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Review of Loss  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment of eight lines
the loss of a gentle friend
through many seasons,
life created changes
for a yellow rose,
time passed by
through the trees,
the wind whispering
she began to see,
the bond would last
there through eternity
in a poem review,
lovely for all to read
the message of love,
new destinies last forever.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe in appreciation.
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902
Review of Immortal Wounds  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Immortal to hide
but only inside
my mind,
flesh wounds
will heal with time,
send me away
I'm not blind,
seeing
my thoughts
of loneliness,
where and who am I
the disguise,
despair I loathe
wounded
a treacherous place,
in a poem review
by embe,
for Zander the poet
a fine write.

Simply Positive Review.
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903
Review of I Am Here  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To write of tears and smiles
as a teen-ager, she tried to listen
yelling to enyone and everyone and all.
Why am I here the little girl in the back room
my mind set as a thought the lady with silver hair,
reading a review for me a poet of note, by embe.

One suggestion maybe?
[ for it might be for just a short while.]

Try -
( for it might be just for a short while)

Simply Positive Review
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904
Review of The End  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
To say the beginning
but maybe the end
in thoughts kind
for stricuckoo
by embe.
My pleasure
to review in a poem
your poem of note lovely
memories of two,
for your love
together
will you marry me
to love and hold forever.

One suggestion -
"Upon my memories of we two"

Maybe try -
"Upon memories the two of us"

Simply Positive Review.
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905
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Could be you or I
maybe the one to die
lying in alley dark,
nowhere else to hide
the broken child.

Memories of beatings,
a drunken father
cursing in madness,
out of my house
no need for your tears.

What must I eat
the cupboard of booze
is all i can see,
mommy has run away
where must I go?

A poem review by embe
walking the streets,
helping the orphan children
from broken homes.

My tribute to Shellybean
the truth must be exposed.

Simply Positive Review.
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906
906
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
To live life as I see it
I need to walk in faith,
letting go of the past
training to be happy,

the boxer in my mind
coached in this way,
believing in my Lord
God will save my soul.

No need to be reckless
the tigerlady now new,
beginning my tomorrow
the sun shining on me.

embe in a poem review,
lovely the honesty of hope
by the writer - Tigerlady.

Simply Positive Review.
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907
907
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To sketch a smile on one's face
you need the artist supreme,
happy or sad the moment
throught your eyes,
the precious gift
to ponder,
suspended in time
charcoal smeared perfectly,
painted touching a parchment
encapsulated the gift in your hands.

A poem review lovely,
by embe for Wookibus.

Simply Positive Review.
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908
908
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
For Noah to survive
is seen in Noa
her faith
to write of sadness
for her dear
Bapcia
the horrors of war
to escape
safely to Paris
then Israel
to be married there
a Jewess
so beautiful
a bride
I miss you so, Noa
in a poem
reviewed
by embe
lovely to read today.

Rising Star Review
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909
Review of Cut the Strings.  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Let's get to it in deed
redefining my life
starting all over
a new beginning
for NayNizzy a poet
cut the strings
from yesterday
time to move on
with a poem review
lovely by embe
to read out loud
with stars to go
shining a light brightly.

Simply Positive Review.
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910
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
To wake a dream
creation in progress,
reading a lovely poem
inspirational for us today.
Prosperous Snow a poet
gifted from above in creation,
seeing a universal light of faith
beloved labor the birth in a manger,
bright the stanzas that glorify his name.

Simply Positive Review
by embe, for our dear N F Darbe.
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911
Review of Blossoms Maligned  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

For Laylao to write a short story,
life can change in an instant at school
for Sarah and Tom, in love at last a proposal
with a golden neckless and a kiss in the passage,
until the screaming begins to hide in the classroom,
is a troubled thought well told with a surprise ending there
for embe to review, the sadness of madness by crazy students.

Simply Positive Review.
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912
Review of My Rock Bottom  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)

A gift from God in kindness
a late rose to bloom again
you need the sun to shine
his mercy when you stray
a voice calling out to you
deep inside your soul -
Why not reach out today
for this new day dawning
to wash away your fears
In a poem review by embe
lovely the write by late rose.

