light summoned him
while floating to the doorway so fragile in his mind
blood seeped from the gaping chasm in his head.
She spoke remembered murmuring I hate you
my index finger circled this hole in your head.
Time for embe to review the scenery here
written by Max Griffin the writer of note.
Simply Positive Review by embe,
this stunning story - " In Dreams"
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WhoMe, so sleepy there on the yellow moon
curved on a bed, her wondrous dreams
the queen reviewer for members
struggling on writing.com.
We love you dearly, your inspiration
to write the lines of poerty in our dreams,
seeing you the angel weaving magic words.
God bless you in health and happiness,
may you spend time with your family
we can wait awhile for a time,
Simply Positive Reviews.
embe, in appreciation.
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