For criticism you need to seek elsewhere
never here in a poem supreme
by a poet of note
in a lovely vision
a dream so true in contemplation
the pleasure of thought by embe to review
so perfect a poem
being pleasured thoughts here
where I sit and dream could it have been me.
Simply Positive Review.
by embe.
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Searching for a pen
i found it in time,
to say thanks
Vincent.
A friend in deed
for a newbie long ago
here now,
my poem review -
Roaming.
Mistrust to manipulate
subtle brute force,
neatly disguised
being layed off
in a world of gain,
the mighty famous
ego-centric liars,
sitting in the drivers seat.
Simply Positive Review.
by embe.
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To be a window
with believing eyes,
you need to see your soul
a lonely heart longing intertwined.
Pondering the future there
the voice to speak
of love to shine,
hearing music
my mind a thought.
Suddenly seperated
since creation..... Reunited
in a poem review,
by embe
lovely for Nathanial C.
Simply Positive Review.
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To dream the autumn equinox
day and night the balance
stars and full moon
a drink to dance
with grace
and feel alive
in the candle light
near the fireplace so warm
now a dream for autumn weather
in a poem review lovely
for dear Nathalya
our poet.
Simply Positive Review.
by embe.
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Nights of black
to sleep beneath the stars,
ten thousand
the seasonal insomnia sign,
a time of year
with sixty mosquito bites,
a warm feeling
roasted marshmallows,
on the fire
having the time of my life,
up at the cottage
found in my notebook,
a poem review
lovely to read by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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For a new start
you need a second chance
if you believe,
praying on your knees
to a Savior.
God who always provides
in his time,
knowing all that you need
is a miracle,
that will surely come true
to heal you
from your kidney ailment.
My prayers
in a poem review for you
your honesty,
to confess your belief
in God,
his mercy ever more
in kindness.
Simply Positive Review.
by embe.
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Becoming one
my life is calm and still
touching life,
there within my writing
this poem,
a review lovely here
for Shiva.
The poet to dream of
when alone,
in the stillness of water
with lillies,
so calming in a dream
bowing low,
below the clouds above.
Simply Positive Review.
by embe.
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Magoo in a world
a beautiful raindrop
left as a flake
by Old Man Winter
what for now
seizing a thought
a new day
with loving friends
not the same
convinced to travel
north to stray
suddenly chilled
with pain
and paid the price
love lost
in a poem review
by embe
for the poet of note
Magoo.
Rising Star Review.
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From a distance your blue eyes becon me
I love you more than anything,
without apology
frightened to speak honestly,
words forever linger on my lips so sweet
a kiss for you,
by night, at first, in honesty
It must be you, tempted me within a dream
will you marry me,
in a poem review so lovely in the chapel there,
embe, the preacher with your vows.
Rising Star Review.
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Oh the love token so sweet to dream
his voice with words of love
in bed for pleasure.
But no, never to marry you
choking on a rusty chain his dismay,
walking away to another affair tomorrow.
Hearing a poem review by embe -
You should be ashamed of yourself.
But soon, someone else
will break your heart to cry your fears,
who will love me now?
Ren, married my best friend.
Simply Positve Review.
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A pleasure to read your poem
maybe short to begin with
but soon I hope to see,
more of you
in a song
or a longer poem to sing,
many more than four stars here.
Perhaps one suggestion -
Let kindness flow within
these desert sands
life so soon ends
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
In a cloud on a rainy day
the rain our tears
tumbling down,
healing now
a weary soul,
longing for forgiveness
to wash away yesterday.
The fear of failure
a new day the sun shining
so brightly on Jae,
the poet of note
to write that we may believe
the rain can heal us,
tears drying away.
In a poem review
lovely for Jae
by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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To sleep and dream
a song,
go to sleep my baby
my Angel,
the lullaby a melody
I love you,
with tears in my eyes
praying
a prayer from heaven.
Alive again
living with my Savior
forever now,
seeing you down below
so beautiful,
your poem on my pillow
my baby,
a hundred years with you
my memories.
A poem review by embe
lovely in my mind
my child.
You are my poet of note,
Cynaemon.
Simply Positive Review.
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To feel the pain when one is gone
a sad refrane in a song
waiting the return
of a loved one
so far away
but maybe now
a prayer to pray every day
please Lord return my hubby soon
my longing arms
waiting with a kiss
and a hug
never ever to let go of him again
in a poem
reviewed by embe
wishing his return soon.
Simply Positive Review.
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O to be Del in Nebraska
seeing his team to wonder why
he never placed a bet in time with a bookie
to see the score at the end of a fabulous win
the dollars ten times more than his pay as you go
to the cheapest store in town to buy a turkey to roast
sharing it with embe who you reviewed a long time ago.
Simply Positive Review.
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Searching for the meaning
traced in my mind
across the waters of time
please read Leeus
the poet to write it so lovely
you're spellbound
falling and reeling for more
of this fine poetry
I'm moonstruck to write it
if you will reply
like embe in a review now.
Simply Positive Review.
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When in doubt
and the need to pray
practice what you preach,
bow your knee and see the lonely
begging alms please on their knees,
but some will say - look the other way
to hide away from seeing the tears in their eyes.
Why should I donate my hard earned ten thousand dollars,
a fancy car and a holiday pad with all the comforts of living my way.
Oh no! I'm having a heart attack, who will come and save me?
No need the fear, I'm the beggar who will pray for you
and spend my last few coins on the phone call, that will save you here.
A poem review for the Angel -
Jaiam with tender words of faith.
Simply Positve Review.
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by embe.
Back in time
my eye to read
a poem by Rhmn.
Time needs to change
or send me back
to read a book,
but no
I changed
my mind enough,
to settle down
and review the poem
that changed my heart
into stars,
seeing what went wrong
to go back
in time,
and set things straight
the poem lovely.
Simply Positive Review.
by embe.
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Walls between us
the poem of hoping
in deed so lonely now,
in my room with a pen
the sadness between us
longing for the answer,
why leaving me here
throught a season
still needing you,
where to now
on my knees
crying away,
in a poem
reviewed
by embe.
Lovely
for Jae,
our newbie
her new poem.
Simply Positive Review.
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My review for you in my poem
so sorry that it may upset you
it has long been on my mind
to write my feelings
of their past
the Native Indians on my mind.
"Democracy - Unplugged"
(Too late to save the brave, buried with woman and child.)
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