Simply Positive Review.
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913
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The illusion in my mind
going blind,
too far to see my shadow
dancing now,
there spinning around
in a circle.
Where will I be tomorrow
a fragment,
disappearing in a cloud
rising high,
one day I'll fly up to the sky
seeing him,
by his grace, I shall swim
in a poem,
lovely to review by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
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914
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
With a broken heart I read your poem
the need to understand about your son,
avoiding the eyes of your friends in the bus
doing everything he can to postpone the exams.
Thinking what he can do to change the situation
being the friend of all the old men in that ward,
not lonely anymore your kind beautiful son.
My poem review, lovely for you dear Creek.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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915
Review of MY WISH 36 lines  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)

In need of a hug to ease the pain in me
the loss of a loved one so beautiful
would last my whole life long,
if your mercy came through
just for a moment in time
my prayer to you.
God of mercy on my knee
I know you need him with you,
could I simply hold his hand in love
the memories I have in the red velvet box.

Blessing from above
for our Dear Yellow Rose,
the professional reviewer of note.
embe in appreciation, her gift for us.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of My Loss of Floss  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
For your pony to feel the pain
you need a hammer and nails
nailing her touch into your heart,

beating ever faster excruciating
how will you live to die ashamed
in time to pay the consequences,

secured in place to hide away
in a poem review sad by embe
realizing your honesty to write it.

Simply Positive Review.
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917
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)

To salute a Robin
with a ribbon bar
you need to read
a poem supreme.

My delight to review
with words so few
no need for more
your poem perfect,

here in my mind
the journey dark
so contemptible
tendencies occur.

Time now to let go
and learn to grow
finding mercy seat
God in his mercy.

Rising Star Review,
by embe.
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918
Review of Prophecy  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Prophecy by Ken
the scarecrow brown
arms held high standing still,
beyond this place straw's scattered
sad and tattered contemplating
fields lying bare on the earth,
the chill in the air
wet in the rain
beyond horizon's,
we'll meet once more
in a poem review lovely for Ken
by embe in appreciation,
your fine poetry.

Simply Positive Review.
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919
Review of Prophecy  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Prophecy by Ken
the scarecrow brown
arms held high standing still,
beyond this place straw's scattered
sad and tattered contemplating
fields lying bare on the earth,
the chill in the air
wet in the rain
beyond horizon's,
we'll meet once more
in a poem review lovely for Ken
by embe in appreciation,
your fine poetry.

Simply Positive Review.
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920
Review of Time Puzzle  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To be or not be a poet
living on mars,
maria-n
there in time
within a vast expance.
God's universe
to see
his glory there,
even scientists approved
to be saved.
Seeing my life
so new,
no time for puzzles
to confuse
my journey home to him.

A tiny poem review
lovely the write
by maria-n.
embe in appreciation.

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921
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
To go back there again
in wonder of yesterday,
you calling my name
where the castle stood
the sun shining brightly,
in the sacred kingdom
all roads led there now
in a poem so lovely,
by our dear rachie
reviewed by embe,
lovely to read out loud
for the stars shining.

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for entry "My Bad Horn Day" 
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh to be a bull in a barn
with a camera
photos looking strange
those pictures
so sweet, so sublime
staring at me
my daddy helped me
I mooed
but all is forgiven now
say cheese
for a review so lovely
by embe
knowing it to be true
for hooves
a fine poet of note.

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923
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Being the scholar and a gentleman
honoring your commitments,
is truly a gift to review
by Tim Chiu.

Here and always
in kindness for other poets,
my thank you in this review by embe.

Remembering the yesterdays
your inspiration
to guide me.

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924
Review of Brick by Brick  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a world private like me
seaching brick by brick
before it crumbles,

my mind confused
the need to try again
stepping a step in time,

in a garden of roses
yellow the wonder of her
my dear reviewer so supreme.

Yellow Rose in a lovely poem
teaching me give it a try now
if you need to succeed.

Simply Positive Review,
by embe.
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925
Review of The Eternal Flame  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Ruby Princess
Beth is a mama
the eternal flame
brighter than light
in a thousand stars
smiling, twinkling there
with a kiss a heart in flight
the thought of losing you
far too much to bear
shattered, lonely
night and day
in a poem
of healing
lovely for Beth
reviewed by embe.

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