I'm leaving you tonight
is a brave write
by pittyful
heart
running
toward the light
in a poem review
to cry again
in the rain
nobody's gain
wincing in pain
by the man a boy
a poet of note
to write it
lovely
without fear
on the other side.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
For a mother to be alone
she needs her daughter
in time to hold her tight
from yesterdays memory
how will I live without him
not knowing what to say
but praying he is safe
in the arms of our Savior
the guiding light in our life
all those wonderful years
as a loving family together.
A poem review
for a loving daughter.
Sophy the faithful daughter.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
From a distance far
beneath the stars
a land of love
I see
the girl
so fair for me
dreaming there
with a smile to stare
is this heaven
a dream
or a shadow
of her smiling
my mind in confusion
echos of the past
where to now
and cry why
this pain in me
seeing her far away.
Simply Positive Review.
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With faith you pray to God
you can carry the load
a lonely girl in a lane
cut deep to bleed
crying why
and who hurt me
with my clothing torn
strapped to a stretcher
the stranger dragging me
praying for me to be healed.
A poem review lovely
for YellowRose
by embe.
Simply Positive Review.
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To feel a magical touch
in a moment of grief
with a tear of fear
you need an Angel
your Mother to hold you
there in her arms
with a prayer to God
to taste his eternal love
her baby born
so beautiful, our Jaya
a poet of note
with love for her Mother
in a poem review
by embe.
Rising Star Review.
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O the curse of man
joined by the police
to see a boy in a bag
without a care to cry why
if only i stopped in time
to save a life today
would it hurt me
or make a difference
to society in time
to heal a lonely soul
and take him home
with love and care
to change his life.
This review in a poem
for my friend White,
a scholar and a gentleman.
Simply Positive Review.
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To walk the trail well worn
traveling on a cloudy day
a fallen log appears
in nature's storm
upon the path
a distant sound
the peaceful place
hidden from city strife
seen through a window
a woodpecker in her nest
the wildflower waving
her cheery face
such beauty
never ever seen
as life passes you by
walking in a forest green
reading a poem review
by an old friend
embe to care
for Magoo.
Rising Star Review.
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To wake a dream
marveling in wonder
at the sun setting there
the morning light to shine
a fallen faery hiding in fault
weeping softly her love away
seeing the land once her home
seeking forgiveness and acceptance
unable to hide away and wake her dream.
Inspiration to review in a poem
lovely this faery poem by Kiyasama.
Simply Posite Review.
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by embe.
To be a soldier
linen up two by two
you need striped pajamas
in a house of toys
no nothing, not even a nod
being all alone
having lost your dear family
that you loved
when entering the dark room
the door closed
magically your spirit now rose
in a poem review.
Simply Positve Review.
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by embe.
To dream of being a paper doll
you need to enjoy the craft
developing it
crafted from a brilliant mind
being WistyOne a writer of note
Bells of elegance
The secret tome, In the beginning
My lifelong friend
in this poem review by embe.
Simply Positve Review.
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To see a ghostly orb
the trick of a wizard's mind
billowing behind a nightgown
awakening me in the dark night
is the illusion in a whimsical poem
bubbling concealing angry phantoms
who wake in a hell-bent bubble next to me
bewildered bewitched fading away to somewhere
in a poem review to wish you well in the contest entry.
Simply Positive Review.
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To fiddle on the floor
in front of the audience
kneeling beneath the mezzanine
is a trick to confuse many a script writer
in a silent scene seldom seen these days
with a view to dissapear with the girl and the ratchet
in rhythm and rhyme dancing away to a musical score
reviewed by embe in a poem for the late night news today.
Simply Positive Review.
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Bright as a sparkling light
the brain of an Einstein
in a child Chiangel,
the writer to say
beware a hole
in your mind,
to blind you
in battle
to say no,
never now
or ever more
will i dread you,
at a funeral gate
to cry away my tears
my loved one in heaven.
Simply Positive Review.
For a teenage genius,
witha mind to blind you.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
O to welcome a newberry
Laura a poet
with a review by embe
lovely to read your poem
of conformity
in time to scale the wall
finding no purpose
or heed the call
with your eyes blazing
to step forward
and fall into line
here you are
for us to ponder why
we are one of them.
Simply Positive Review.
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To the aspiring poet of note
to write a poem
unashamed
to say -
Her plea to God
his kindness to love her today
with ten fingers
and ten toes
despite her fall on her ankle.
Now healed
in time
to praise
and understand him
in words lovely
for me to review by embe.
To see a face in a facebook
you need a friend
in Jesus
with the hope
that he will reply
in words to say he loves you
even there in hell
when you forget
your prayers
and wish again
I gained the whole world
but gave my soul away
too late a facebook friend
in this poem review.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
Destiny in a poem
a reason to read
the poet Khaki
with words
of wonder
where to go
O my master
said the self in me
the path leads to you
the destined goal
a valley there
never to worry
left the voice within
told me a certain thing
all paths go to the same place.
This review in a poem
inspired by Khaki
a poet of note.
Simply Positive Review.
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By embe
A keyverse to tell the truth
in a world of shame
of humble pie
is a sign
of courage
seldom seen
in a world of hopelesness
daring to trust
a stranger
with love given in haste
the deep regret
a sad embrace
confused to question why
will he not return
for me to say
sorry my love?
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
O if only nature could be bottled
to fight the battle against depression
as the moon at day fades away
low down in the sky and wonder why
will it shows the pale blue today
in this cheerless world of daily living
seen from below by Dan Sturn
the poet of note writing in a tick of time
my mood turns okay
seeing the family a buck and a doe
merely in a moment
as the moon slowly fades hiding away
from a poem review.
Simply Positive Review.
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by embe.
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