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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)

Hello Lolo,
Welcome as the newbie to writing,com.

Please accept my comments for the review below, as a way to impove your poem.
Perhaps something went wrong in your layout that resembled a short story.

Don't ever give up writing because of the low ratings and few stars on the page.
You have the talent and with time and perserverance you will succeed.

embe, been there when I was a newbie.


I looked in your eyes and your beautiful face
I thought it was love at first sightI got to know you
We dated more often you turned out to be the jerk
We fight and fight and our realationship just isn't right
I'm only looking for love not someone to feel the pain
I'm only looking for love not just the pretty face i see
Your personality is all i need to find love in truth
Someone who will really cares with honesty.

Simply Positive Review.
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777
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Just in time a graduate
on a journey of destiny,
a poem by C.J. Grant
the love of mythology,

in mystical islands
with sword and axe,
there a druid waits
near Stonehenge.

Magic of ancestors
the Welsh and Picts,
the Brits walking tall
in this poem review,

for our poet of note
new to writing. com,
stars shining brightly
Simply Positive Review.

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778
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Can't you hear my sobbing heart
in a solitary cottage in the snow
or walking in the old woods
exposed to elements
without a scarf
tingling cold
in a brook
for the poem
by a poet of note
Creek near the stream
flowing with words of wonder
reviewed lovely a scene by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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779
Review of Black Water Mist  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In fear of the horrifying truth
read Corey Walker's poem
the poet of note on a page.
Color of an oil spill today,
this Black Water Mist
so is the tale told,
lungs of its prey
sinking rafts
now drowning.
Eyes of spectators
motionless in water,
for embe to review sadly
crying the fear of blindness.

Simply Positive Review.
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780
Review of RIVER VIEW  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In the memory by the river
sitting beneath the tree,
a view lonely now
for a yellow rose,
do you think of me
the days spent together,
my heart carved on the tree
wondering where you are,
my tears rolling by
without a goodbye.
embe crying this review
for our Yellow Rose,
so sad a tiny poem
praying a prayer of healing.

Simply Positive Review.
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781
Review of The Diary  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of thought
unspoken words in tears,
one pillow soaked in fear
two eyes watered flowing,
three words on a page.

Abuse the curse today
this sad story of the girl,
reviewed with kindness
by embe for dear Ellie,
our fine poet of note,

Simply Positive Review.
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782
Review of The Band  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time
there's plenty to read
by a poet of note today,

sum1swrtiting in music
on the stage a lonely man
his guitar a dreamy melody.

Where the sky, sighs softly
my wait won’t be too long
to this roar of applause,

embe in a lovely review
music in my mind
the final scene.

Simply Positive Review.
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783
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of time
my favorite place
the river flows,
in a poem
a lesson
so clear
that helps,
my problems
solved this day
in a review lovely,
by embe who cares
for a poet of note,
our Zoie Frost
by the bridge
near a tree,
cast in shade
autumn leaves
the magic moment.

Simply Positive Review.
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784
Review of Magic!  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In a moment in time
the door closes,
he stops
twirling around
green laces undone.

The man leaps up
to a tune,
a singing voice
lovely by Lothmorwel
for this review,

the magic wizard
telling this fine tale
to embe,
around a table
reviewing it lovely.

Simply Positive Review.
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785
Review of The Way Of Life  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In a game ancient played in Egypt
its just the way life is by nishabd,
our newbie new with a poem
cultural in wise words,
by a poet lovely
the scene
for embe here,
to review this honestly
knowing you are from far away,
writing wondrous words in english.

Simply Positive Review.
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786
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
To dust the feather in time to sweep
you need spontaneous combustion
rolled down past the garbage dump,

described lovely by our poet of note
this piece is the topic for everyone
reviewed by embe the fine scene,

my eye fell out and rolled away
seeing a reflection of treasure
words of wonder on the horizon.

Secretvick the famous writer
his pages of bold writing -
Rising Star Review by embe.

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787
Review of The Old Pine  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a scene seldom seen
a door carved into a tree,

leads to another world
Stevenson and Tolkien,

poets of note yesterday
creating wisdom words.

Now a new poet of note
a Word Bending Turtle,

Is blossoming brightly
in creative adventures,

a new place to explore
for embe to review lovely.

Rising Star Review.
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788
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of time
to circle a word
new game,
on a blank page,
to start it by clicking
mouse button
for a review,
from embe today
for Peacedtogether,
my thank you
for your review
lovely on my page,
waiting now
your poem
to review by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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789
Review of Lost  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To be lost in a moment of time
some of just waiting..wanting
stuck in a shadow of invisibility,

we need to read this sad poem
by a poet of note Carson Grey
this truth of one who lost us,

the mother a long time ago
in such anger with sadness
the feelings dont disappear.

Simply Positive Review
by embe,
suggesting the lines double spaced.

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790
Review of Just Pictures  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
pictures in my mind
from long ago there,

alone to ponder why
you call me mother
when I left goodbye.

Adoption a new home
where will I find you
my tears of longing,

a dream in my mind
so close to my heart
God in mercy forgiven,

in this poem review
lovely for Kristiana
by embe in sympathy.

Simply Positive Review.
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791
Review of Hidden Darkness  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
a hidden vision there,
in the darkness of night
the faintest glow of light
I have never ever seen,


around me in thought
who where and when
will I receive a review,
this quest for love
that will not part.

embe in a dream
reading your mind,
the light that shines
bright stars on a page
for Brandondreaming -

Simply Positive Review.
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792
Review of Goodbye - poem  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)

Freedom in free form
by KafkaDreams,
lovely for me
embe in a review,
with kindness
for our new poet,
ending there
unwinding in a mind.

I think it's time
to say my goodbye,
so let's break it off
the fool in you,
trying to be me
stringing me along,
I need not ask you why
Simply Positive Review.

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793
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of directions
gotta believe it today,
by a poet of note
ShilpaKapoor
the dawn broke,
the voices inside
your life is a blessing
take my hand to paradise,
the short steps today
tomorrow home,
I told you so
in faith and hope,
pain is just temporary
reviewed lovely by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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794
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Just another ordinary day
Xylch the writer for me
lovely to review
by embe,
thanksgiving day
God has blessed us
the bells in the steeple,
St. Felicity's started to ring
echoeing fading away,
in a couple of hours
for Dad
an ordinary day,
plucking the turkey
basted in a pan in the oven.

Simply Positive Review.
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795
Review of Tempered  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Sheps in a moment of time
the surface settles
glass
dancing on water
the leaves tossed away life
a bottle of glass
cracks
her arm outstretched
clutching her purse with lies
a man without motion
her man swivels
to a door
his cell phone checked
a new life towards the door.

Simply Positive Review
for a fine writer
by embe.
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796
Review of Truth  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment of time
confession of truth
sitting on the floor,
sin faith or love
choices
by aquathena,
our poet of note
reviewed by embe,
lovely the reasoning
choices are made,
this path to take
God in mercy
or marriage,
the final truth
will be exposed.

Simply Positive Review.
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797
Review of Puppeteer  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Anorexia Nervosa the curse within a puppeteer,
who pulls the string to dance a lonely fantacy
unzip, unfold me with your mainipulation,
the imposter the puppeteer there
screaming at Mbollinger,
reviewed lovey
by embe
your bravery,
to expose the hurt inside
for others to share the inner meaning,
within a broken heart now healed in this poem.

Simply Positive Review.
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798
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of time in a town
celebrating with Christmas lights,
bright tiny bulbs reflected off the lake
displayed by our poet of note - Magoo
the true believer in our Savior's grace,
stars twinkling down on this scene
that lit a view of a figurine beautiful,
cameras flashing the lovely sight.

Simply Positive Review,
sure to be a winner.

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799
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time
Drew Augustine in a story
The Fig Tree's Blossom lovely,
for embe to review a writer of note
the fictional tale about letting go of love
until grandmother had spoken the truth,
in a prayer from heaven her new home
one more piece of your wisdom now,
the legend of the fig tree blossom
true love conquers all your fears,
happy now the man I love.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Thank You Daisies  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Who Me, the Jenny that I know
always gifting others thank you
with tiny daises my memory,

lovely her kindness for embe
when I was a newbie confused
trying to write poetry on a page.

Lonely without a review in sight
until she held a pen in my mind
wondrous words flowing there,

my first three stars shining blue
the vision of heaven my prayer
answered to thank her kindly.

Simply Positive Review.
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